Ok, this is meant to be the new version of chapter 1, because after some time I kinda stopped liking it. I'm just limited addition like that. My updates will be slow for ALL my stories for a while because; 1 my laptop broke. 2 my USB the broke after I had all the chapters I was going to write on it… After that I was so upset I didn't want to write anymore so I didn't for a few weeks until I saw some really nick comments and really kind PM's about how good a writer I was and how much they liked my stories. So I thought to myself. I can't just give up! So I bought a new USB(Which by the way are really expensive in our days) and re wrote this chapter and here I am!
"Foolish Man" – Hikari/Ella's Brother/Kyuubi/Creature Speaking
'Foolish Man' – Hikari/Ella's Brother/Kyuubi/Creature thinking
'Foolish Man' – Normal Thinking
"Foolish Man" Normal Speaking
/Foolish Man/- Parsletongue
London, November 8th 1989
Ella Potter was a petite girl, a little shorter that most girls her age. With beautiful emerald green eyes, she was the prettiest girl in her year. Her shoulder length hair was soft and smooth, even after the years of abuse and rough cutting. Her pale skin was from being kept in the cupboard under the stairs. She would've been mistaken for an anorexic girl. Soaked from head to toe, her hair was currently damp and her deep green eyes held confusion.
'Today was a Horrible day.' Ella thought. 'I got kicked out of the house just after I got home. Why did the kick me out anyway?' the soaked girl thought. 'Was it because of the fact dudly kept saying how I was talking to the garden snake?'
It was funny, how Ella thought of the place she was abused for so long as a home. She never did think of the dreaded house like that.
It was probably was because she lived there for 9 years.
It wasn't that she wanted to live there but, she had nowhere else to go. She was wondering; with nowhere to go, nowhere to sleep, nothing to eat and drink.
Turning right for the abandoned playground which was long forgotten when another playground had opened. Walking through the playground gates she a flash of light, her curiosity driving her she walked to the direction the light came from only to see nothing but empty playground. She suddenly realising something. She didn't know what to do. As she was finally hit with the hunger and coldness she started to feel faint and dropped down on her knees. 'Finally,' she thought ' I start to lose consciousness.'
There was another large flash of light and she only saw that there was a blur of silver hair before she slipped into unconsciousness.
Kakashi was just walking down the street after a B-rank solo mission. He wasn't allowed to bring anyone. But in the end he wouldn't want anyone to see what he had to do, he had to dress up like Gai, in his latest green spandex group of...Kakashi shuddered. Youthfulness.
Anyway back to the story-line.
He was walking down the street that was dimly lit with random cats walking around, hissing warnings to him.
He walked past a empty park and then when he was momentarily blinded by a flash of light. Once he could see properly he saw a lone figure collapse in the playground. He ran forward and gasped at what he saw, a girl who seemed starved and abused lay on the ground. A scar from what it seems like a she hit something hard and pointy traveled from her neck to her ribs. That scratch could have been fatal as it looked to be so deep it could've drawn a lot blood. He studied the girl at a different angle before deciding that she would be brought to Konoha to be treated, so he carried her back to Konoha as quick as possible.
The next day in the hospital...
"Kakashi, where did you find this girl?" Tsunade demanded.
"In the playground outside." he answered with a slightly worried tone. "Why?"
"Because she has shown signs of long term abuse."
"Excuse me? Did I hear you right?"
"Yeah you did." Tsunade answered sadly. "Her room number is 510 if you want to see her." Kakashi nodded and so Tsunade lead Kakashi to the girl's room. The room was completely white with just a side table, a chair and a bed which had a girl who was nearly as white as the covers.
They walked inside and then the girl suddenly started to thrash about screaming. "Get out Kakashi! She's unstable!" shouted the blond Hokage panicking. The Godaime called for help and the medic nins came in and Kakashi got pushed out of the room.
Ella's Pov
'Where am I?' I thought confused 'Why am I here?'
I seemed to be a plain black room with a small white door labelled 're emb r' with rubbed out letters in the blank spots. I walked towards the door and opened it slightly. Looking in I saw a man… had black hair and red colored eyes? There was also a beautiful woman with dark red hair, She had Emerald green eyes just like mine… They were in a dark room that was colored with warm colors as the people there sat under a... kotatsu? Eating with… chopsticks? There was a baby, me as a baby…?
'How am I here? Are these my memories?' I thought.
Then a man came inside the room. He had black, shaggy hair that looked cool and grey eyes that looked like it could've drown you in them.
"Prongs!" he yelled "Moony's here."
Soon enough another man came inside the room.
The man had sandy blonde hair with a face littered with scars. His unusual golden eyes were soft and kind.
'Was this my… my family? ' I questioned myself, Suddenly a giant force threw me up against the opposite wall. I closed my eyes and after the force stopped pushing me I opened them.
I saw a different place instead.
Tsunade's Pov
She's unstable, I had to use my hands to try and start her heart again.
