Hey! This is my first fan fiction. As you will see, it's about a misterious vampire hiding amongst the 104th trainees. And please excuse out any grammar or spelling mistakes as English isn't my first language
A dark, cloudy night lay upon Vohnburg, a town in the southern territory of Wall Rose, as a lonely figure was walking home after a hard day's work. His shift had turned out longer than anticipated and all he wanted to do now was to get some sleep.
The street was empty. Everybody else was already at home, sleeping. It was quiet. The worker loved such silence, as the town tended to get loud and busy during the day due to it being located on the banks of the river.
As the man turned into a back alley he noticed a dark figure at the other end of it. 'Probably another late night worker,' he thought as he continued walking.
But then it hit him. 'This is merely a kid. What is he doing out here all alone?'
The figure started walking towards him. As it passed a street light the worker noticed it was wearing a trainee couat with a hood hiding its face.
"What do you want?" the worker asked as the figure stopped right in front of him.
The figured stared at him from the shade of the hood not answering the question.
After a minute of silence the worker decided not to bother himself with this and started to walk past the stranger. But as he tried to pass the misterious kid he felt a hand grab his wrist.
"Wha-?" he tried to yell but was thrown to the ground before he knew what was happening.
The figure climbed on him, pinning him down whit it's right hand while it covered the worker's mouth whit it's left.
"I am sorry for this," the figure said.
Before the worker could even wonder what that meant he felt sharp and agonising pain on his neck.
So here ends the short prologue. As thi is my first fan fic a critique is more than welcome.