This is the rewritten first chapter, I didn't think it would come out as crappy as it did, but in my opinion this version is much better

Within The Eighth Espada's Mind

'How long has it been?'
'How much longer must I suffer?...'
'Hurry and Put me out of my Misery!'
'Damn that Kurotsuchi, all that time in Las Noches I never imagined I'd die by the blade of, Someone like that...'
'Then Again... Even with all the promises he made to me...'
'With all the talk about giving a sense of signifigance to my existence.'
'Even my death was Insignificant to him'
'Damn that Aizen, Self-Serving Bastard...'
'Well Kurotsuchi did do something for me...'
'He taught me an interesting lesson...'
'Do not place too much faith in yourself and none in anyone else, Nobody is invincible.'
'I learned that the hard way, Beleiving in a lie I had convinced myself was true in order to give my life false meaning.'
'The lie was that I was Invincible, that I would never lose to Death, that I would be Eternal, That I was a being that Transcended all others.'
'The truth was that cheating death was not possible if I did not see death coming.'
'How long has it been?'
'Wait, the pain is- ...Fading?...'
'His blade was sent straight through my heart, but I no longer feel It, I don't feel his blade in my chest is it finally over, after all these CENTURIES?'
'Finally, I, Former Espada 8, Szayelapporro Granz Am Passing on...'
'I Have always wondered what this place they call the SoulSociety is Like...'

In The Vast Lands of Hueco Mundo

As The Former Espada's body began to fade in the sands of Hueco Mundo he felt hope in his heart.
'Heart?'
'When was the last time I felt this Beat in my Chest?', he wondered.
And at that moment the last of him faded.

In The Soul Society (West Rukongai)

When he awoke he didn't feel as... Empty as he once had.
He felt whole again after so long, he felt his chest to make sure his 'new discovery' was still there, with a smile he confirmed that it was.
His smile quickly dissappeared at the feeling of being forced against the wall of a nearby building.
Taking into Account the features of the Attacker: The Claws that were unpleasantly pressed against his neck, the mask that covered the whole face, the big bulky body.
He Quickly realized what was happening.

"You're A Hollow!"
"Yeah, but not just any hollow...", The attacker replied.
"What are you saying?", Szayelapporro Replied.
"Don't You Recognize Me?"
"No I don't", Szayelapporro Replied.
"Hmpfff!, That hurts, I thought you'd remember me", The attacker replied.
"Who Are You!", Szayelapporro replied, obviousley irritated.
Suddenly the attacker grabbed the bottom of his Mask and tossed it to the ground.
"I'm Grimmjow Jaggerjacques, Don't you remember me- Partner?"
"Grimmjow?-"
They were interrupted by a flying kick to the side of Grimmjow's Face that suprisingly- Considering his Insane Strength- Sent him flying Several feet.
"Whoever you are, Thanks fo-", Szayelapporro Started.
"I'm not out yet!"
Grimmjow jumped into the air and landed atop his enemy with a spinning kick.
Now that his life wasn't being threatened and he had a chance to get a good look he noticed that Grimmjow looked different.
Most of his features from when he was a Vasto Lorde instead of an Arrancar had returned, except for his ability to stand upright, that wasn't gone yet, though it seemed it soon would be.
But strangely his power was actually greater.
"Lieutenant Kurotsuchi do you require assistance or would you rather us bring the victim of this attack to safety?", Three low-level Shinigami asked who had just shown up.

"Two of you stay and help me and one of you bring him away from here!", Nemu Kurotsuchi Replied.
Suddenly a Massive Reishi (Spirit Energy) Filled the area.
"On second thought..., Don't bother, The Captain's Here", Nemu said.

"My, My... you were all making so much noise that I could not help my curiosity, and then I come and find that a Runt like this is what's causing all the commotion?", The Captain Spoke.
"Anyway, the point is that I'm bored today, and this should add some excitement to my day..."
"Ban...Kai..."'
"Your name is Grimmjow, Correct?"
"That doesn't Matter"
"When I'm Done nobody will be able to match your name to your face, it will be unrecognizable", Mayuri Taunted.
"Bring it!", Grimmjow Shot Back

"Oh, don't worry, I will..."

T-B-C (To Be Continued)