Disclaimer- you all have seen this before on other stories and here's how it goes, I don't own anything, only Tamora Pierce does
Okay, I haven't written a fic in a long time so sorry if the layout of the story is messed up. Please bare with me and my horrible spelling. Here it goes, my second fan fic ever!!!!
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Alanna paced around the room, her fiery hair sweeping around with her. Her
violet eyes were glazed, showing that she was deep in thought. Tomorrow she
was to head off to the convent, and that was no good at all. Coram sat near
the stables having a clear view of the girl. "if only she were born a boy" he
thought, "she would become the finest knight in Tortall". Everyone in
Trebond thought so, and it was entirely true. Every noble lady was to head
off to the convent to become proper, as almost every noble man was sent to
Corus to become a knight. But unlike every noble lady, Alanna had a
magnificent spirit. This spirit was what had helped her become trained by
Coram with a sword. She rarely tired, having hiked over rough terrain with
out breaking a sweat (A/N: ya I know exaggeration). Alanna was also a
natural when it came to the fighting arts, which was very hard to come by.
The only problem with Alanna was that she was as stubborn as a mule
(maybe even worse) and her temper was sharper than any knife you would
find. She was also afraid to use the gift she was granted with. Her brother
Thom, however, was completely different. Unlike his sister, he was terrible
with the fighting arts (a three year old could have beat him), easily became
tired, and (if his father hadn't band the use of magic) he would become the
greatest mage in Tortall.If only, if only, Coram thought, but it wouldn't
matter anyway, for Alanna was heading off to the convent, and that was all
there was...
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Soooo???? What do you think? Please review!! This is just a prologue introducing the twins for anyone who doesn't know them all ready, yes she's going to the convent, but don't worry it will get interesting
Okay, I haven't written a fic in a long time so sorry if the layout of the story is messed up. Please bare with me and my horrible spelling. Here it goes, my second fan fic ever!!!!
.....................
Alanna paced around the room, her fiery hair sweeping around with her. Her
violet eyes were glazed, showing that she was deep in thought. Tomorrow she
was to head off to the convent, and that was no good at all. Coram sat near
the stables having a clear view of the girl. "if only she were born a boy" he
thought, "she would become the finest knight in Tortall". Everyone in
Trebond thought so, and it was entirely true. Every noble lady was to head
off to the convent to become proper, as almost every noble man was sent to
Corus to become a knight. But unlike every noble lady, Alanna had a
magnificent spirit. This spirit was what had helped her become trained by
Coram with a sword. She rarely tired, having hiked over rough terrain with
out breaking a sweat (A/N: ya I know exaggeration). Alanna was also a
natural when it came to the fighting arts, which was very hard to come by.
The only problem with Alanna was that she was as stubborn as a mule
(maybe even worse) and her temper was sharper than any knife you would
find. She was also afraid to use the gift she was granted with. Her brother
Thom, however, was completely different. Unlike his sister, he was terrible
with the fighting arts (a three year old could have beat him), easily became
tired, and (if his father hadn't band the use of magic) he would become the
greatest mage in Tortall.If only, if only, Coram thought, but it wouldn't
matter anyway, for Alanna was heading off to the convent, and that was all
there was...
........................
Soooo???? What do you think? Please review!! This is just a prologue introducing the twins for anyone who doesn't know them all ready, yes she's going to the convent, but don't worry it will get interesting