This is my first story so I want honest feedback please. Is it a good length? Also I am not very good at Brennan's point of view so let me know what you think. Sorry if it's bad.
I don't own any of the characters.
Brennan:
We were walking away from he hospital, feeling a lot more safe out in the open street than we had been a few weeks ago before Broadsky was arrested. So many things have happened since then. Angela and Hodgins are now parents which, anthropologically speaking, should make them nervous. Their lives are completely changing and they have no idea what to expect. Yet they seemed thrilled. Booth seemed to be happy to be a father so why was I having such a hard time telling him my news? I stopped walking. It was now or never.
"What?" he seemed so concerned.
"I'm...I'm pregnant," I had to take a deep breath before my next sentence, "You're the father."
I searched his face for some clue of his feelings. Would he be happy? Upset? Angry? What if he never speaks to me again? I can't live without Booth! The few seconds of silence seemed like forever. His face slowly broke into a smile and I laughed with relief. We stood there with goofy grins on our faces for a while until he hesitated for a second and then leaned down and kissed me. For a second I was surprised but then he took my face between his hands and we melted into each other. This is where I belong. A part of me has known for a while but now I'm completely giving myself up to another person. But it is all worth it.