*While I do not have a problem with critiques and problems with my work, I am not perfect. If you want to go after grammar, go for it, but this isn't school and I don't catch everything.
I also don't need someone who will attack or rip apart something because they don't agree with it. Not everyone likes King or Koontz or Long, and while I DO NOT think I'm in their class I doubt many of you are in the class with real critics. Be objective.
This is a first for me, it was for a friend and so far she likes it. She is biased though, so I never know if it's good or if she's just being biased.
Also, if you have valid suggestions, please offer them, I may not take them, but I might take pieces of them.
Thanx
Title: Worlds Collide
Fandom: LOTR
Genre: FCHet
Pairing: Unknown, don't know if there will even be one.
Characters in use: Haldir, Galadriel, Celeborn, Elrond, Gandalf, Rumil and Orophin AND just about everyone else from Middle Earth.
Rating: R, now, maybe NC-17 - I haven't decided
Disclaimer: I do not own these characters, they belong to Tolkien. I'm only borrowing them for a little while and will return them unharmed.
*any other character is of my creation and any resemblance to other is purely perception*
Timeline: During LOTR
Warnings: language (for now), violence and mature situations.
Summary: A dimensional shift brings a new world in the West, beyond the sea and sends a member of Middle Earth on a new quest.
*I would really love some input though on this. I mean if it sucks tell me, and then tell me why.*