Her heart suddenly stopped and we mourned for the loss of another's life.
The mysterious girl had a scream of pain and then suddenly a green glow came from her body. The scar that was on her forehead was starting to heal at a rapid pase.
By time when she woke up she looked healthy but the cuts a, her body had filled out, her legs she looked perfectly stable.
Then she started to speak though that wasn't what shocked me.
I was the fact that she spoke another language… only known by shinobi of high rank. The outside world did not come to the elemental lands. Everybody walked out silently and I was left alone with her.
"Who are you?" I asked in English.
"Uh... E-Ella P-P-Potter." She replied scared out of her mind.
"Why were you outside? How did you come to be in the elemental."
"I-I was kicked out by my relatives. I-I don't remember t-the rest" Ella stuttered.
Ella's Pov
"W-why a-am I-I here? Who are you…?" I asked.
"You are here in Konoha because you were injured, I am Senju, Tsunade. Oh sorry, Tsunade Senji I am one of the three Sannin. Do you have any relative's we can report to and stay with in Konoha?" Tsunade asked softly.
"I… I don't know… where is konoha?"
"In the elemental lands."
"Where... what… are the elemental lands?"
"The elemental land are a place for shinobi and civilians to live in peace, a shinobi is a ninja that has the capacity to mold chakra, or as you people on the outside world call it magic. Judging by the amount of chakra you have, right now you have just enough chakra to keep you alive... which isn't normal or good... I'll need to take a blood sample to see if you have any more relatives in Konoha."
I shook my head, "N-No… no blood…", I muttered bushing the sheet back as I crawled backwards and further away from her.
"It's ok, It won't hurt that much I promise" she answered and she walked towards a cabinet and took out a needle the size of my pinky.
"I just need about half of the needle filled with blood." She explained and inserted the needle inside my arm.
"Please don't" I whispered shaking my head.
"It's ok, It's ok" she said as I felt something pierce my skin
She suddenly pulled the needle out and she paled at the sight of my blood.
She quickly said goodbye and left while I stared at my arm in wonder one question was on my mind... who am I?
Tsunade's Pov
'I had to give her minor chakra sedation just to get her blood… she would have completely panicked without it'
I heard a light buzz showing that she had a relation match in Konoha.
'She couldn't be,' I thought as I matched blood samples. 'She's another one of that clan.'
'I better call him then.' Tsunade thought as her eyes widened. 'This is impossible!' she thought making her way to His room. "I have very important news for you," Tsunade said as the guest sat down. "It's sudden but I think you can handle it." There was a pause, and then she finally broke the news to him. "You seem to have a relative in Konoha."
As she finished her sentence, the guest froze. He slowly turned around to face Tsunade and finally spoke "Are you sure?" Unsure if it was just a prank.
"Yes. She appeared just a few hours ago." Tsunade said firmly.
"Are you sure?"questioned the guest, still not believing her.
"Positive," confirmed Tsunade "Look at the blood test." She showed her the results and put them in a folder.
The guest froze and spoke three words that were whispered quietly "Where is she?"
"In room 510" she replied
The guest rushed quickly downstairs and looked through a window on the door.
There she was, asleep on the bed, as white as the sheets.
"She's here,"he whispered amazed. "I can't believe it."
As he rushed through the door quietly, he seethed at all the bandages. 'Who dared hurt Her!'
"Have you told Kurenai yet" he asked
Tsunade shock her head just as the door slammed open revealing a flushed Kurenai.
Kurenai stopped catching her breath staring a Ella in shock. She couldn't believe what she was seeing, the guest turned to her, his red eyes darkening as he glared at her "You have to right to see her wrench" he growled. Kurenai glared right back at him.
"She's my niece, I have every right to be here" she hissed
"Then where were you when her, no, our clan was getting slaughtered, huh? Where? I had to put a seal on her memories Just so she wouldn't be traumatised no 4 year old should see their family murdered, I had to send her to the outside for her own safety, Where were you than Kurenai?" he spat venom dripping from his words.
"The Dansu no burēdo Clan was strong, but they were growing arrogant due to the fact they had been given the Shikon Gem by Kami with other gifts from Yami, Shinigami and Amaterasu. They deserved to die, you knew what they did to her, they made me fuse the Shikon Gem with her, because of them she was hunted like a dog for her power, my sister never wanted that for her."
"That may be true but it gave her tremendous pow-" he was cut off when a small but angelic voice Of Ella broke them apart from their fight.
"U-uh excuse me, b-but w-who are you" Ella asked completely confused and slightly calmed from the sedation.
The guest walked up to her and grabbed her hand "My little hana [Translation;Flower] you need to trust me, I need you to clear your mind to restore her memories clear your mind I need to restore you memories" he said in English. Ella was hesitant at first as she stared into his red eyes that held so much love and trust, before she started nodding "Now my dear Hime this will hurt a bit but bare with me" Ella gave him a nervous smile.
