Yeah, so, this is my first attempt at a Tokyo Mew Mew fic. (The horror!) Um, well, I've dallied a bit with these characters, but I've never written anything that required serious character development. I'm going to try and give it a shot. This story is going to be very angsty, and yet happy at the same time. Yes, this prelude is confusing, but I promise it'll make more sense in the next chapter. :3
Pairings? Obviously Pai/Retasu. Others I'm not too sure on. I'll have people vote. Okay so, Ichigo/Kisshu or Ichigo/Ryou? I love them both equally so I'm having a hard time choosing…
Warnings? None for this chapter.
Disclaimer? If Tokyo Mew Mew were mine, Pai and Retasu would have had WAY more screen time. Seriously, they're too cute together.
"Drifting"
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「Prelude」
Drifting, floating…
"Hello? Hello?! Oh, thank god! You've got to help her! She's … She's dying! Ohgodohgodohgod…"
It's warm …
"Yes, she's bleeding! It—It's everywhere! Ohgodohgodohgod…"
Like soaking in a warm bath, only…
"Talk to her? Talk to her?! Are you crazy?! She's dying—do you hear me?!—dying … and I-I'm supposed to—ohgodohgodohgod…"
Pain. Scaring pain…hurts, argh…
"Retasu! Retasu! Retasu!"
Is someone calling … me? The pain… I can't….
"Retasu! Retasu! Dammit Retasu, open your eyes! You—You can't die! "
IamsorryIamsorryIamsorry… I can't … the throbbing pain …. I-I…
"… Retasu, god … Just—just hold on a little while longer? Can't you…? They'll be here soon … the ambulance—ohgodohgodohgod—don't die I…I—WAKE UP!"
I'm sorry…
"Retasu? Retasu? They're here! … RETASU?!"
Two girls.
One caked in blood.
Death.
Screaming.
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The screeching white ambulance was seconds too late.
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「Prelude: Fin」
Er, so, review? Update should be soon. :3