A velvet silver lining V2
chapter 1
This is an attempt to improve on certain things with the first version.
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(Canterlot)
We find ourselves in the beautiful city where the camera zooms on a specific unicorn. She lied in bed looking at the window as it rained. She wore a light pink lacy piece of lingerie as she stared at the rain hitting the glass. She had a purple mane and tail with a white strip that was the same as her coat. She may have been an older mare, but her body was still slim and no signs of fat on her body as her chest still stayed a firm c-cup size even after all these years.
This was Twilight Velvet, and today was not turning out to be a good one for the unicorn.
'Why must you do this to me Night Light?' She thought hugging her body as so far, things had been going downhill in her marriage.
(Flashback)
"Hey Nighty, mind rubbing sun tan lotion all over me?"
"..."
"Night Light?"
Velvet was laying on her stomach while she and her husband were at the beach and untied the back of her bikini and expected to see Night Light beside her, but turned and saw he wasn't there.
"Sure thing ladies, I'll rub oil on you."
The 2 mares then giggled at him.
"What the?"
(Another Flashback)
"Happy Anniversary!"
"What?"
"You forgot again?"
"What? No! What makes you think I'd go and forget our anniversary?"
"You have tickets to the Canterlot Cavaliers vs. The Manehattan Bats sticking out of your pocket. And it seems you have 6 of them, going out with your friends again?"
"Well, I mean, this isn't what it seems like?" he tried in a last ditch effort.
"You ass!" then she runs off! "I'm getting a drink!"
"I'm sure she'll calm down." he dismissed before heading off to the game.
Then in another flashback, we see Velvet in her sexiest red outfit, in bed with Night Light. "Hey honey, I got some new underwear. Care to help me out of it?" she purred to her husband.
Night Light was busy reading a porno mag. "Not now, I'm not in the mood." He said while jacking off!
"Well, how's about I help you with that juicy meat yours?"
"Not tonight!" He whined.
"I can't believe this. I'm right here beside you in new underwear, and you'd rather jerk off than fuck me?" asked Velvet in exasperation.
"What's wrong with being tired?"
"Why are you reading porn despite having 24/7 access to sex right fucking here?!"
"Well, I..."
"You know what? Never Mind, have fun jerking off on the couch!"
Then in another flashback, he tried making it up to her by taking her out to lunch.
"What are we doing at Clowny's Burgers?"
"This is your favorite isn't it?"
"I said my favorite restaurant was Sundial Knight Buffet!"
"Oh, right." he chuckled sheepishly. He was then slapped before Velvet stepped out on him.
Then there was the time she came home tired and plopped on the couch. Night Light was right next to her when it happened.
"Hey there babe." Said Night Light.
"Oh Nighty, I'm in so much pain, please rub my entire body, I need your touch!"
"I dunno, I was planning on watching something, I got my snacks and soda all ready."
"Hey, I help massage your body when you have a rough day." she frowned.
"And I thank you for that."
"Then why won't you do this for me?!"
Velvet then tore his chip bags to shreds with her magic and spilled his soda all over the floor!
"I ain't cleaning that up!"
And who could forget the time she and him shared some small talk at dinner.
Prepare for such an angry last straw reader because this one takes 40 cakes, that's as bad as 4 tens and that's terrible! And soon, in more serious comic books, we learn the theft of the 40 cakes is canon.
"Hey, you know your favorite animals are on display at the zoo."
"Oh you mean that they have the White Tigers?"
"Oh, so your fave isn't the Capybaras?"
"No, you like the Capybaras."
"Uh..."
"Well, your favorite movie is out."
"*gasp!* Remy's One True Queen?"
"Oh, I was thinking: My Big Fat Stripper Wedding."
"Dammit Night Light!"
"What?"
"I thought we knew everything about each other, isn't that one of the points of being a married couple?"
"I do know everything about you!"
"Oh, then when's my birthday?"
"July 22nd?"
"That's Bugs Bunny's birthday. My birthday is today!"
"Oh! Then, Happy Birthday!"
"I'm going out with my friends to drink!"
"Oh, let me join yo..."
She kicked Night Light in the gut. "When you remember a thing about me, then you can come." she growled.
