TITLE: The Great Exscape CHAPTER:1

I can hear the cry's around me, the blood is so fresh in the air here. I dont think I can get use to a place like this, Not for all eternity at least. Shouldn't I have gone to heaven, I was alway's loyal to my friends, lived a good life with Hana, Got married and had a little girl. I feel quite bad that she wont grow up knowing her farther.
I would know how dissapointing it is to not know who your farther is until your dam there and adult. Atleast she'll know who I am though. Hana would take care of that for me.
Dam I'll miss my wife. I fell in love with her when I turned 18, I told kiba to ask her if she was intrested and if "yes" then meet me at the Bar on the far east of town at 7.
I know it was pretty childish but what can I say, I was nervous. She met me there and Bam! love at first sight.

Now look at me though, Im in the worst position ever. Im sitting on the ege of a hill carved out of burnt't rock and hardened ashes. My clothes are durty. I'll explain what i'm wearing,
hmmmm, My konoha headware as usual, My black coat with the orange flames sizzling at the tip of the bottom,My Kantana strapped across my back beneath my coat, It's orange Hilt My fishnet shir surrounded by white tshirt cut underneath,
My leg straps of white tape above my sandals and my all black cackey pants. I would look nice if I wasn't this dirty. Im probably not even that dirty it's just maybe my surroundings are getting to me.

What can I say, "IM LITERALY IN HELL."

How you ask?? "SIMPLE"

I died in battle, By the Mizukage. It was fair and square, Not cheating involved, toe-2-toe. It just wasn't my day. Good battle, I nearly 1 but somthing's dont happen as you exspect them to and you end up here! "I Uzumaki Naruto! shal find a way out of this place so help me God!"

I stood up on the edge of the hill looking below me, There were all sort's of people in my viewing. Some looked like they didn't belong down here, and some you can tell had evil sinister minds. Death was everywhere, well not death because you couldn't die here. If was just endless fighting, if someone fell from a blow they could get up and keep going or just stay down calling an end to it.
There was the ocasional demon you saw lurking around snatching a body ever now and then to satisfy it's hunger but they weren't that special. Well not these one's at least.
Guess there aren't many great fiends in the part of the underworld. Well I'll have plenty of time to see some gigantic flesh eating monster's while i'm down here. Not ageing.
Not weathering down. This is the perfect place for me to get stronger.

But 1 things been bugging me. Where is the kyuubi? I havent't seen it at all since i've been here. Something as huge at that beast should have cought my eye if I saw it were walking around. It is a Demon King after all. But I'll let that slip my mind once again. Now about getting out of here! Now if there were demons able to exscape to the living world there must be some kind of of Gates in this place that allowed that to happen and and I was going to find it. I'd better start asking arournd down there I thought. Before My mind knew it my body had already leaped of the cliff and I was soaring through the air,
coat catching the wind and the smell of blood rushed through my nose. I scrunched my face as it brought tears to my eyes, "Not that I was sad". But the smell was just to horrible.

I landed in the crouching position by shooting a small ounce of chakra below my feet before the point of impact. Now let's begin.

As I walked throught the area I felt eyes meet my frame from the darkest shadow to one right beside me, some people staring, some going about their own business. There was no order.
No need for work, Only survival. People did things that were crazy just to satisfy there pure boredom. I can see why, That's the reason Im about to try to get my ass out of here.

After for about a few minutes I saw a demon bout the size of an average man. Not to big, kind of bulky, and his face was simular to a raccoons. The exact type of person that seemed like they would know something. "HOw's it going" I said as I confronted the him. He looked at me as if I was crazy.

"You talking to me human" the racoon said in a vile voice. Sketchy to the ears.

Yes I am. I would like to ask you some very typical questions, I would enjoy it if you would answer them honestly.

He smiLed and began to laugh. Hahaha! just who do you think you are boy, You short of a brain or something. "would you like to die all over again?"

I scowled, are you going to listen to my question or not I said aloud!

He smiled, Sure I'll listen, On 1 condition. you've got to beat the answers out of me human. He leaned of the wall walking to where he stood 10 feet from the front of my face.

Well action already I thought smiling. "Firts Question" I raised my hand. "Are there any portals or gates in the area that can lead me back to the living world?"

He carried a shock exspression on his face looking at me with what seemed like curiousity.

He then charged me out of nowhere ground tumbling beneath him. it was either he was heavy or just pretty damn strong.

The Coon swung at my head as I leaned to the side and could still fill the force of wind as i nearly toppled over. His leg came towards my face for a round house but I quickly dodged jumping back. Not bad I said smileing. He gave me the same reply as he charged again, but this time I took first anitiative buy charging in and once he swung I side stepped getting into his defense and applied and Hard Knee to the middle of his gut. Now maybe if it were a regular human knee it wouldn't have hurt at all by how hard his stomach felt but my blow's arent regular. I gather the natural energy around me and attack with dashing speed and power.

