/Remaking a little of my story still same premise I have been reading it over

/Also I own nothing except my own ideas/

'the red lord' someone thinking

"Is back" someone speaking

'It begins again' flashback

"hello anyone out there" Transmissions

7,150 years before IZ series

Welcome young ones let me tell to you of a tale that many fail to truly comprehend. This story began long before humans walked the Earth.

To start this story we must go to another planet now I know what you are thinking "go to another planet *snort* like aliens are real." Well let me tell you this; there are many things humanity doesn't understand about Earth. Let alone the universe.

So let us continue on a distant planet called Irk, or as my people knew it as Maat, we find ourselves drawn to the capital of the planet. Within one of the rooms we find many different irkens surrounding a pregnant irken female. The females name was Nut (AN: I kid you not the Egyptian goddess's name was Nut) she was giving birth to her four children. Her eyes were the deepest blue any one could imagine with tiny white specks in her eyes making it look like the night sky. Her antenna where long curled in a whirlpool like fashion.(AN I will not be saying heights just imagine them all the size of normal humans)

"Geb when this is over I am making sure you can never give me children ever again!" Shouted Nut, said mentioned Irken paled and hoped she would not remember saying that. He had green eyes, a rarity among irkens. His antenna where battered and dirty speaking of a life of hard work. "Just one more push your highness" spoke the doctor. "I can see your first child." With that said the first one was born. The young irken had bright blue eyes like his mother and seemed to give off a sense of calm(AN Just imagine Zim just with blue eyes instead of red). "His name shall be Osiris" said a tired Nut.

The second child was a girl, whom was named Isis her eyes where brown a very rare color for Irkens to have. She too gave off a calming aura but also a very knowledgeable one as well. Her antenna curled around like cork screws.

The third child to be born was female, her name was Nephthysas her eyes where blue like the oceans. She gave off a calming aura that seemed to protect everyone. Her antenna were strait and seemed to flow like a river down her head.

The last and final child was male, however unlike his siblings who had calming eyes his where blood red and showed power behind them. His antenna where just like Osiris's but where more jagged. The minute the others saw him they felt fear for the aura he gave off was that of a chaos irken.

True born chaos irkens where far and few between each other those that were born were either killed or turned into military personnel. They were called chaos irkens because they have powers over certain elements. That and their abilities to kill their foes could at times just be wrong on so many levels when on the battle field.

For each chaos irken born an irken of order is born as well. Depending on how powerful the chaos irken is the more siblings they have. The most though has always been one to one for three irkens of order to be born for one single chaos irken meant terrible things.

"We should kill it" spoke one of the irkens in the crowd getting agreement from others as well "YOU SHALL DO NO SUCH THING!" yelled a deep and powerful voice everyone turned and saw to their shock Amun-Ra standing in the door way of the room. "I come to see the birth of smeets yet I find you all trying to kill one of them!"

"But my lord he is a chaos Irken just like 'HE' is" spoke Nut who feared for her other children. "I know very well that he is like my brother Apophis, but I will not let you kill an innocent smeet for the crimes of others." Spoke Ra with such authority that they backed down.

"I will take the boy under my wing and teach him if you are so against him being in your family Nut, Geb" spoke Ra with a hint of disappointment in his voice. Taking the child who was currently on the table looking confused and hurt by what was going on around it. Wrapping the smeet in a blood red blanket, and walking out of the room he heard them all talking about the other three children in positive ways while whenever they looked at the little smeet they would glare at it and whisper insults at it under their breaths.

As Ra walked out of the building he realized they had never given the little smeet a name. "Now that will never do, what to call you, how about Zim?" question Ra while the little smeet just gave him a flat look that said 'really you're going to call me a stupid name like that.' "Well I guess that name is out the window, how about Set" spoke Ra feeling sheepish before deciding to go with the ancient Irken word for red and deserts. The smeet just nodded his head in agreement "well I guess Set it is then, I wonder how Bast will feel about having a little brother."

Zim awoke with a start trying to piece together what it was he just saw. 'What was that it looked like a dream that humans are so fond of, but that is impossible the almighty Zim's pack should keep him from dreaming. Yet at the same time it felt so real.' As Zim tried to contemplate his dream Gir sprinted into the room like a kid on a sugar high yelling "MASTER I'S MADE WAFFLES."

Fearing for his ability to eat Zim made up a lie rather quickly "Gir if I eat all your delicious waffles there will be none for you." Zim said praying the little robot would buy into it. Said robot's cyan eyes seemed to widen in shock before running out of the room screaming. "NO I WANT WAFFLES!"

Thanking whatever deity was looking out for him he made his way his closet, having grown till he was just a centimeter below the tallests' height much to his pride. Though for some reason the Tallest looked like they were going to have a heart attack when they saw him. Eventually they stopped screaming and came to the conclusion that it was just Earth's lesser gravity.

He pulled out a blood red t-shirt, regular jeans, and black leather jacket with a blood red symbol on the back. The symbol was that of an animal head that was a cross a dog, an anteater, and a jackal with what looked like rabbit ears on its head. The humans called it the Set animal Zim didn't know why but he felt drawn to it.

"GIR ZIM IS GOING TO SKOOL I DO NOT WANT TO COME HOME TO A DESTROYED HOUSE AGAIN" yelled Zim as he place the wig and contacts on, having decided to change the hair style Zim went with a buzz cut like look for the hair.

Redoing all the chapters may take a while.

/That is the end of this chapter this is just a beginning but I really need help/