Then we come back to Velvet looking at the rain.
"Is this what's happened? Does Night Light not care about our marriage anymore?"
Then she sees someone's face slam onto the window and slide off! Velvet sat up and ran over to the window. She then opened it. "Hello?"
"Ah! Please go away doggies!" the young stallion shouted as he flailed his legs while hanging from a street light.
Velvet then got dressed! "Hey!" she shouted at the dogs. "Eat this!" Then she scattered hot dogs all over the floor, distracting the dogs who then went away.
Velvet ran downstairs and out to the lamp post as the stallion was calming down. "Hey, you okay?"
"Yes ma'am."
"What were you doing?"
"I was just walking and then they attacked me!"
"You poor thing, so who are you?"
"I'm Heavy Hearted, I'm here on a journey to find out the meaning of love."
"Meaning of love?"
"Yes, and unless I figure out what it's meaning is, my memories won't ever return, at least that's what my village elder said."
"Well you won't find it with me, my married life is doing bad and not letting up."
"Okay, I guess I'll just keep on my search. Next stop, Ponyville."
"See yah kid, hopefully you will find the meaning."
As the stallion walked off, Velvet sighed to herself. "I wonder if it's time to end it."
(Ponyville)
"I wonder if there's anyone out there who'll love me."
This came from a tall purple scaled dragon with a white t-shirt on and blue jeans as he walked through the small town.
"Hopefully my next crush wont hurt me as bad as...
(Flashback)
2 days ago...
"Okay Spike, you got this! You can tell her how you feel!"
Spike walked up to Carousel Boutique to finally tell her how he felt." He knocked on the door and waited.
The door opens revealing Rarity in her usual blouse, and skirt.
"Oh, why hello Spike." smiled Rarity,
"Hello Rarity, how are you this fine day?"
"Splendid, and you?"
"Excellent, but there's something important I must tell you."
"What is it?"
"Well, since we met, I've been meaning to tell you something important."
"Oh?"
"Yeah, but I never found the right time since the day I almost killed us from my greed. Point is...I've had a crush on since our faithful meaning."
That stunned Rarity.
"So now that I've finally spilled my heart out to you, what's your thoughts on my long held feelings?"
"Oh, well, I'm quite flattered, but..."
"But?"
"I just accepted a certain gentlecolt's proposal to be his bride."
Spike's jaw hung open and his eyes widened.
"Who? WHO?!"
"Thunderlane, he showed me the ring while we were making love on the kitchen table."
Spike felt like his world shattered at hearing the fact not only was she getting married, but the fact she and another stallion had sex. "What?"
"He even went the extra mile by having a hidden camera record it and broadcast it to my parents who approved of him. Well, unfortunately for you, I appreciate you and hope we can still be best buddies. Good day."
(End of Flashback)
"She said it like she wasn't smashing my heart."
"That sounds horrible!" said Heavy Heart as he cried. "What a heartbreaking flashback!"
"Ah! Who are you and where did you come from?"
"Sorry. I was walking by and saw the flashback."
"How did you see something I was imagining in my mind?"
"I don't know, I might have divine powers. Anyways I'm Heavy Heart."
"Spike."
"Wow, I never met a dragon before! This is so cool!"
"Thanks, I've never seen you before, new to Ponyville?"
"Yep, on a journey to figure out the meaning of love so my memory shall come back."
"Well, you won't find it with me."
"Yeah, I saw that man destroying flashback, sorry about her."
"Right now, I just wanna be left alone."
"Well, guess I'll just continue my search here, never met anyone in this village, hopefully I'll find my answer here." He said to himself as Spike walked away.
'This is the worst day ever.' thought the dragon.
'Don't worry Spike, it'll all be okay in the end.' Celestia told him telepathically.
'You said that about 7 separate things already and it never worked mom!'
'Spike, just trust me this time okay?'
'*groan*'
'Call it a hunch, but things might start looking up for you.'
'What you can tell how the movie will end or something?'
'Yep, but vague hints are the only thing I'll be giving you.'
'Hmph.' Spike said as he looked into the window as it rained.
'I should just...move on.' both dragon and unicorn simultaneously thought as lightning struck.