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extremely rich and I'm not..
Chapter 1..lost ( btw when something is written in italics it's thoughts or past memories)
Elliot was sitting in the hospitals sleeping quarters, which she now considered her home after her dad cut off her money supply. She was trying to review some work but her mind kept wandering.
She walked in from school to hear the familiar sound of yelling and cursing between her parents. She tried to quietly sneak by but she was caught..now the yelling was directed at her and with each word she felt her heart being torn apart. She stood there taking the verbal blows as she had learned a long time ago..never talk back unless you want to get it 10m times worse..
Elliot was snapped out of her flash back by JD walking in the room.
JD : Hey, whats wrong? Are you ok?
Elliot: ya ya I good, I just umm aren't feeling that good. Trying hard to smile to hide the pain in her eyes.
JD: ok, well if you need anything I'm here I know her all to well, she isn't sick but I don't know how else to help her, Elliot always kept to herself so much.
Elliot: thanks.. oh I wish he would just come her and hold me forever and ever to erase all the pain..
As JD walks out of the room Elliot feels lost inside. She knows JD would help her but she doesn't want to hurt him by revealing her troubled past. Elliot gathers her belongings, and before she leaves she takes a deep breathe and puts on a mask of happiness for the rest of the world to see.
I know this chapter sounds a little depressing and your probably wondering this is suppose to be a romance? But I assure you it's coming I just needed you to have a look to what's inside Elliots mind so you can understand more for later on.
Please review I like any criticism good or bad.
Chapter 1..lost ( btw when something is written in italics it's thoughts or past memories)
Elliot was sitting in the hospitals sleeping quarters, which she now considered her home after her dad cut off her money supply. She was trying to review some work but her mind kept wandering.
She walked in from school to hear the familiar sound of yelling and cursing between her parents. She tried to quietly sneak by but she was caught..now the yelling was directed at her and with each word she felt her heart being torn apart. She stood there taking the verbal blows as she had learned a long time ago..never talk back unless you want to get it 10m times worse..
Elliot was snapped out of her flash back by JD walking in the room.
JD : Hey, whats wrong? Are you ok?
Elliot: ya ya I good, I just umm aren't feeling that good. Trying hard to smile to hide the pain in her eyes.
JD: ok, well if you need anything I'm here I know her all to well, she isn't sick but I don't know how else to help her, Elliot always kept to herself so much.
Elliot: thanks.. oh I wish he would just come her and hold me forever and ever to erase all the pain..
As JD walks out of the room Elliot feels lost inside. She knows JD would help her but she doesn't want to hurt him by revealing her troubled past. Elliot gathers her belongings, and before she leaves she takes a deep breathe and puts on a mask of happiness for the rest of the world to see.
I know this chapter sounds a little depressing and your probably wondering this is suppose to be a romance? But I assure you it's coming I just needed you to have a look to what's inside Elliots mind so you can understand more for later on.
Please review I like any criticism good or bad.