AlbanNeji- Hello everyone! Here is the first chapter of Naruto rewritten! Haha this is where the story is going to get so interesting and exciting so please read and enjoy the sequel to Yu Yu Hakusho Rewritten and that some of the stuff on this chapter will become clearer as the story progresses!
Disclaimer- I do not own Naruto or Yu Yu Hakusho they belong to their respectable owners and that Loren her siblings and friends and any other character that is not part of any of the original cannon belong in a way to me thank you.
Prologue- The New Kid on The Block (Yagari Naruto)
Two figures could be seen running up in the trees, one in a streak of blue while the other was a streak of yellow. I one would look closely they would see it was a woman with blue hair the other a twelve or thirteen year old blond boy. On their backs they could be seen carrying backpacks though the woman was carrying a giant scroll. The gate guards of Konoha were startled as the two figures appeared in front of them. The blond boy panting as he fell face first to the ground as he could be seen glaring at the woman that stood over his form laughing at him and not panting at all.
"You suck mom." The boy said as he sat up and drank the bottle of water that the woman handed him.
"Ah but that's what you get for challenging me to run from Suna to Konoha. Though, I think you over taxed yourself after the fight with your red headed friend."
"Mom! It wasn't like that!" The boy yelled
"Yagari Botan and Yagari Naruto reporting back!" The woman said cheerfully to the gate guards who nodded.
"Hey don't ignore me!" the boy yelled as he raised his hand pointing at his mother who completely ignored him as he saw his mother accept the passes to get into Konoha. Making the guard blush as they stared at her and her revealing figure under the fish net shirt to them it was just like Anko. "You two get away from my mom! Owch!"
"Naruto what have I told you…"
"Don't scare or kill the men hitting on you."
"Right." His mother replied as she petted her son's head. "Now come along we have to report to the Hokage after all you still need to get your headband." His mother said as she happily walked inside the village. As her back was turned she did not see that Naruto was glaring at the guards and making very obvious signals to stay away from his mother.
"So mom do we have to go to the Hokage tower can't I just go to the Academy…"
"No. we have to enroll you first plus you need a note from Sarotobi-sama first you know that. Besides if you show up without the note what will you tell your sensei."
"He won't be my sensei I only get to be there for the test then the team placements how can that be considered that I have to call them sensei?"
"Just do it, alright."
"Fine." Naruto muttered as he walked near his mother as they neared the Tower his mother gave the secretary their passes and told her that they were here so Naruto could get his headband and for her to reinstate herself as a shinobi.
"The Hokage will be with you in a second." The secretary said as both Naruto and Botan nodded and waited in one of the comfy chairs near the Hokage's office.
Elsewhere in the Academy for shinobi were some very familiar figures, Loren who was sitting near her siblings with Sharon and Gaby. Josue could be seen sleeping his head on the desk, Melina playing with Boogy-Kun and talking about how she missed her Jack. Loren could be seen drawing in her sketch pad as she listened to her friends talk about how the Konouchi in their class were bimbos. Gaby was telling Sharon on how the only decent Kunoichi was Hyuuga Hinata and made Sharon ask Loren what she thought what was so great about the class 'heartthrob' Uchiha Sasuke.
The boy near Loren with black hair and black eyes and an Uchiwa fan on his back blue shirt looked at Loren as she was asked that question.
"Hmm." Loren stopped drawing for a bit as she put her pencil neck to her lips as she tried to figure out how to answer that question. "Personally I really don't care of his bad boy image that the rest of the girls portray him as… you know my type anyhow so that speaks for its self." Loren replied making the boy near Loren look at the rest of their group curiously wanting to find out what was the type of his crush.
"Yah we know." Replied Gaby.
"I don't know?" Sharon replied looking puzzled as she looked at Loren for an answer. "Can you tell me Loren? Is it Naruto?"
"Eh? Why does everyone think Naruto is my type?" Loren asked shocked as both of her friends looked at her with a 'you got to be kidding look.'
"Well…" Gaby started out.
"You do talk about him a lot. You two grew up together, he has a crush on you, and you two always hang around each other when you visit him."
"What did you say?"
"Hang around each-"
"No before that!"
"Has a crush on you."
"When did he develop a crush on me?" Loren yelled a she back away from her friends in shock not noticing as she backed into the boy behind her a bit harshly as both toppled over to the ground just in time as two of the most annoying Uchiha fan girls came into the room. Which were Haruno Sakura, who had bright long pink hair and a big fore head, the other a pretty platinum blond named Yakamaka Ino.
