Hey guys! I am new to and this is my first story; I only stared reading FanFiction about a month ago, and since then it has been pretty much Percy Jackson and the Olympians and Heroes of Olympus all the way. Sorry if this turns out to be really bad, as I said earlier this is my first. I always wanted to read a story like this but never found one, so my friend Kat suggested I write one. After about a week of ignoring this advice I finally started working on this story. Please read, review, tell me what you liked and what you thought could've been better. Enjoy!
Percy's Point of View
I was taking a stroll down the north-side Long Island beach, the one inside of Camp Half-Blood. I was going to meet Annabeth. We had grown close over this summer, what with the Titan War and Typhon stirring. Anyway it is her birthday today and I decided (with help from Grover) to get her a golden charm bracelet. I had already bought two charms to put on it, a golden owl and a dazzling stallion. As I turned a bend, I could hear my cocky half-brother Brady's voice. He had been residing in the Hermes cabin, but when we made a deal with the Olympians, they swore on the river Styx they would claim all their children once they reached the age of 13, he was claimed even though he was 15. At least that's what I heard. Only Will Solace from the Apollo cabin saw his claiming. ''Tell me you love me, Annabeth.'' He said. I poked my head round so I could see what the hell was going on. Annabeth and Brady were lying on a beach blanket, my beach blanket, their faces mere inches apart. Annabeth hesitated, looking uneasy, but then he repeated more forcefully this time. ''Tell me you love me, Annabeth.'' What happened next broke me. She told him she loved him and kissed him. I staggered out from behind the rock concealing my presence and let out a low growl. The look on Annabeth's face was made out of shock, horror, confusion and sorrow. A small ''Percy,'' escaped her lips before I threw down the box and stalked slowly towards them. A sneer appeared on Brady's face and the waves became choppy and the sky darkened. A storm was brewing and I was causing it. ''See, Jackson? I got the girl and you got nothing.'' Annabeth walked toward me and put her hands on each of my shoulders. ''Percy calm down you're causing a storm'' I pushed her away, a tear finding its way down my cheek. '' How could you?! I loved you!'' before she could get a chance to explain I ran to my cabin and gathered my things. I took all of the pictures of me and Annabeth and ripped them to shreds and marched to the door; before I could open it fell before me, someone had knocked it down. Outside stood the majority of the campers with indignant looks, plastered on their faces. They started throwing stones at me and because the curse of Achilles had been taken from me last week, I got some pretty hefty injuries. One left a deep gash on my right cheek. As quick as lightning I leapt out the back entrance and ran to the woods. I didn't stop until I got to Thalia's tree, it was then that i whistled for blackjack and flew off into the sky, heading for Manhattan.