This is my first fan fiction and I take criticism very well. So please tell me if anything is wrong with the story. This prologue is just a test to see if I should continue.
Disclaimer: I don't own Twilight! Only John,Christina,Annabella,Talon,Taygen,Victoria,Peyton,and Ryland!
"Come on Anna! If we don't hurry we will miss out flight!" my dad,John,shouted.
Honestly, I would not mind if we missed our flight. I still don't understand why we have to move from sunny,wonderful California,to dreary,boring Forks,Washington. We've lived here our whole life and I wish mom and dad would let me live with my best friend in the whole world,Carrie.
"Ann,mom said that if you don't come on I get to drag you!" hollered Talon,my annoying 13 year old brother.
Oh,right! I'm Annabella Reynolds. I am 17 years of age,20 mentally. I have 5 sibling plus mom and dad. Mom is Christina. She is a nurse. My dad is John. He is a landscaper. Next, there is Talon and Taygen, 13 year old identical twins. They are both pains. Then, there is Victoria,12,Peyton,7,and Ryland,1. They can be annoying,but I love them dearly.
I walked out of my bedroom and into the driveway. There sat my 2012 Audi a6. It's my baby. I got it for my 17th birthday. If anything happened to it I would cry for weeks!
"Hi Annie," Peyton said. He's the only one that calls me Annie anymore. It's sad really, everyone thinks I don't like being the little kid anymore. I understand that my parents have a lot of children, but they just don't talk to me as much.
"Annabella get in the car we're leaving," Christina said. I don't like calling her mom because she's the one that told dad al these lies about me. She was just jealous that I got all the attention before her. She knows she isn't my real mom. She died during labor so I never got to meet her. The only thing I have is Christina, so I have to be nice to her.
I got Peyton and Victoria buckled in my car and got in myself. I put the key in the ignition and mentally prepared myself for the long journey ahead. I'm sure everything will be fine.
Right?
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