Chapter 1: "don't touch her"

Authors note: this is set years befor the first BioShock and this guy is MINE also this is befor the big daddys were made


Running down the halls of Rapture was a girl with glowing yellow eyes and a doll. Chased by a very annoyed splicer who has bean chasing the girl for a wile (as in hours). Then the girl got to a huge room that led nowhere the girl looked around then from a balkane, Tenenbaum and the disiner of the big daddy came bursting throw the doors they had guns but no ammo! Then the splicer fell from the seling. The little girl droped her doll as he landed.

"Don't weary it's ok" he sead as he walker forward

In the little area were the water leaked so it was like a pool someone about 6 foot came out.

"I won't hert you" the splicer sead as he heased bake his crow bar

"No you won't" sead the other guy

The splicer terned around and dropped his wepen. Then the guy did a round house kick to the splicers face the charged forward the grabed his face and smashed it into the ground. As the girl wached in aw she fragot adout how scared she was. Then the guy terned tordes the little girl and began to wake over to her.

"STOP" yelled Tenenbaum then the guy stoped and looked at her

"what am i dowing that you want me to stop"? asked the guy

"scaring her" she sead

"if i am scaring her" he sead as he took a few steps bake

"you are not like others" sead the girl

"I like, you i'm called a little sister" sead the girl

"thake you. I will pratect you if you want' sead the guy

"I woud love that! .... but what about the others"? she asked

"I will protect all little sisters" he saed

"why? are you being forsed to"? she asked

"no. I gest can't stand wachig them hert you butufol little girls" he sead

"lets go! we can find angles on the way to more sisters"! she saed then the man terned to tenenbaum

"do you mind if i take care of them"? he asked

"i woud like that." she saed

then the guy terned piked up the little sister's doll and handed it to her

"My name is Sendar" sead the guy


that is the end of this chapter i hop to write more BioShock. please review