"Owch!" Loren said as she sat up not noticing that he boy she was straddling was Uchiha Sasuke. Though some of the boys in the classroom; could plainly see that Sasuke didn't mind that one Perez Loren was straddling him. "Dame you guys you shocked me with that info." Loren said as she stopped a bit as she noticed that she was on top of Sasuke. "Oops Sorry Uchiha-san." Loren said as she stood up and helped Sasuke who was blushing a bit.
"HEY LET GO OF SUSUKE-KUN'S HAND HE DOESN'T WANNA TOUCH A GIRL LIKE YOU!" Sakura screeched as she pointed her finger at Sasuke and Loren's joint hands. Loren sighed as she let go of Sasuke's hand much to his disappointment.
"Whatever…" Loren sighed as she walked to her seat ignoring Sakura who wanted to punch her.
"WHATEVER! You can't ignore me!"
"Oh shut up pinky! I don't like Uchiha-san like that he is not my type!" Loren yelled as this got the attention of every girl and her siblings and friends attention. One of the girls in the classroom who was brave enough or stupid enough to ask Loren what her type was, asked.
"So if Sasuke-kun isn't your type who is?"
Loren sighed as she motioned her brother to hand her bag. "I don't have it sis. Ask Mel." Josue replied as he pointed to their younger sister while yawning. Melina smiled at her older sister while she grabbed her bag which was right next to Boogy-Kun.
"Thanks Mel."
"SO Loren are you really going to show them your type." Gaby asked her friend who nodded.
"Yah I'm going to show them Jin and Toya besides you like them too, they are so dreamy and cute." Loren sighed as she got a nod from Gaby while Sharon's eyes widened in realization.
"Oh! Well personally I like Shishi-chan. Thank you for the picture of him Loren." Sharon replied as she got a glassy like look on her face.
"Your welcome!"
This got everyone's attention as suddenly Loren pulled out a framed picture of two men one red head that seemed to be floating in mid air no socks and in a white fighting uniform the other was a very cool like man with light blue hair with green bangs and icy blue eyes. On the picture were two signatures and on the back was a paragraph explaining…' To our very Supportive lass, thank you for giving us a very good fight! It even made my ears prick up! They haven't pricked up since Urameshi's fight whooeh it was awso- Sorry for Jin's instanced writing we would just like to thank you for the sparing matches. From Toya and Jin'
"Y-you got an auto graph from them!" Gaby yelled as she grabbed her best by the shoulders as she shock her. "Why didn't you tell me they were giving pictures away you could have gotten some from the other teams it was so not fair that you and Melina had to go!" Gaby yelled.
"Stop shaking me. Hey! It wasn't even intentional! They just thanked me just for sparring them and dam did it hurt. Toya was not generous it was freaking cold!"Loren muttered as Gaby's eyes widened as she realized why she didn't tell her the way she even got it was getting a sparing mach for each of the demons. The girls in the room looked at the photo and blushed but where shocked as Gaby, Sharon and Loren let out a girlish squeal. Which, made Josue and Melina sigh as they were use to it when their sister got mail form those two; who Botan received then gave it to Koenma who sent it to the Hokage who sent it to their apartment Josue though sleepy did notice that Uchiha Sasuke glare at the picture with Toya and Jin in it in the picture that Loren and her friends were squealing at. The girls were just shocked that the girls that did not like Sasuke-kun were acting so out of character.
Loren coughed as she was done squealing at the picture of Toya and Jin with Gaby and Sharon, when she turned to glare at Sakura. "So you see Sa-ku-ra my type is the wild type while Sharon is the cool type though I guess for Gaby it's that wild type like me, right." Gaby nodded as she let out another squeal with a photo of Jin, Toya, Shishiwakamaru, and Susuki taking a group photo waving at the camera. "So there! Bleugh! I do not like Uchiha Sasuke!" Loren yelled as this snapped Sasuke out of his glaring fit at Group picture of the good looking demons.
'I don't like Uchiha Sasuke! Don't like, like, like…..' Sasuke heard as he stared at how Loren sat with her friends ignoring his most annoying fan girl. Who, by the way was glaring at Loren, though as Sasuke sat next to his crush he vowed to himself that he would make Perez Loren his girlfriend and make her forget about those MEN!
"Attention students!" Their teacher Iruka-sensei yelled getting the attention of all the students in the classroom as they stopped talking as they paid attention to Iruka. "Good I have your attention. This will be the last class for some of you and to become shinobi of Konoha…" Iruka trailed off as there was a knock on the classroom door as the door was opened slowly revealing to the class a blond haired boy with goggles on his head.
"Sorry for the interruption but Gramps told me to come to this particular classroom I have a note from him." The boy said as he handed a slip of paper to Iruka who began to read the note her eyes narrowing with each word as the boy looked around the rest of the classroom which he was getting curious looks.