The coon tumbled back and fell to one of his knees looking at me in frustraion. I charged him zizzagging so I wasn't in his plain sight and formed the nescicary hand seal and mumbled,
Futton: cyclone, As I place my hand towards his figure a gust of wind pierced from my hand churning deadly for the Coon. I definely thought the battle would be over then but and that split second he vanished from my sight and reappeared right beside me. I was shocked at the blinding speed that I didn't even bother to move.
"I'll answer your question human." I sat there listening.
"But on one condition"
"And what would that be"
"you let me introduce you to another once mortal.
I shook my head in achnoligment and he said follow me.

"BACK IN KONOHA"

There was a large crowd of villagers gathered in a huge clearing. The clowds were heavy but they hadn't seemed to take a leak on humanity yet but there still was a sadning silence as noone spoke a word out of the entire crowd. TheY just gathered infront of a casket as girl by the name of Haruno Sakura spoke up from about 8 feet in front of the casket.

"TODAY WE, MOST VILLAGER'S OF KONOHA , GATHER HERE TO REMEMBER OUR FALLIN FRIEND AND LOVED ONE UZUMAKI NARUTO. SOME OF US HAVE KNOWN HIM FOR ATLEAST 10 YEARS AND SOME OF US HAPPENED TO HAVE RECENTLY MET HIM. BUT STILL, HE HAS HAD THE SAME AFFECT ON US ALL. THE THING DEEP INSIDE YOU THAT MAKES YOU WANT TO BELIEVE IN EVERYTHING HE SAYS AND TRUST HIM AGAINST ALL ODDS"
You could see the tear's flowing out of some people in the crowd's eyes. Even the Shinobi. In perticular a woman in the front holding her 2 year old daughter next to her. She was almost in a near frantic state. Her younger brother Kiba Was trying to hold her and give her words of encouragement like be strong but nothing seemed to matter.

Sakura continues " I'VE KNOWN NARUTO SENCE WE BOTH HAD BECOME GENNIN TOGETHER. I STILL REMEMBER ALL OF THE GOOD TIMES WE HAD STILL KNOWN AS TEAM 7, HALF OF US ARE IN DISTANT PLACES NOW, KAKASHI IS HERE,
SASUKE, WHO KNOW'S, AND ME. WE MET MANY FRIENDS DURING THOSE DAYS AND MOST OF YOU ARE GATHERED TODAY. PRINCESSE'S AND PRINCES EVEN SHE SAID WITH A SMILE. WE SHOULD ALL BE HAPPY THAT OUT FRIEND HAS MOVED ONTO A BETTER PLACE AND WE SHOULD TRY TO CONTINUE THE LEGACY HE LEFT AS PLAIN AS DAY. ALLWAYS BELIEVE IN YOURSELF, NEVER GIVE UP, AND NEVER GO BACK ON YOUR WORD Sakura said as tears started to pour down her face. Her throat swelled, it became hard to breathe. She almost fell to her knee's but she managed to catch herself. She looked over the many familuar faces in the crowd. Garra, Kankuro, Shion, Anade, Tamari, Yuske, Inari, Yuke. SHE SMILED AND SAID WILL EVERY ONE LINE UP IN FASHION AND SAY YOUR GOODBIES AND YOUR HELLO'S.

Everyone lined up and did exactly that. Some people got to the casket a led down roses. Some laid down instant Ramen. Some got to the casket and poured to tears. Hana came to the casket last.
"I'll always love your Naruto,ONly you. YOu promised even if you died you'd fine a way back." She motioned for her daughter Kinomi to say Bi Bi to daddy. Kinomi smiled and Said it aloud.
"I'll be waiting sweethear" hana wispered walking off.

"BACK IN HELL"

Dam Why do I keep sneezing I thought to myself. I've been following this dam demon Genji for what seems like hours now.
"Are we there yet I asked getting quite frustrated"
Yes we age just about there he said as he moved the curtain stepping into a pretty small shack. Wait her boy, I'll get him. Genji said moving the curtain to it's original location. Sir I have someone who would like to meet you out here Naruto could here Genji speaking in a rather polite tone as if worried. What is Racoon?! Would you like me to skin you and wear you for a coat!

No it couldn't Be Naruto thought as he nearly jumped as he heard a voice he recongnized!

Naruto payed close attention to the figure behind Ginji that was coming out of the Curtain. He had a black vest simular to a chuunins in konoha's but hardened to steel. he wore dark blue cacky pant's and all black sand's with black tape strapped around the top. But what was so familuar was the Huge sword on the mans Back. The man looked Naruto in the Eye's with a cold stare. "Coon who is this girl." the man said.

The coon broke in introduced the two. Sir this Is Naruto Uzumaki, Naruto this is

"MOMOCHI ZABUZA".

Naruto smiled, "So you did become a real demon in hell."