Aylesbury
This is a soap/script I have written using people I know and talk to. I enjoyed writing it so I hope someone enjoys reading it! I will be continuing this script each day, the storylines aren't real I just made them up for my script.
Scene 1 – British heart foundation
Clare: good morning girls, can you tag some clothes for me please?
Lucy: Sure!
[Russell walks in]
Lucy: Oh no, he can't see me! Not after last night!
Carla: why what happened?
Lucy: we….. Well, we kissed
Carla: awwww! I had no idea you two were…..
Lucy: were what?
Carla: getting it on
Lucy: no we aren't 'getting it on'
Sybilla: who? What?
Russell: I'm walking Lucy home tonight, did anyone hear about that girl that got strangled last night?
Rodney: ohh dear! Ohh dear
Carla: why are you acting innocent?
Rodney: what are you talking about?
Carla: I know what you did
Lucy: what? You aren't suggesting that Rodney is the killer?
Carla: it's no suggestion
Rodney: oh my….. I am an innocent old man for crying out loud! I am 78 years old!
Clare: stop this nonsense! Honestly, poor Rodney doesn't need all this! Get to work or just get out! All of you!
Scene 2 – Vale Park
Daniel: Dylan, hi
Dylan: erm hi
Daniel: have you seen Lucy?
Dylan: well, she's at work
Daniel: there's something I need to tell her!
Dylan: she's not interested. You took too long and now someone else has her
Daniel: what, since when
Dylan: oops…..
Daniel: Russell?
[Daniel storms off to the B.H.F]
Scene 3 – at the till (British heart foundation)
Glenn: why are you being so funny with Rodney?
Carla: he did it
Glenn: no! No, he didn't ok. Stop it or your going to lose your job!
Carla: good because I don't want to work with a murderer and a boyfriend that don't believe me! Ask Lucy! We saw him last week
Glenn: oh wow, you saw him!
Carla: yeah the night Louise got strangled!
[Russell comes in]
Russell: I'm just going to eat my jacket potato
Glenn: ok cool.
Russell: is Lucy ok with me?
Carla: course. Why?
Russell: she seems a bit off with me today
[Daniel storms in]
Daniel: Russell lets take this outside
Chris: oh for Pete's sake Dan, you have to accept it!
Daniel: I loved her!
Russell: yeah, well I show her a hell of a lot more love and care than you ever could!
You know what your probably the murderer!
Daniel: how pathetic
Russell: where have you been for the past week then?
[Lucy comes in]
Lucy: what's going on?
Russell: him or me?
Lucy: eh?
Russell: he thinks that you seem to be his belonging
Lucy: oh I don't think so!
Clare: GET OUT ALL OF YOU!
Lucy: I haven't done anything!
Clare: your friend is accusing my dad of being a murderer and your fella is fighting I CANT TAKE IT GET OUT WE ARE CLOSED!
[Everyone gets out and Clare locks the door]
Scene 4 – outside
Daniel: you know what, I love you Lucy
Lucy: I'm sorry. Maybe once I did love you, but you ruined it
Russell: we are happy now, so can you just go please?
[Daniel punches Russell and pulls his hair]
[Lucy punches Daniel in the head and pulls his facial hair]
Daniel: ahhh
YOU KNOW WHAT IM DONE
[Daniel storms off]
Russell: are you ok?
[Lucy nods and Russell kisses her]
[Daniel looks back and then throws his phone on the floor]
[An ambulance rushes past]
Glenn: Not another one!
Ok this will be continued tomorrow where there is a big hint on who the murderer is. P.s I'll do a lot more tomorrow