Author: Atlhantis
Disclaimer: I know, I know. The characters are not mine, blah, blah, blah, they belong to the ones to blame for our needs of creating new realities. Timeline: Several weeks after Pitch Black
Distribution: You want this crap?!, go ahead, just give me a little yell (not literally, obviously).
Author's notes: This is not my natural language, please be kind. I couldn't help but cried out for what happened, so I'm gonna change things a little, ok, a lot. For now it's G ranting, I'll let you know if it changes
Feedback: Please, I'm begging for it!!!, alright, clearly I'm not on my knees and much less on my legs, my ass is sitting well, but my spirit is pleading!
There were arriving to the new city, the promised land. The journey had been really quiet, each merged into their own thoughts, they had lost so much already, not only the lives of the ones they cared about and the ones they` d learnt to cared about in, but they also had lost something of their own beings, a part of their bodies who still cried out to be rescued, to be told that they were not feet away from being dead.
Jackie could hear her cries echoing the cold atmosphere as well as her mind. She was running so fast, there had been heard gunshots and a man screaming, it was Zeke, she had run so fast, but there was nothing left, except dust and blood ... and that man. She remember her face, Shazza' s swollen eyes, after seeing his mate gone. They have saved her, and now she saw the sadness on the woman's face. Then she remember her own cries when she saw her died, been eaten by hunger creatures in the dark, as her body was dismembered, she continued screaming for her to stay down. She lost both of them, first Zeke and then Shazza, both who had taken her in as bushwhackers, without asking her questions, without turning their backs, the just have took her in, to protect her. If only, she could have done the same for them.
There were three boys, three little and inocent boys. He kept repiting himself, and he let them all get killed. After the two first ones, have died, he swore he wasn't let anything happen to Suleiman, he was going to protect him, untill they reach safe the skiff. But he had failed him. Just as he failed the others. He died only meters from it, down the valley. Ali was the first one, he was so young, he wasn't even there to prevent him not to enter that place, he didn't even notice he was mising, untill it was to late. And then it was Hassan, who had died for the same reason, for his ineptitude, he should have keep him by his side, but in a moment of desperation he turn his back, and by the time he turned again he was already gone. He could see when their parents took the kids to him, to teach them about Ala's great power and importance, but not even his mercy could save them on time.
Not for me, don't die for me
Never in his entire life, Riddick thought it was possible for him to ever cared about somebody, and never to fall in love with somebody, until that endless night, when he lost everything and anything he could have ever have. Carolyn, his sweet pilot Carolyn. She had saved him, the only thing he could not do for her, now that she was dead, for ever, she was never coming back, he thought he loved her, but now he didn't have the chance to see if such a monster could ever love someone. If only things had turn out differently
Disclaimer: I know, I know. The characters are not mine, blah, blah, blah, they belong to the ones to blame for our needs of creating new realities. Timeline: Several weeks after Pitch Black
Distribution: You want this crap?!, go ahead, just give me a little yell (not literally, obviously).
Author's notes: This is not my natural language, please be kind. I couldn't help but cried out for what happened, so I'm gonna change things a little, ok, a lot. For now it's G ranting, I'll let you know if it changes
Feedback: Please, I'm begging for it!!!, alright, clearly I'm not on my knees and much less on my legs, my ass is sitting well, but my spirit is pleading!
There were arriving to the new city, the promised land. The journey had been really quiet, each merged into their own thoughts, they had lost so much already, not only the lives of the ones they cared about and the ones they` d learnt to cared about in, but they also had lost something of their own beings, a part of their bodies who still cried out to be rescued, to be told that they were not feet away from being dead.
Jackie could hear her cries echoing the cold atmosphere as well as her mind. She was running so fast, there had been heard gunshots and a man screaming, it was Zeke, she had run so fast, but there was nothing left, except dust and blood ... and that man. She remember her face, Shazza' s swollen eyes, after seeing his mate gone. They have saved her, and now she saw the sadness on the woman's face. Then she remember her own cries when she saw her died, been eaten by hunger creatures in the dark, as her body was dismembered, she continued screaming for her to stay down. She lost both of them, first Zeke and then Shazza, both who had taken her in as bushwhackers, without asking her questions, without turning their backs, the just have took her in, to protect her. If only, she could have done the same for them.
There were three boys, three little and inocent boys. He kept repiting himself, and he let them all get killed. After the two first ones, have died, he swore he wasn't let anything happen to Suleiman, he was going to protect him, untill they reach safe the skiff. But he had failed him. Just as he failed the others. He died only meters from it, down the valley. Ali was the first one, he was so young, he wasn't even there to prevent him not to enter that place, he didn't even notice he was mising, untill it was to late. And then it was Hassan, who had died for the same reason, for his ineptitude, he should have keep him by his side, but in a moment of desperation he turn his back, and by the time he turned again he was already gone. He could see when their parents took the kids to him, to teach them about Ala's great power and importance, but not even his mercy could save them on time.
Not for me, don't die for me
Never in his entire life, Riddick thought it was possible for him to ever cared about somebody, and never to fall in love with somebody, until that endless night, when he lost everything and anything he could have ever have. Carolyn, his sweet pilot Carolyn. She had saved him, the only thing he could not do for her, now that she was dead, for ever, she was never coming back, he thought he loved her, but now he didn't have the chance to see if such a monster could ever love someone. If only things had turn out differently