Script Episode 'Gang Bang'
Hi guys! I'm new here! I read a few stories about Rizzoli & Isles and I saw that a lot of people write about Jane & Maura, so maybe my story will work as a distraction. I wrote the beginning of what could have been a new episode of Rizzoli & Isles. I wrote it as a sort of script because it's not an actual story but an episode, so the point of view changes. Also I'm Dutch so there could be grammatical mistakes in my story. And I really appreciate reviews!
An unknown girl leaves her apartment and walks to her car, when her phone rings. She recognizes the number and picks up.
Girl: Hi! How are y... Wow wow, slow down! Okay, I'll be right there. She hangs up, gets in her car and drives away.
A cop is driving his routine, when he hears gun shots coming from an old barn. He gets out of his car with his gun in his hands. He enters the barn and sees somone lying on the floor. He walkes towards the person and sees he has been shot. The cop feels for a heartbeat but there isn't one. He quickly runs back to his car and pages detective Rizzoli and detective Frost. They're near to the old barn and arrive within a few minutes.
Rizzoli: A murder at this hour? Why couldn't he wait till tomorrow morning?
Frost: Murderers are never nice to cops, you know that.
Rizzoli: I know, I just wanted it to be wrong this time. They enter the barn and want to walk to the victim, when they hear BANG BANG BANG! Rizzoli and Frost both dive behind a few boxes to find cover.
Rizzoli: WHAT THE HELL?
Frost: Someone is shooting at us!
The unknown girl arrives at the old barn, but the place is surrounded by police.
Girl: What the hell is the police doing here? She gets out the car.
Girl: What the hell is going on here? (walks towards an officer)
Frankie: There has been a murder.
Girl: WHAT? And why are all these cops running around like crazies?
Frankie: Cops are trapped inside and there is a shooter.
Girl: Why isn't anyone doing anything? We should help them!
Frankie: There is nothing you can do. Go home. (turns around)
The girl wants to walk away, but then she sees the officer's gun. She looks at it and makes a decision. The girl takes the gun and runs away with it.
Frankie: HEE! STOP!
Frankie chases the girl but she is too fast. She runs through a fence and shuts the door.
Girl: I'm sorry.
Frankie: Let me in! Dammit!
Next to her is a door. She carefully opens it. The girl hides behind a few piled boxes. She sees two people. One woman and one man. They can't see her and they are yelling and trying to shoot someone. She peers behind the boxes and sees a man with a rifle standing on a scaffold. He also can't see her.
Frost: Can you shoot him?
Rizzoli: I'm trying, but he is moving all the time!
She opens fire but she doesn't hit him.
The girl looks at the shooter. She has a great shot at hitting him. She can hit him. She must hit him. The girl focuses on the shooter and shoots. BANG! The bullet hits him right in his forehead and he falls down.
Frost: Wow! Good shot Rizzoli!
Rizzoli: But that wasn't me!
Frost: Huh? Who else could it be?
The girl walks out from her hiding place.
Girl: It was me.
They are both surprised by the entrance of the girl.
Here the episode intro could start.
Rizzoli walks towards her.
Rizzoli: And who are you may I ask?
Girl: I'm Elena Wate and I am in my first year of the police academy.
Rizzoli: I'm detective Rizzoli and this is detective Frost.
Elena: Detective Homicide?
Rizzoli: That's right. And what were you doing here?
Elena: Well, I was... Frankie storms in and interrupts the conversation.
Frankie: There you are! He runs at the girl, takes the gun and tries to handcuff her.
The girl struggles.
Elena: Let me go!
Rizzoli: Frankie! What the hell do you think you're doing? Let her go! Stop! Frankie stops.
Frankie: That little bitch stole my gun! Rizzoli tries to calm him down.
Rizzoli: You did? (surprised)
Elena: They all weren't doing anything! I had to do something!.
Frankie: What did you want to do with it? Huh? Trying to shoot somebody?
Elena: In case you didn't notice, I shot him! (angrily points at the place where the shooter lays on the scaffold)
Frankie: You're lying!
Rizzoli: No, she isn't. She shot him.
Elena: And do you know what? It was a head shot. Something you (points at Frankie's chest) can't manage. So back off!
Frankie is stunned. And he walks away. Other policemen and Dr. Isles enter the building.
Elena: Never take a gun from a police officer. It freaks them out.
Rizzoli: Ha, yes it does. Don't make a habit out of it, okay? He could have arrested you.
Elena. No, I won't. (smiles)
Rizzoli: But what a good shot! First year at the academy and you can already shoot like this? I can't even do that. It must be talent.
Elena: I guess, but thanks either way. It is quite handy though.
Rizzoli: You saved a few lives tonight, including mine. I owe you.
Elena: Isn't it a little bit early to say that? Maybe I will do something really stupid and then you will regret it.
Rizzoli: Well...
Isles: Jane, you have to see this.
Rizzoli walks to Isles, who is in the back of the building. She is standing next to the victim, who lays on the ground.
Rizzoli: Jesus, he is so young.
The victim is a boy about the same age as the girl and has two shot wounds in his chest.
Rizzoli: Hey, first year Wate! Would you like to see your first victim?
Elena: Really? You're sure?
Rizzoli: Yes, of course.
Elena walks towards Rizzoli. But as soon as she sees a glimpse of the victim, she freezes.
Rizzoli: What's wrong?
Elena lost her voice. She runs towards the victim.
Elena: OMG! O NO! NOT HIM! She falls on her knees and starts to cry.
Rizzoli: Do you know him?
Elena: Yes. (mumbles through her tears)
Rizzoli: Come here. Rizzoli takes Elena in her arms and comforts here whilst she is crying.