This is my first story, and flamers just stay away because I do not wish to get into fights, actually I will not ask you to comment on it.
Criticism is encouraged as I want to improve on my writing and IN NO WAY SHAPE OR FORM I do not own ANY OF THE HARVEST MOON CHARATERS except for violet as she is my OC
(Onto the story)
"Don't you think this is too soon?" a woman exclaimed,
"I said I was going to go, didn't I Leann?" Leann stepped back as the orange haired girl passed by. "I can understand that your uncle died, violet but isn't it going a little far to take over the farm? I mean you have no experience in farming..."
Violet sighed and continued walking onto the boat, while fixing her backpack, "I'll be fine! Don't worry" she smiled as she turned to pass the captain. Violet walked down the hallway of the boat to her room "Forget Me Not huh…" she flopped onto the bed and fell asleep. The boat sailed along the water, and it eventually reached the dock of mineral town, BROOOONNNGGG!! "WOAH!!" Violet flipped out of her bed "ow" she moaned as she was curled up with her feet behind her head and butt proudly in the air. "We have docked at mineral town" Violet heard the captain say and sat up 'how long have I been sleeping?' she thought.
Violet picked up her backpack and walked out into the main part of the boat. "Are you Violet?" Violet quickly turned around to see an old man with black hair, white tee-shirt, black pants and had his eyes closed, "In the name of all that is crap don't surprise me please!" she coughed.
"My apologies, I am Takura, your uncles partner who helped out on the farm, I've come to lead you to Lunar Farm" "more like life partner" she mumbled, he ignored the mumble and looked at the bag she was carrying. "Do you need help with that?" Violet scratched the back of her head, "It's alright I can handle it" she laughed nervously.
As they headed toward the farm violet kept on looking at his face, he picked up on it and looked at her "is there something wrong with my face?" Violet placed her hand into her hair "sorry I was just wondering how you see with your eyes closed" he looked forward again "I don't…" she stared, "EHHH then how do you see?" "It's magic" he laughed "yeah right old man…" she muttered.
When they finally got to Lunar Farm, Takura showed her where everything was, and told her to take today off because of the trip. "y'know I'm not that tired" before he walked off he turned to her "I know, make this time useful to get to know the villagers" Violet continued to mumble and walked off.
"Hmm where to go first…." As Violet pondered which person to meet first she bumped into an inn "whelp I guess this is the first place I'll go to" she pondered as she went inside. Inside a woman named ruby was arguing with her son "please rock can you just clean the floors…" sighing and shaking her head, "I've already done the dishes." Ruby sweat dropped "only one" Violet listened in on the quarrel and was debating on whether to leave them be or stay but before she could decide she heard "oh a customer, I apologize if I caused any awkwardness" Ruby said as she bowed.
"Not at all, and sorry I'm not a customer…" Ruby looked at Violet as if she recognized her, "oh then you must be Jack's niece." "Niece I didn't know the old farmer had a niece" Rock examined her "not bad" "do it when I'm not looking Blondie" Violet hissed as she put a smile back on her face.
"Oh how could I be so rude" the plump woman exclaimed "I forgot to introduce myself! my name is Ruby, and this is my son Rock" violet introduced herself and said she had to go then, and walked out of the door before anything else stopped her.
"Where to go next, hmmm…" she said she headed towards the bar meeting Griffin and Muffy, and eventually all of the other people. She sat down at the goddess's pond and huffed "Wow, I didn't know there were so many villagers, and it's only 10:45 P.M, but for some reason I'm tired…"
Violet lay on the grass "well I guess I'll try and rest my eyes though" she listened to the sound of the river, her eyes started to close but then she heard a rustle in the bushes and shot up again "who's there, I was about to fall asleep!" she continued to hear rustling, so she quietly grabbed her shoe and threw it in the direction of the rustle "OW" came a rather masculine voice, "Come out, or else" Violet was up now and had a Hammer behind her
"No need for a fair maiden to be so angered by a rustle" violet snorted "fair…maiden? Sorry stalker but I'm not fair or a lady" the boy looked at her with disgust "Stalker, I am no stalker" Violet continued to laugh "then why were you in the bushes, only a stalker would spy on a girl!" she then started to cough a bit "do you have a name whitey, I mean how old are you?" the white haired man shook his head but then pulled a smirk "The name is Phantom Skye prince of the stars and a ladies man. I was born with this hair… Now, may I ask fair maiden what is your name then?" Violet burst out laughing, Skye looked at her confused "Just call me the crapper from hell" She tried her best to act serious.
"Such vulgar language, please be serious" violet coughed again, "Sorry but you're going to have to call me that name before I answer." For a second he looked as though he scrunched up his nose but then said "May I ask your name…crapper from hell?" she smiled and said "Yes, the name's Violet." He went back to smirking "Violet…what a wonderful name, unlike that vulgar one" Once violet calmed herself down she finally took a better look at him.
"Hmm…." He noticed her stare, "what have my charms already gotten to you?" she shook her head "no I'm just thinking how egotistical you are." his jaw dropped "Never have I seen a beautiful Maiden act so vulgar and rude!" violet shrugged, "I've always been a little rude, and vulgarity is me, so if you don't like it then go BEEP yourself" she said before she walked past him and left the goddess pond, leaving him gob smacked. "Ah it feels good to ruin ego!" Violet chuckled as she walked into her house and flopped on her bed "but I guess maybe I should apologize for what I said at the end…"
