K.V.:
Hello and welcome to the first chapter of our first fiction. You know, I wrote this story up to chapter 20 but then I had a talk with probably one of the best writers on fanfics: shadow phantom, and man did he gave me some great advise! This story is rewritten and is not just any crossover, it has danny phantom, dragonball z, final fantasy, south park, and many others. I've tried to make the story as good as possible and I hope I wont let you down even though I'll never be as good as you shadow! Anyway, the main character is my oc: J.D. and the story commends in amity park, and is about split personalities. R&R people!Disclaimer: I do not own danny phantom nor any characters from those series.
The song in this chapter is 'papercut' from linking park and I do not own this either I only adjusted it to fit this story.
I do own J.D. as he is my oc, zmarco his dog, and his mother.
why does it feel like night today?
Something in here's not right today
Paranoia's all I got left
I don't know what stressed me first
Or how the pressure was fed/but
I know what it feels like
To have a voice in the back of my head
It's like a voice that I hold inside
A voice that awakes when I close my eyes
A voice cackles every time I cry
A voice that laughs every time I fall
and it knows everything
so I know that when it's time to sink or swim
that the voice inside is mocking me/right beneath my skin
it's like I'm/paranoid looking' over my back
it's like a/whirlwind inside of my head
it's like I/can't stop what I'm hearing within
its like the voice inside gets out trough my skin
I know I got a voice in me
Points out all my mistakes to me
If you got a voice on the inside too then
Your paranoia's probably worse
I don't know what set me off first but I know what I cant stand
Everybody acts like the fact of the matter is
I cant add up to what they can
If everybody has a voice that they hold inside
A voice that awakes when they close their eyes
A voice cackling every time they cry
A voice that laughs every time they fall
and it knows everything
and they know that when it's time to sink or swim
I wont be the only one to/ have a voice getting out trough my skin
The comes up
I feel the life betray me
They were moving for what seemed like the thousand time to him. It was only two days ago when his mother told him, and now they were on their way. It's the same thing every year and he started getting used to it; his mother tells him they are going to move, he starts packing his stuff, and before he knows it he lives in a brand new house.
What if his father was still alive, what if his sister was still living with them, would they still move out every year? The thought came across his mind as the car stopped in front of a huge building with the sign 'fenton works' hanging underneath what looked like a giant satellite dish to him.
"were here" his mother yawned. She seemed tired from the long drive.
Your not going to tell me were going to live in this piece of shit?
"hush" thought J.D. as he shook his head.
He opened the door and stepped out of the car. he closed his eyes and wished he wasn't so stupid for looking directly into the sun. it was still early in the morning but the sun was already shining brightly.
"what do you think of it?" his mother asked. She stood next to the car letting 'zmarco' his dog out.
J.D. gazed to the building in disgust. "were going to take that sign away" he hoped.
He looked at his mother and was relieved when he saw her not going to the 'fenton works' signed building but to the one next to it. She started talking to the guy which drove the moving van, giving him instructions of where he had to place the furniture.
J.D. looked away from the building, relieved he didn't have to live in it. Then he accompanied his mother and petted zmarco. "I'm going to take a walk" mumbled.
"alright, but don't stay away too long and don't go too far or you wont find your way back" his mother answered.
J.D. took over zmarco from her and walked down the street.
The air was thinner and warmer then what he was used to where he previously lived,
So he unbuttoned his coat.
Zmarco walked next to him like a loyal dog should, sometimes he saw some cats but he didn't make attempts to chase them, he didn't even bark at them.
When J.D. turned around the corner he bumped into a girl and both of them fell down. Zmarco barked at the girl and tried to bite her.
"down boy!" commanded J.D. zmarco backed up growling.
"you okay?" J.D. asked friendly as he got up and dusted off his coat.
"I'm fine…. Oh, my cake!" the girl muttered when she got up herself with J.D.'s help.
The box she was carrying still lied on the pavement, J.D. picked it up and gave it to her. She opened the box and looked into it.
"not too much damage" she sighted.
Then she looked at J.D. "your not from around here are you?" she asked.
"how do you know?" J.D. returned the question.
"I don't recognize you, and I know almost everyone in amity park" the girl explained.
"I just moved in, my name is J.D." said J.D. and he gave her a hand.
"nice meeting you J.D." smiled the girl as she shook his hand.
"anyway, I need to go, see you around" said the girl as she passed J.D. and walked down the street.
