I would like to apologize to everyone who liked this story first. I'm taking it down from the site. It really bothers me the way it's set up, and I don't think I can continue writing it the way it is. There were several problems with it, and I don't have the inclination to list them all off. I will be re-uploading it eventually, but it will be drasticly different. Once again, sorry if your really enjoyed this, but it is in the best interest of the story and myself that it be changed.
-800M23
P.S. I will have some other stuff up on a certain holiday that occurs six days before the end of the year. Gifts to people who want them basically. Until then.