Hey guys this is my first story so pleaseee review and tell me what you think.
(Percy pov)
It had been only a few months since the giant war against gaia. I've been spending most of my time at camp and with Annabeth away with her dad I was growing bored quite quickly. Then one day a boy stumbled across the camp border covered in monster dust with a glowing golden bow in his hands. His name was Charlie and he was a son of Apollo. He instantly became jealous of me and began to turn all my friends against me by telling them lies saying I rat out the stroll brothers on a big prank they were about to do. And that I smashed Katie's pot plants and turned all the newer campers against me by saying i wasn't strong or that I didn't do half the things people said I do. He kept it up for a month but I held it inside and pushed it deep down it didn't matter because today I was excited I was going home to my mum and Paul. But the best part was that Annabeth was meeting me there. I could hardly wait. I rushed down to the stables and yelled "blackjack come on it's time to go". "okay okay boss wait up" mumbled blackjack. I hastily mounted blackjack and rode up to the top of half blood hill. Taking one last look at camp I smiled and said "let's go buddy". "you owe me some doughnuts afterwards boss" blackjack remarked as we soared off towards my mums apartment.
Blackjacks hoofs thumbed against the pavement as we landed gaining a few weird looks from people but thankfully the mist was at work. I told blackjack to go fly around for a bit and with that he flew off. I raced up to the front door but as I was approaching I felt a weird feeling in my gut. My hand instinctively moved to my pocket where I kept riptide. I grabbed the door noob and pushed the door open but nothing could of prepared me for the sight I saw. My mum, Paul and Annabeth all lying there. Their eyes dull and pools of blood surrounding them. I couldn't hold it in. I vomited then fell to my knees praying to the gods for it to be a dream.. But it wasn't. My world seemed to crumble to ruins around me as I let out a scream only a broken man could produce.
(Hestia pov)
Over the past few years I had become rather fond of young Perseus in fact he is by far my favorite demigod. I've watched him for quite a while now and saw what that son of Apollo of had done to Perseus. I'm glad that he finally has time to visit his family. As I watched him enter his mother's apartment a look of horror on my face mirrored his. I watched in shock as I saw and heard him let out a scream of pure sadness and horror. As I felt the ground begin to shake at Perseus rage and shock I knew what I had to do and I flash out of the throne room.
(Percy pov)
I could feel the ground shaking violently with my rage. as the shaking began to get stronger and stronger suddenly a felt arms wrap around my chest from behind. as the shaking calmed down I turned around and my eyes widened. "L.. L. Lady Hestia" I said in shock. "yes Perseus I what your feeling right now, and Id like for you to come with me".
Well that was my first chapter please review and let me know what you think as it means a lot to me. Anyone who has any way to help improve my writing please tell me I would love to hear from you! :)