And another one! Let's go!
Little changes again! Poem-correcting time!!!!!
Disclaimer: I don't own the amazing Edward/Bella pairing, it's a bit too much for my little mind....
My nine reviews are my nine wonders of the world. Let's try and reach ten, all right?
My love for you is strong enough to fill the sky
To turn the earth around and tear my soul apart
Because I have to leave and with you stays my heart
Despite my awful pain I cannot even cry
I was such a danger as long as we were close
But anyway it's hard to be away from you
Never to see again the one I'm so linked to
The night I fled from you my bright sun never rose
To keep somehow an eye on my precious human
The one always with me however far I ran
I tried to track the last still dangerous for you
But now I can't pretend, I really failed it all
And my escape from love led us to our downfall
To erase this error there's nothing I can do.
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If there are mistakes, let me know!