OK first of all the Mantragan will never be updated, the story to me wasn't that good and could be better so sorry to that 1 reviewer.
Alright so first off, Hiruzen isnt the real hokage, well he is in the eyes the public and is the official leader on paper. So this story is about how he used the image of Hiruzen as a persona to capture the nations and protecting his village. I know not that much but then again great things can come out from simple things so try it out.
"demon or Greater demon or shouting"
'thinking/flashback'
"talking"
"jutsu or jutsu "
"line break"
"}Doton:DoryūTaiga" {Earth Style: Earth Dragon Bomb!}Sarutobi said after he had launched his "Doton:Doryūdan"Earth Style: Great Mud River!}
The blast decimated the enemy shinobi wiping everything, but the stench of burnt flesh and a fairly decent sized pool of red liquid. Sarutobi felt a tug in his gut, adding one more to his already large kill count. He could still see the faces of the unsuspecting, but sometimes they would notice him and have fear and pain being the last thing they felt. He wished the second war would end was tired of the fighting, longing for the peace, he would do anything, and that was what he did.
Taishaku was a normal man, he had a wife and a kid. He wasn't a blood thirsty man who wanted war, though he would fight for his country, after all the Rock was the strongest village in the shinobi world. He was sent to war to fight in the frontlines, in a few days he would be back to come back home a week early and he couldn't wait to surprise his wife and son. That was supposed to happen, but when he was about to come back to the base a man about roughly in the low 40s to 50s came out in anbu style gear and decimated the troop. His last thoughts were about his wife and kid.
Sarutobi kneeled down to the hokage.
"Mission completed" he said no emotion showing.
"We have captured their base and the surrendered'
"Good take your time off for the week" the Nidaime ordered. The aging man stood up going back to his clan house. When he had arrived he saw a letter. He sighed. The letter spoke~The master calls~ then a imperceivable seal *poofs* and chakra in small bursts signified *1400* *hour*. Out of nowhere the letter and seal burns up.
Sarutobi casted a hand signal *Ram* for 2 seconds and he disappeared. He teleported hundreds of miles away~thanks to the seal made a a undoubted genius and stood in a room. The room which was very bland had a boy there. Sarutobi bowed as low as he could and waited.
"come on old man! be careful you might break you back!" He showed no emotion, this was his savior the one who would bring peace...true peace. The boy had a particular
demon inside him specifically the 9 tailed~ Kyuubi as i was called. The Uzumaki woman was just a cover up even though no one even knew.
"come on ji~Ji! please talk to me!."
"ok" Sarutobi said. That was a bad move he could get angry!
"(･｀ｪ´･)つ" Naruto showed that emotion obviously annoyed.