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Disclaimer
I own Johnny,Orli and all the ships ... in my dreams!In reality, I own none o' them oh well,I'll just 'ave 2 keep on dreamin',eh?!
Rite,enough of me wafflin' on,here is the story:
Chapter 1:Not all she seems...
Jack was annoyed. The rum was gone – why, he didn't know – one o' the Pearl's cannons wasn't firing straight – or maybe that was because it was Blind John who manned it – an' that pretty lass in the corner was ignoring him completely. Yep, Jack was definitely annoyed, until...
"Well lookie 'ere," he muttered. That pretty lass was makin' her way towards him. Somethin' wasn't quite right 'bout her, though...
"'Lo, love."
"You're Jack Sparrow, righ'?"
Capt'n, Capt'n Jack Sparrow, he sighed inwardly. "An' what if I am?" he gave one o' his half smiles, showing a gold tooth or two.
"Come ou' the back," she whispered, giving a furtive glance around the bar. Jack congratulated himself silently. Five minutes later, he was outside with the girl. He moved closer and put his hand under her chin.
"You are a pretty one," he leaned in to kiss her, but found himself flat on his back with a sword at his throat.
"No man seduces me that easily, savvy?"
Jack nodded and sat up, "Couldn't resist mate. And that's my word, savvy?"
"I'm a pirate too, alright?"
"Someone get me some rum," he groaned.
"Shut up an' pay attention. Be'ind the bar there's a safe an' I know the combination. I stole the key when no-one was lookin' an' I need you to distract the crowd." "What's in it for me?" Jack was suspicious now.
"Ye'll get 45% o' the loot, what say ye?"
"But ye cannay jus' walk in there an' take it. You 'ave to wait for the opportune moment."
"Ye'll get as much rum as ye can drink..."
"An' a new 'at? An' really bad eggs?"
"Aye, those too. Do we 'ave an' accord?"
"We do indeed."
Disclaimer
I own Johnny,Orli and all the ships ... in my dreams!In reality, I own none o' them oh well,I'll just 'ave 2 keep on dreamin',eh?!
Rite,enough of me wafflin' on,here is the story:
Chapter 1:Not all she seems...
Jack was annoyed. The rum was gone – why, he didn't know – one o' the Pearl's cannons wasn't firing straight – or maybe that was because it was Blind John who manned it – an' that pretty lass in the corner was ignoring him completely. Yep, Jack was definitely annoyed, until...
"Well lookie 'ere," he muttered. That pretty lass was makin' her way towards him. Somethin' wasn't quite right 'bout her, though...
"'Lo, love."
"You're Jack Sparrow, righ'?"
Capt'n, Capt'n Jack Sparrow, he sighed inwardly. "An' what if I am?" he gave one o' his half smiles, showing a gold tooth or two.
"Come ou' the back," she whispered, giving a furtive glance around the bar. Jack congratulated himself silently. Five minutes later, he was outside with the girl. He moved closer and put his hand under her chin.
"You are a pretty one," he leaned in to kiss her, but found himself flat on his back with a sword at his throat.
"No man seduces me that easily, savvy?"
Jack nodded and sat up, "Couldn't resist mate. And that's my word, savvy?"
"I'm a pirate too, alright?"
"Someone get me some rum," he groaned.
"Shut up an' pay attention. Be'ind the bar there's a safe an' I know the combination. I stole the key when no-one was lookin' an' I need you to distract the crowd." "What's in it for me?" Jack was suspicious now.
"Ye'll get 45% o' the loot, what say ye?"
"But ye cannay jus' walk in there an' take it. You 'ave to wait for the opportune moment."
"Ye'll get as much rum as ye can drink..."
"An' a new 'at? An' really bad eggs?"
"Aye, those too. Do we 'ave an' accord?"
"We do indeed."