So I had this idea. That I would ask you guys for your opinions on ROTD (Rio of The Dead). Rio of The Dead has been my soul good idea I've ever had and I plan to take it farther then just Fan fiction... but that is a completely different story. Anyway so I have returned to the idea three times, this time around I am planning to finish it. My idea was that I would ask all of you what you think is wrong with Rio of The Dead, what you like it about it, and what you think I should or shouldn't do. And if you have any ideas of you own that you think I should try and elaborated on just leave it in a review and I will get back to you in an update of this story! ~ Hyrum
"I know where he keeps his guns." he smiled and winked as he helped her pull down the items from the closet. Casidy smiled and giggled, only to jab him in the ribs playfully
"But I know where you keep yours.."
For example you could ask for no more scenes like this ^ (even though I would say no to that request
"So, Tomada and Sorrel. I will need your British intelligence to work my almost illegal M16."
Let's say this British Intelligence joke[pun] offend you. Just tell me and I'll keep it in mind in the future.
"Hyrum... you just... hit- you just hit a person!" Casidy looked over at the green sport bike and tired to find the owner. "Do you know what that means!" But before Hyrum could feel the true feeling of a woman's scorn. The owner of the bike popped up on the side of Casidy with his thumb in the air in the 'thumbs up' sign. Her wore a green and black helmet with a sunburst colored visor tint. He was a falcon. Tan with dark markings. Smaller than Tomada, but not by much.
If you like descriptive paragraphs like this just. Just ask and before you know it my chapters will be ask long as LowKnave's!
"Carmine?" She asked, but before Carmine could answer she continued. "I know you!" She turned towards the group. "I know him! He was in my high school! He joined the military with his brother... Benjamin. He knew my little sister Sarah.."
Want more backstories? I will actually write them in a separate spot. One will be a lemon collection (I'll explain later) and another will be a deleted scenes sorry. Just let me know and I'll get on them.
A knock..
Then two...
The group grew quite and they look at each other. Knave stood up first, he grabbed Hyrum's gun that was conveniently placed next to the couch.
I know that's what you all do when you get the alert that says I updated. But this little notice is a way to say I can update more frequently!
So yes, I will be doing a lemon collection. With the help of a friend I will use all the characters in different pairings that I, or you, will choose. That will be out during the summer of this year. Oh, and I will be more active so once you leave your comments I will get back to you in a heartbeat (or two). Cya next time ~ Hyrum
