This chapter includes two delete script scenes and lines that I remember from the movie. Feel free to correct me on the order of dialogue since it all merged in my head. Credit for deleted scenes goes to
fuckyeahjupiterascending tumblr com/tagged/script
Warning: Seraphi is a covert aggressive and so are her offspring. I don't believe she crossed the incest line, well the one defined by U.S. law, with Balem.
P.S. The MA scenes I had to cut out really made the word count take a hit. Also, this story will be two to four chapters depending on how much I want to cut out from my original story.
First a little Review
(Balem irritated thinks to himself annoying dirty hippies and their home-births. A.I. make note to implement new laws that will make home-birth illegal, hospitals to check for tag-chip, and in underdeveloped places to tag when vaccinating. Send new commands to Earth's regent.)
Balem to Faster Than Light (FTL) Implant, "Stop."
(Balem "freezes time" in the operating room where Caine meets Jupiter, as the scene slowly takes place around him)
" There you are..." (he stoops down to look at Jupiter as she is floating in the operating room. So hope you enjoy being on the other side of your death games.)
" You know there are times when I actually miss you. Because no one understood this universe like you did. No one understood me… (his voice breaks almost crying) like you did."
"Blurring and stirring the truth and the lies. So I don't know what's real and what's not. Always confusing the thoughts in my head
So I can't trust myself anymore... Scream at me I'm so far away I won't be broken again. I've got to breathe - I can't keep going under" by evanescene
Greeghan, the saragon reptile, pilots the ship through the eye of Jupiter the planet, with the eye being closed immediately afterwards to shut the Aegis, space cops, out.
(Jupiter doesn't want to see any of this but something catches her eye, something soft amidst the hard lines of industry: human bodies, their skin white, brown and black, piled like mounds of coal waiting to be refined.)
"Oh god…" Jupiter can help but comment.
Mr. Night, the regent of Jupiter's Refinery and a rat splice, smirks at her, "Impressive, isn't it? But this is just the Skim. A trifle compared to a Harvest, when your entire planet will look like this. Of course it's all ethically source and humanely done."
(The bodies are bulldozed onto grav-ways that feed into the glowing interiors of the refinery.)
Mr. Night continues, "These are the lower end stock not worthy of ReGenX. They have an easier fate than the high end stock refined while they are still awake. I assure you they don't feel much pain. And I find it amusing to think that you were born like them, just another piece of stock, and now here you are, a certified stock holder."
(The ship arcs towards Balem's citadel. Jupiter looks back for the Aegis.)
A little worried but doesn't show it, Jupiter states, "I don't see the Aegis. Where are they?"
Mr. Night knows they are locked out while stating, "They'll be along in good time. All in good time."
"I know I can stop the pain If I [face] it all away
Don't turn away (Don't give in to the pain) Don't try to hide (Though they're screaming your name)
Don't close your eyes (God knows what lies behind them) Don't turn out the light (Never sleep never die)" whisper by evanescene
(The huge doors open, throwing a strip of light into the boardroom. Jupiter enters, crossing the room while Chicanery closes the door behind her, sealing it with the clang of a dungeon. She has never felt more alone in her life.)
Caine doesn't understand that I am Queen therefore I am the law. Balem can't harm a hair on my body now that I have my title.
(Crossing, she whispers to herself.) "Suck it up, Jup. There's Bolotnikov in your blood. [and the Queen's DNA that is higher than him but let's see how far he goes]"
(In the gloom, Balem smiles.)
She commands, "Where is my family?"
(Everything about her reminds him of his mother.) "You should have stayed dead."
(Jupiter summons her nerve.) "I'm not your mother."
"No. My mother never cleaned a toilet in her life."
"Maybe that was her problem."
"My mother…" Balem rises. "My mother... taught me how to rule, that for the greatest profits, sacrifices have to be made."
Circling her and explaining how the whole industry works. "My mother taught me what was necessary to rule in this universe.
I CREATE LIFE! And I destroy it.
Life is an act of consumption, Jupiter. To live is to consume.
The human beings on your planet are merely a resource, waiting to be converted into capital. And this entire enterprise is just a small part in a vast and beautiful machine defined by evolution.
Designed for a single purpose: to create PROFIT."
Jupiter in disgust, "No wonder you hated your mother"
"I LOVED my MOTHER!" Getting closer to Jupiter almost touching her cheek… He loved every moment of it including the arguing.
"And yet you tried to kill me" Jupiter retorts
Caressing Jupiter's cheek Balem painfully states, "My mother made me understand that every human society is a pyramid and that some lives will always matter more than others. It is better to accept this than to pretend it isn't true."
He almost looses himself looking into her eyes until Jupiter in a matter of fact states "And that's why you killed her"
"HOW DARE YOU!" Balem yells and almost cries as he backhands her. She stares at him passionately angry at how dare he hit ME?! She raises her hand to strike back but instead uses it to hold his head while her body takes over control to ardently kiss him as if he belonged to her and ONLY HER! She opens her mouth wide surrounding his lips with her lips, enveloping his entire mouth with such totality that he can't speak or shout for help.
He is stiff and doesn't respond but her body doesn't care as she shoves her tongue deeper into the crevices of his mouth and he finally opens wider to let her penetrate his throat.
She thinks HA! Who's in control now?! …Me the Queen of the Universe that's who! Easily unclasps his choker while throwing her whole body against him. Still kissing him, he lands on his back as she starts to choke him with one hand while the other one tangles in his hair. He whines while she's inside him, it drives her insane that she uses both hands to choke him enough that he is crying.
Then she remembers herself. Oh God what have I done! She is so ashamed of her body's reaction to such an act of violence. Putting his choker back on, those ancient eyes bore into her as he lets her lap away at his lips. She caresses them one last time before moving away by standing up.
(She thinks, wow he is so messed up; I'm so messed up. No, No, I'm not his mother. I refuse to believe that was me. These people are crazy! I need to get away from them as fast as I can before I start acting like them.)
They both are in shock. He touches his lips looking at her in confusion as he stands up and backs away to retrieve the sheave.
He thinks back on how she used to tease him (And reminds himself as he backs away: She teased all of us, giving kisses on our lips since we where babes and still in adulthood; knowing exactly what she was doing. I was in awe of her power over everyone and everything. Mother how much I hate that you wouldn't let me touch you nor anyone else. No friends, only ReGenX-E customers.
All you ever wanted me to do was work because EVERYONE in the universe is depending on us and that I shouldn't waste my time on trivial things. Reminding me every day that I was made especially for you to run the company and to be the caregiver; you where proud of my DNA and its expressions, so much that it's etched on the wall of Ouroboros, our main refinery. Did you really love me? And how can I still love you even when reviewing all those beautiful atrocious memories?
This creature before me isn't you, or is it really you coming to give us a second chance at happiness? Does it matter that you crossed the line? NO… NO it isn't you and this is just a distraction. Or YOU ARE HERE and YOU are TESTING ME?!
YOU PROMISE that PLANET to ME… why?! Why are you taking it back? Why did you write such a thing in your will? I didn't check because I didn't want to believe you where gone… I love you.)
By the time he turns around his mask is back on.
"We've been dreaming But who can deny? It's the best way of living Between the truth and the lies.
See who I am, Break through the surface. Reach for my hand, Let's show them that we can
Free our minds and find a way. The world is in our hands, This is not the end." See who I am by within temptation
Adding AWESOME deleted scene "Rule the verse" to next chapter even though "siblings on Zalintyre" is my favorite!