He placed his hands on her head before a golden glow similar to her but less radiant appeared surrounding his hands, Ella's head started to ache when suddenly She felt something pull her into her mind as she passed out.
Dream/Memory
"Hikari, come down here you need to get your training started" shouted a man with white hair and blazing red eyes, this man was Tsuyo-sa Dansu no burēdo the head of the Dansu no burēdo clan and my papa. My name is Hikari Dansu no burēdo and I'm four years old!.
"Coming Oto-san" I shouted running down the stairs I looked out the window on the stair case only to be confronted with a red glow in the distance. Confused I thought, 'Hey... wasn't that were the other clan houses where, are there having a bombfire?' my eyes widened when I realized they were on fire. "Oto-san!, Oto-san! The other clan houses there on fire" I shouted in panic.
I ran down and out the house until I reached my father who had his sword out aimed at the door "- Take your Shimai (sister) and leave NOW"
"Nii-san where are we going, what's going on" I asked.
"Hikari we need to get you out of here, It's not safe anymore, Oto-san's going to fight them of as hard as he can but we need to get you somewhere safe first" he answered.
"No! No! I woun't leave oto-san" I shouted sobbing, slippig out of Nii-san's hands and started running towards Oto-san. He was surrounded, looking back he saw me.
"Hikari GO!" he shouted.
"Bu-"
"Go!"
I nodded and started taking steps back as I saw the one thing that would haunt me for a long time. Before running back. I thought about what he'd last said. Nii-san caught up to me and we ran in silence from then on until we reached the edge of the village, nii-san chanted a few words before a bright light blinded my vision and darkness over took me.
Dream/Memory Over
Ella or should I say Hikari blinked back the blinding hospital lights before as tears started to trail down her cheeks, she remembered everything, every little detail, Hikari(Ella) continued to sob in her hands when her brother wrapped his arms around her trying to south her sobs. He removed his hands from her body before doing multiple hand signs dropping the genjutsu around Hikari.
Revealing her to be a good few inches taller, her once completely jet black now had red streaks and had slight wavy curls. Her Emarald eyes though still green now glowed the supernatural glowing green colour as the killing curse; the Avada Kedavra. Her legs instead of bruised got creamer and smoother, her lips got plumper and redder and her eyelashes were longer, and she gained feminine aristocratic features of a pure blood wizard. She was pretty enough for one to think she was part Veela. You could tell she was going to be extremely beautiful when she was older.
Suddenly she started screaming, in pain, she clutched her side a batch of red liquid started to stain her shirt. Blood… Her blood. Two red eye widened in shock, ripping the fabric where the blood was pooling he stared in silent rage, a chakra/magic binding lay in front of him on her side. 'That meddling old bastard. How DARE Dumbledore place a chakra suppression seal on her!'
Shifting through hand seals quickly his hands started to glow red placing one hand on her side with the other he made a pulling motion, Hikari screamed bloody murder before gasping for breath, relived of her pain.
Half an hour later, when she had regained her strength and was feeling better she spoke "Nii-san what happened to Oto-san after I left" she sniffed tear stains marking her face.
He stayed quiet for a while before handing her a scroll, which she channeling chakra into, which revealed a new set of clothes It was at this point she realized how tatted, dirty and baggy the clothes she was wearing were she nodded realizing that they would talk properly later.
Once Hikari had gotten dressed in five minutes flat, she was wearing a plain black shirt that fit her to a tee, a pair of black shorts, a sleeveless green hoody and thigh high black socks that stoped about two inches before the shorts showing a line of skin. On her feet she wore plain converse, leaving her hair out to fall to the nape of her neck Leaving the room she turned doesn't that hall in a search for her Nii-san's room. She open many different doors each leading to the wrong person or empty. She opened a blonde boy inside looking rather lonely.
"Are... Are you ok" she muttered staring at the blonde haired boy, making his head snap up to stare at her.
"Oh hi, yeah I'm fine, granny's just treating my wounds after I got into a fight with these bully's." He answered energetically.
"ok... well Ohayo, my name is Hikari Potter or Hikari Dansu no burēdo, it's kind of a mouthful" she smiled.
"My name's Naruto Uzumaki, Future Hokage! Believe it!" Naruto shouted.
"Ok." Said Hikari.
"W-what?" Naruto stuttered.
"I said ok, I believe you" said Hikari. Naruto burst out of the bed and up to Hikari giving her a huge hug, Hikari's eyes widened as she flinched slightly, then she begin to realize how close her and Naruto's face's were, Naruto and Hikari blushed hard before stepping away from each other, just as the door slid open revealing three amused shinobi and one annoyed.
"What were you doing with my little sister you gaki" asked the annoyed red eyed boy.
"Yes Naruto what?" asked an amused Tsunade.
"I-It's not like that" Naruto stuttered.
"Yeah… its not!" Hikari agreed.
Done and Done!