J.D. turned around and looked at the girl.
"I didn't get your name!" he yelled after her.
"that's because I didn't tell you!" the girl yelled back, she turned her head back and started walking again.
What the fuck? Don't people have any more manners these days?
J.D. shrugged and continued his walk with zmarco until he came to a park.
He walked towards a fountain and sat down on a nearby bench and covered his face with his hands.
Zmarco sat down in front of him and turned his head to the fountain.
He growled at it as if there was something wrong about it.
"what's wrong boy?" J.D. asked as he looked up.
Zmarco barked and turned his head to J.D. then he barked again before turning his head to the fountain and wondered.:
"is something there"
He got up from the bench and slowly walked towards the fountain and looked in the water. There was nothing there besides hundreds of coins.
"this is a wishing fountain" J.D. noticed.
"not that I believe in it,… but it doesn't hurt to try" he said and took a silver coin out of his pocket.
Just as he was about to make a wish he noticed something in the water. He thought he saw a woman in it! Just for a second, he saw a green face with red eyes and black long hair, then it disappeared.
J.D. backed up. "what the…" he thought.
He looked forward and took one step in the direction of the fountain…. Nothing.
Then he took another two steps and he stood back in front of the fountain looking in the water. There was nothing there except for the coins but he could swear the water had a green glow.
He couldn't help feeling he was being watched.
Scary shit dude!
J.D. pushed back the voice in his head and started looking for the face he just saw in the water.
"maybe I imagined it" he thought.
He put the coin back in his pocket and walked away from the fountain to the exit of the park, zmarco following in his footsteps.
A guy was watching him from a few bushes in the park.
"good choice" the hidden guy whispered and suddenly disappeared.
J.D. rang the doorbell of his new house.
The stupid bitch didn't even give me a key.
J.D. shook his head as his mother opened the door.
"hey, back already?" she asked.
she stepped aside to let him in and closed the door behind him and zmarco.
J.D. took off zmarco's collar and let him in the living room.
"take off your shoes before going in, we have visitors" J.D.'s mom said before she went into the living room.
"visitors? Already?" J.D. thought while taking off his combat boots.
He walked into the living room, all the furniture got a place but there were still a lot of boxes all around the room.
"were in the kitchen" his mother called from the next room.
I never been in this house! How the hell should I know where the kitchen is!
As usual, J.D. ignored the voice in his head and followed his mother's voice.
Zmarco rolled himself up in a corner and closed his eyes.
J.D. entered the kitchen trough the open door and he saw four persons sitting around the table in the middle of the kitchen.
The first was his mother, a long beautiful woman with blonde hair.
Next to her sat another woman, about his mother's age, she wore a blue hazmat suit and had short red hair. Opposite of her sat a giant of a man, if you didn't knew better you would say he had a square body, he looked kind of dumb and wore a orange hazmat suit, he had short black hair but the bottom was white as were his bangs.
Next to him sat a younger woman, about J.D.'s age, she had long hair she held back with a diadem and it had the same color of the woman's hair. This girl wore a plain black sweater and blue washed off jeans.
In the middle of the table stood a crooked cake on a plate.
"hello J.D." laughed the girl.
"haya! care to tell me your name now?" J.D. grinned.
"you know each other?" asked J.D.'s mom.
"we bumped into each other" J.D. pointed out while looking at the cake.
Good thing she wasn't driving a car!
"I'm jazz" said the girl.
"nice meeting you….again" J.D. laughed as he walked to her and kissed her on the cheek. Jazz blushed when he pulled away his head.
"don't worry, he's not hitting on you, that's how we greet a person we know already in Belgium." J.D.'s mom explained.
More proof you don't even know your own son.
"You came from Belgium?" the woman and the man asked together.
"Originally" J.D.'s mom said.
"but we moved to America when I was 16" J.D. sighted.
he looked down to count his laces. When he noticed he didn't have any because he took his shoes off he looked back up and sat down at the head of the table.
"so, and how can I address you two?" J.D. asked to the woman and the man.
The woman was staring at him, actually she was staring at him from the moment he came in and her look never left him.
"I'm Maddy" said the woman.
The man wasn't staring at J.D., in stead he looked all around the room as if something could jump out the wall and attack them.
Then he did look at J.D. and knocked on his chest with his right hand.
"jack Fenton's the name!" he pouted with a huge grin on his face. Then he started to look around suspiciously again.