"So Yagari Naruto was it?"
"Yes."
"Ah so please introduce yourself to the class and then take a seat till I call your name for the exam."
"Sure!" Naruto replied as he stepped up to the front of the class. "Hello my name is Yagari Naruto it will be a pleasure to work with you all." Naruto said happily as his smile got blushes from some of the girls.
"Alright Naruto please go sit next to Ino. Ino please raise your hand." Iruka said Ino with a blush on her face raised her hand as Naruto walked up to his seat as he said hi to the girl next to him who only blushed and muttered a hi in return. This startled a few of the girls as Ino Yakamaka was a hard core Uchiha fan girl.
"Alright now when I call your name please…."
"So, Botan how was it going to Suna and trying to look for the remaining Hikari?" The third asked the woman in front of him.
"Hmm? Oh it was fine unfortunately the only remaining Hakari was apparently a shock for me… the Kazekage apparently married into the Hakari clan and had three children." Botan said as bit as she stared bordly " I met them and they are okay I guess…"
"Something is troubling you?"
"Yes… I found out one of them is a Jinchuriki, the youngest in fact what is more troubling is that the seal is unstable. From what Naruto has found out about him is that he can't sleep at all or else the Ichibi will consume his soul and wreak havoc but I found it's not the Ichibi's fault apparently someone thought it would be great to seal an insane monk with in him too so they could better control the Ichibi and you see what they got a sleep depraved preteen that has thinks the monk is his mother wanting blood!" Botan explained as then she ranted on how she wanted to slowly and painfully torcher the fourth Kazekage.
"Botan I think you should calm down."
"Calm down! You tell me to calm down after what I have seen on how the Kazekage has treated his youngest! It was only because of Naruto that at least has one real friend! Do you know that Naruto is his first friend! His first!" Botan yelled as Sarutobi looked at Botan a bit scared he hoped that Botan wasn't like Tsunade when she lost her temper but apparently Tsunade had rubbed a bit on her. "To think I had to convince him that that monk was not his mother and to try and separate the monk and the Ichibi in his mind. God!"
"So you did help him is he stable tough?"
"He is a bit the Ichibi is trying to help him now after all apparently since I tweaked the seal a bit the Ichibi can come out like Maru. Right now he is training the boy on his sand manipulation and wind."
"Ah that is good now that we got everything covered. Let's see then do you want your old station back? Or …"
"I don't know?" Botan replied sighing a bit. "I don't want to go back in ANBU if I can help it I have Naruto to protect and all… Going back I will be having a lot of mission and won't be able to see him as much."
"How about taking on a team?"
"I don't think so… not to sound a bit rude but the only think I would be able to teach the team are the basics all I have to teach are for my clan and only my clan if I ever have children that is." Botan replied sadly.
"I assume there is a story behind that statement?" The Hokage asked as he stared at Botan who looked sadly to the floor.
"Ah it's nothing Hokage-sama it's just something that happened during my stay in the ningenkai."
"Ah I won't ask again so what is your choice though Botan?"
"Fine I'll go back into ANBU but I want to be in the same team as Yamoto and I will only answer to you, Hokage-sama not your idiotic advisers or Danzo."
"Ah yes they have been getting very aggressive as of late I expect them to come to me at a later date about you coming back and about Naruto."
"Hmp if they expect me to marry someone to restart my clan they got another thing coming also I will kill them if they do anything to Naruto."
"Hai I know. Though I suggest you move back to your clan compound and to watch out from the other clans I think they already found out about you and might try and court you after all they don't want you to wed Orochimaru since he is now a missing ninja."
"Hoe did my life get so complicated?" Botan sighed.
END
To be continued in Chapter One- Team Placements (No I wanted to be with….)
Loren stared bordly at her siblings who with her were waiting for their instructor with Gaby and Sharon who were trying to talk to their team mate who was seemed to have a fake smile on his face and had dark black hair and black eyes and he seemed to be in a traditional hakama that reminded Loren of what Kenshin whore in the cartoon she used to watch in the Ningenkai.
"So your name is Sai? No last name?" Gaby asked in confusement as she got a nod and a smile form the boy.
"Unfortunately no my guardian did not give me a last name. Is that required?" He asked a bit confused.
"Eh? No but we should give you a last name or something…" Sharon thought as Josue yawned and laid down on the grass they sat as he felt his younger sister lay her head on his stomach as his world turned black as the voices around him where muffled. The last thing he heard was the sound of his sisters drawings coming to life as his siblings, Gaby, Sharon and Sai where engulfed in a cocoon like wall made up of sand.
End of Preview…
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