Hey guys, here is the revised edition of Darkness Falls, chapter one.
Darkness Falls
Deep in a lab located below Konoha a very dark and sinister plan was being put into action. A special project being done in Lab 6.57-4, also dubbed the lab of dread, was about to be sabotaged. This project was to harness powers from a man that was the thing legends were literally made of, the only man who could beat Minato Namikaze, Taichuo Fuchikage. The project was in its final motions as the parasitic powers some how managed to form a consciousness, and through this it is suggested Taichou's power is parasitic. Danzo was planning on using the parasitic powers to create the ultimate force that would rise up and be the ultimate force in the world, not even a jinchuuriki could fight and beat. But someone else had other plans.
The man dropped the body down as he closed its eyes running into the Lab labeled 6.57-4. He opened the door slinging three Kunai the knives flying into the scientist's necks as he slowly walked to the door looking in through the window. He saw a black silhouetted figure, possibly a child by the looks of it. The dark red slitted eyes shifted slowly up to him as the creature on the inside smiled.
"Well, well, well, if it isn't Fumito. How's the misses?" The man scoffed as he spit to the side next to the larger window. The man turned around as he heared a whimper to see one of the scientists grasping their bleeding neck obviously not dead and he walks over to the woman on the ground.
"Tsk, tsk, tsk, you just couldn't leave it alone. Now you have to die." The man grabbed her by her ponytail and hoisted her up by her hair the woman cringing as he slammed a hand into her wounded neck and pulled up and pushed down ripping her head and spine clean out of her body. The brain doesn't shut down for seven minutes in some cases after being beheaded, he knew this and wanted her to feel it as he tossed her screaming head to the side as he went over to the window and pressed the large blue button as the door opened. The silhouette stood up as it walked out and stood looking up at the man.
"It is time to ravage this center, leave no one under Konoha's control alive, kill even the children and babies if you desire." The figure started to laugh as it went over to the woman's head and bit into it taking a chunk of flesh and some bone out as it smiled the sound of the bones being crunched and the flesh squishing around as the figure swallowed lightly.
"I will be seeing you in the distant future Fumito."The man nodded as he held his hand out a large black hole opening on the wall as he walked into it leaving the monster to his disastrous tendencies. As soon as the black hole closed the figure stood and walked out heading towards the main work room.
Two men were standing next to a turbine as the father-son duo were arguing.
"Marin, we have to gain control of that thing by the week's end, or we will be killed. Danzo has lost his patience." Marin looked to the older man.
"Kopaku don't worry we will have it done, or we will be finished." Kopaku looked at the man and placed his head in his hands.
"Son, even with the equipment and the manual labor, we could not have this finished by the end of the week. You know that." Marin sighed as he lit a cigarette and took a nice long drag before exhaling.
"Yes I do pops, the problem, is that we don't have time to be able to stop and piss around, lets get back to" Marin never got to finish that sentence as he saw his fathers torso just explode in front of him sending pieces of flesh and organs flying into the turbines and the blood splashing across his body almost coating him red. Marin's cigarette falls from his mouth to the ground as he turns to run but is stopped by a hand slamming through his chest and wrenching his heart out. Marin's last sight would be the monstrosity eating his heart as if some piece of fruit and seemingly enjoying it. The men and women in the room were trying to get out but only succeeded in breaking the doors making the blast doors close in front of them making it impossible to advance. The Figure slowly walked to them shadowy strings flying from his body as if a flailing jellyfish. Each string like appendage slinging through at the crowd slicing anything in its way the figure laughing maniacally as blood would be almost pouring down like rain.
"SO MUCH FUN! This has been my best night in years, and wait till I get on the streets that will be even better." The figure launched a string appendage made from the rest of them and cleaved through slamming into what was left of the people coating the room in a mass amount of gore and entrails. The figure reached the door when a groaning brought him over to a man who had survived without his legs and an arm. The figure smiled before its mouth splinters open taking up over half of its head. The figure lunged down the mouth snapping on the skull of the dying man the person screaming before in a sound as if slamming a watermelon with a baseball bat, his head implodes and the figure swallows the mix of tissue as if a meal. The figure made it to the wall as it lays a hand on it and phases through. The rest of the night throughout Konoha, screams could be heard but no evidence of anyone being there besides blood stains and piles of gore.
So I hope you like this revised edition better than the original.