my first songfic here it goes.
fangs P.O.V.
I was a prince in my land. I was walking in a bad neighborhood one night when I walked by an abandoned home hearing beautiful music coming from a guitar. I decided I would go into this house since I had a right to go into anyone's home, so I went in quietly. The music had stopped playing and now there was a shower running.
well I've heard there was a sacred cord
David played and it pleased the lord
but you don't really care for music do ya?
well it goes like this
the fourth, the fifth, the minor fall and the major lift
the baffled king composing hallelujah
The inside of the house was in ruins but i could tell someone lived here. I didn't know how anyone could stand living in a dump like this but i would guess it had something to do with money issues. I walked towards the shower to hear beautiful singing.
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
It was definitely a woman. she sounded beautiful like a goddess. I personally didn't believe in god before but this girl was an angel, that much I am sure of. The shower had no curtains so I could see the water running off her bare body. The moonlight reflected off of her showing off her curves even more.
your faith was strong but you needed proof
you saw her bathing on the roof
her beauty and the moonlight overthrew ya
She turned around and screamed quickly grabbing her cloths and throwing them on. I tried to run away but she grabbed me and tied me to a chair in her kitchen." whats your name" my angel asked grabbing a knife.
" fang, yours" she pulled back when she found out my name, you know being the prince and all
" m-max" max stuttered slightly." you came into my house and watched me shower you have to pay somehow"
" but remember you cant hurt me" she looked at my hair, which goes down to my butt, and cut it off so it only reached my shoulders. Max was beautiful with the fire in her eyes, I knew mine were full of lust. My angel sat on my lap straddling me.
" how about cutting your hair?" she said. I didn't reply but instead stretched my neck to bring my lips to hers earning a low moan from both of us. Soon we were in a full out make-out session with me still tied and her straddling me.
she tied you to her kitchen chair
she broke your thrown, she cut your hair
and from your lips she drew a hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
"marry me" I whispered as she pulled away. Suddenly she looked sad
" your family would not except me. I raised myself in an abandoned house, i'm no royal" max said quietly
"You could be, think of it, a beautiful wedding, a nice home someone to love" I tried to convince her
" you sound like your talking about a victory march after a long war. love is nothing but a cold and broken heart" she was whispering right now sounding close to tears. She untied me and started to walk away. I went after her.
oh baby I have been here before
I've seen this room and I've walked these floors
you know I used to live alone before I knew ya?
and I've seen your flag on the marble arch
and love is not a victory march
its a cold and its a broken hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
"max whats wrong" i asked softly. She turned around and looked at me with tears in her eyes
" no ones ever tried to love me before, i'm afraid of getting hurt" she mumbled. I sighed and held her close to me.
" but I love you"
" you don't even know me"
" I feel like I do"
" when I first saw you watching me take a shower your eyes were full of emotion, let me see your emotions fang don't hold back on me" I did as I was told and let my guard down.
well there was a time when you let me know
whats really going on below
but now you never show that to me do ya?
When I did I couldn't help myself from kissing her. The passionate kiss soon turned to hunger, which turned to lust. That night to house was full of moaning and growling from both sides.
I was mesmerized by every breath, moan, or move she made. I completely took her and as we reached our climax she screamed my name making me feel whole inside as I screamed hers. I was glade to be her first and determined to be her last.
and remember when I moved in you
the holy dove was moving too
and every breath we drew was hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
Well maybe there's a god above because I think I just experienced heaven. Max lay in my arms as sweat glistened off of our bare body's. I felt amazing and I wanted to freeze this moment forever.
" all I've ever learnt from love was how to shoot somebody who outdrew me, but fang you showed me and amazing side of love" my goddess smiled up and me then snuggled into my bare chest and rest her head there.
" there are parts of the world that are cold and broken, let me lead you to the light" I whispered in her ear as she drifted asleep. I was the happiest then I have ever been and i'll be damned if she refuses to marry me then i'll probably slip into depression. I love her that much and it has only been one night.
well maybe there's a god above
but all I've ever seen of love
was how to shoot somebody who outdrew ya
and its not a cry that you hear at night
its not somebody who has seen the light
its a cold and its a broken hallelujah
hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah, hallelujah
please tell me what you think and if i should continue with the story or keep it a one shot.