Maddy was still staring at J.D. when his mother got up to make coffee to drink with the cake.
J.D. frowned and started looking at himself from his chest to both his arms.
"do I have some dirt on me?" he asked.
Maddy gulped, apparently it got trough her thick skull she was staring rudely.
"how old are you?" she suddenly asked.
too young for you!
"shut up" J.D. thought as he shook his head.
"did I say something wrong?" asked Maddy.
"no it's alright, and I'm 19 to answer your question" J.D. answered.
"hey, our son is also 19!" yelled jack.
Maddy narrowed her eyes when she looked at jack. "you don't need to shout like that dear" she almost whispered.
"sorry, I'm just exited, this may be a good opportunity for him to meet another friend, other than those two he hangs around with for about… all his life." Jack hissed.
"that's true, I don't see why he doesn't have any other friends" jazz said calmly.
They started eating cake when J.D.'s mom returned with the coffee.
"this is good coffee miss…." Jazz started, but she couldn't finish as she didn't get J.D.'s mom's name.
"Kelly dear, and it's coffee from Belgium." J.D.'s mom smiled.
J.D. rolled his eyes and took another bite of his cake.
Jazz looked at him with interest. "are you gothic?" she asked before swallowing a huge chunk of cake which almost made her choke.
"from what did you make that up?" J.D. asked.
jazz started looking at him from head to…his waist as she couldn't see the rest due to the table. "short black hair with both a silver ad red line running trough it, both a red and a silver lens, black clothing, spikes around your neck and wrists… kind of gothic don't you agree." She said sarcastically.
"I'm as clear as water to you huh?" he returned the sarcasm.
"pretty much" said jazz.
"only one thing, I don't ware lenses and the lines in my hair are natural." J.D. said.
now jazz, Maddy and even jack were staring at J.D. in disbelief.
J.D. frowned and looked at Kelly.
"it's true, he was born that way" she said when she noticed J.D.'s plea for backup.
Now jazz, Maddy and jack's mouth hung open wide.
"unbelievable" they whispered.
"if it didn't hurt I would let you poke my eyes for confirmation" grinned J.D.
it was quiet for a while as they finished they're cake and coffee.
One of Danny's friends is also gothic" Maddy broke the silence.
"and danny is the name of your son I take it? Asked J.D.
"yep, too bad he couldn't be here now" said jazz.
"I don't understand why he always leaves this early and comes home that late" sighted Maddy.
"boy's will be boy's" Kelly said.
Yeah right, if a guy isn't home from early in the morning and comes home only late in the night there's usually something behind it.
"for once, I have to agree" thought J.D., not that he cared about what the fenton boy did in his spare time.
"anyway, I'm going to the movie theater this afternoon" jazz changed the subject, "want to come with?"
J.D. looked at his mother and saw she nodded, then he shrugged.
"it's not like I got anything else to do so…. Why not." he lied.
Maddy and jack were looking a little awkward after this answer but they didn't say anything about it.
"I think it's about time for us to leave, we still got a lot of work" said Maddy.
J.D. and his mom got up from their seats and walked the Fenton's outside.
"bye J.D., I'll see you this afternoon" said jazz.
Then Kelly closed the door and J.D. sat down in a comfy chair in the living room.
No question about it, those people are whacked out! No wonder that danny guy hangs around with only those two friends he has, he would be embarrassed to introduce new friends to them.
"What are you saying? That jazz girl looked kind of cute!" J.D. thought.
Zmarco looked up from where he lied and noticed J.D. lied down in his chair, he walked to him and jumped on top of him.
Kelly came back in the room and noticed zmarco lied on top of J.D.
"you know I don't like him doing that" she growled.
"sorry mom" said J.D. and pushed zmarco off of him.
Zmarco growled and lied back in his corner.
"I'm going to take a nap if you don't mind" J.D. yawned as he turned himself to the cushions.
"I'll wake you up when jazz gets here" Kelly answered as she left for the kitchen. "just don't snore too loud" she added.
J.D. grumbled but didn't gave a reply.
A/n: so, what do you think? Pretty lame huh? R&R people, anyway this is only the introduction chapter so its only normal nothing big happens but if I get some reviews within a week I promise I'll make the next chapter a bit more exiting. Anyway, I just heard my favorite writer is thinking of quitting because he doesn't get enough reviews, I say: WE CANOT LET THAT HAPPEN! His story's are the best fanfics has to offer! So when you read this go to the search thingy and input:
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