heyy!!! so this is my first story on here and i wanted to write this cos i thought what would happen if Bella had a sister. there are some interesting twists to this story, so plz read and i promise ill update as soon as i can :).
also could u plz plz plz leave a review to tell me what you think cos then i can see what you think i should improve on, and it also encourages me to write more when i know what u think is good and what you think is bad - btw i do accept annonymous reviews as well so there r no excuses mwa ha ha :D lol xxxxxx
1. Goodbyes
"Mum have you seen my hairbrush?!" I shouted to my mum down the stairs.
"I think it's in the bathroom honey!" she replied.
"Kay thanks!" I shouted back as I ran into the bathroom and tripped over the washing basket. Being a complete klutz really doesn't help when you're running late. I was like my older sister, Bella in that was. She was clumsy too.
"Dani, do you have my passport?!" Bella asked me as she tripped running up the stairs.
"Yeh, it's on my desk!" I told her while packing the last of my essentials in to my suitcase. My mum was going travelling with her new husband Phil, as he plays baseball, so Bella and I were going away for a bit. Bella was going to stay with her dad, Charlie, in Forks, and I was going to stay with mine in England. Even though Bella and I were only half sisters, we were still as close as any sisters can get, and I was definitely going to miss her. Bella was also like my best friend, as we did everything together, always shared stuff with each other, and we had no secrets. So as I was saying my last goodbyes, I couldn't wait for the next few months to be over, so that everything could go back to normal.
After my long, ten hour flight, I was relieved to finally arrive in England. Although I was tired, I ran to embrace my dad as soon as I saw him.
"Dad!" I squealed gleefully as I hugged him tight. Although I didn't see my dad very often, we still kept in contact by phone and e-mail. I had a lot more contact with my dad then Bella had with hers, as it had been years since she had last had any contact with him.
"Dani! I'm so glad you're finally here, I haven't seen you since Christmas, and now it's March!" He replied in a cheerful, but complaining voice.
"I know it's been ages, but oh well, I'm here now."
"Yes, and now that you are we're not going to waste a moment of our time together! I have loads of fun stuff planned for us to do together!" He told me in excited voice as if he couldn't wait to get started.
"That sounds great dad, but first of all I'd like to get settled in and have a shower."
"Oh yes, of course. Come on then, the car's in the car park. Would you like me to carry your bag?" He offered while turning towards the exit.
"No thanks, that's all right dad." I assured as we headed out towards across the car park.
"Okay then. And Bella?"
"Yes dad."
"Welcome back."
"Thanks dad."
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btw i no this chappy is a bit short, but some will be longer then others and i promise there is better to come !! :) xxxx
