Hi The Raviner here with my first ever fanfic, Please go easy on me I am rather nervous about how this story will do just so you know its an OC-centric fic. Anyway have fun reading and please R&R. Also underlined and Italic is me talking sorry bout that hopefully I wont do that much during the story. Thank you for your time.
Dragons talking: Burn
Dragons thinking: Stupid Two-legs
Talking: Hi
Thinking: Hello
Spells: Brisingr
The White Dragon
*BOOM!*
"What the hell was that?" Yelled a young man as he jerked awake. He quickly looked around the cave he had decided to spend the night in, seeing nothing out of the ordinary he decided to venture outside to see if he can find the source of the disturbance that woke him. Walking towards the entrance of the cave he grumbled to himself, "There better be a bloody good reason for waking me up". Upon looking outside he was shocked to see a massive ring of fire surrounding the hill that the cave he was resting in could be found on. "Now who would do something like this? Wait a second what's that sound?" tilting his head to the side he listened to the wind.
*Clang Clang*
"Hmm that's the sound of swords clashing...I wonder who would be fighting out here in the middle of the Spine?" he mused "well I'm awake now may as well go see whats going on". Quickly making his way back into the cave he grabbed his bow and arrows delicately carved from white ash and his sword a beautiful blade that glows silver in the light (I'm no good at describing swords so basically its a Katana) he also grabbed his armor a mixture of darkest black and purest silver (again cant really think of how to describe it but think the Glass armour from Skyrim just replace the malachite with Mithril and the Moonstone with the Ebony ore). After donning his armor he turned to the back of the cave and said "I will be back soon". Getting a blast of hot wind in his face as a response, he chuckled and walked out of the cave.
After leaving the cave it took him about two or so minutes of running to find the source of the disturbance. It was an Elf, she had dark raven hair and a lithe figure obviously built for speed compared to himself who is built more for power. After observing her, he then noticed that there was a group of Urgals coming out of the woods surrounding her, penning her in. In the middle of the Urgals was a pale man with blood red hair. The elf looking around in desperation seemed to have realized she couldn't escape so as a last ditch effort to save the item she carried she pulled it from her pouch raised it above her head and sent it away with a burst of magic. The crimson haired man obviously displeased by this struck her down with a bolt of magic.
Having seen enough the young man drew and notched an arrow taking aim for the man seeing him as the most obvious and powerful threat. After lining up the shot he let the arrow loose. he watched as it struck the man in the back of the head, a definite kill shot if he had ever seen one, unfortunately for him the man was no man but a shade, a creature who can only be killed by being pierced through the heart any other life threatening wound would only cause him to disperse and reform later on in his sanctuary. Upon seeing the shade disperse for the moment he charged in to engage the Urgals in active combat. It was a short and brutal slaughter, the Urgals never stood a chance before they even realized he was there he had already decapitated two of them and severed another one in half. The other Urgals charged in swinging wildly trying to take him down as they were ordered to kill all but the female elf. Effortlessly he dogded and parried their swords and axes cleaving off arms, heads and legs. Not even five minutes after entering into battle all the Urgals lay at his feet either dead or minutes away from the dark cold embrace of eternal sleep.
Walking up to the elf he knelt down and moved her hair out of the way, when he saw her face he frowned in confusion. "What are you doing out here Arya Svit-Kona and where are your guards and companions?" he thought to himself. Putting his thoughts to the side for the moment he noticed that she wasn't badly injured just more physically exhausted at the moment and would recover after a bit of rest and some food. Picking her up he carried her back to the cave he was currently residing in.
It took him a little bit longer to return to his humble abode of the night, as he had to mach sure not to leave any tracks and so that he didn't disturb the Elf currently sleeping in his arms. Upon arriving at his campsite he called out "I'm back! and I brought company". There was a moment of silence before movement could be seen at the back of the cave. It was a Pure white Dragon. "Well this is a surprise, I never expected you to bring someone to our campsite after all you have tried to remain hidden for the last 70 years"
The young man chuckled as he put Arya down and covered her with some furs to keep warm and responded "I have a good reason this time as our guest here is Arya Svit-Kona princess of the elves and until fifteen minutes ago carrier of the Blue dragon egg".
"Hmph never understood why you let that fool take off with that egg"
"because we both know that the Varden and Elves needed something to raise their moral the fact that i have the other two and your brother or sister is not something they need to know just yet."
"Well they will know soon as we are now going to get involved in the war I just know it"
"Maybe so but just think unless there is another rider left from the fall we are the most experienced rider and dragon left outside of Galbatorix. Anyway it's late and we need to rest much like our guest currently is, so goodnight my friend"
"Goodnight, I shall stay awake to guard the eggs and to keep an eye on your guest, I shall wake you when I notice her waking up". The young man smiled and nodded at his Bond-mate and closed his eyes drifting off to the world of dreams.
So one chapter down hope you all enjoy let me know what you think I can do to improve the Story and I will do my best to see if it can be arranged so please read and review. Until next time The Raviner out.
