Ruki44: Um yes, this seems like exactly the same. But it's being revised. Really!
Ruki: For one thing those annoying ellipses are finally mostly taken out.
Rukia: ellipses?
Tetra: Those ... things.
Rukia: Oh. Since when does she care?
Hinata: Since she learned grammer rules.
Ruki: Bet you there is still horrible grammaticial errors in there.
Ruki44: I don't care that much to read through the whole story and be like "OMG DUDE THAT COMMA NEEDS TO GOOOOOOO!"
Tetra: You totally should. You want to be an author don't you?
Ruki44: ! How did you know that.
Ruki: Gee I wonder...
Rukia: To be an author don't you need to be, I don't know, orginial?
Ruki44: Hey, hey. I'm orginial.
Tetra: Which is why you're writing fanfictions and nothing orginial.
Ruki44: I'm writing orginial stories...it's just that I have trouble getting the beginning down. And details. Details suck ass.
Tetra: Sound like key components for any story.
Ruki44: you know what? Screw you! Anyways, Um, I'm not exactly sure you can review on a revised chapter...so yeah. Thanks for rereading it? Or if this is your first time reading it and you would like to review, feel free to do so! I don't own anything!
Tetra: Yeah because if she did, she would actually be orginial.
Ruki44: I really despise you at this moment.
Hylian Phoenix
Good Bye My Friend
Screaming, terror it wouldn't stop. She could hear it all, the death of Zelda's people. Midna searched desperately through her library, she had to fix the gate. She had to help. This link with Zelda that was brought upon when Zelda saved her life by sacrificing her own showed her the torment that the young Hylian ruler was going through.
Was this a blessing or a curse?
"I'm sorry Midna…" The Princess of Hyrule's last words to her rang through her head. Finding nothing in the book she was reading, she tossed it to the side and continued to read another. The link she had with Zelda allowed her to see stuff and hear stuff through Zelda eyes, if she concentrated hard enough. She didn't have to concentrate at all to hear the screams though. Knowing Zelda she was in the heat of battle.
"DAMMIT ZELDA!" she cried frustrated as this book too was useless. It was just the Hylians against this unknown force. She sent all the other races away-the Zora, the Gorons, the Kokiri, the Gerudo, the Shiekah (well what remained of them), the humans, and members like Shad and Rauru of the Hylians who really wouldn't be that useful in a war.
No, that wasn't right. Zelda sent away everyone with the small time/dimension magic she possessed except those who volunteered to stay and fight, that being the castle guards, herself, and Link. Others probably volunteered too, but she didn't accept them. She would of sent the guards and Link away too if Link didn't force her to let him stay and the guards pointing out they were part of the freaking army for goddesses sake.
"Zelda…don't die, I'm coming to help! I don't care what you say! I'm coming!" Midna desperately thought, trying to send the young monarch a message through the link they possessed.
"…Midna…" Midna almost stopped what she was doing when she heard Zelda's voice.
"I'm here Zelda, I'm her. Please just hang on." She sent assuring thoughts to Zelda, to reassure the young ruler and herself.
"Midna…I'm sorry…Please find it in your heart to forgive me." Midna's blood ran cold at that statement, dropping the next book she had grabbed.
"Zelda…Zelda, what's wrong? Zelda? What's there to forgive? Zelda?" Midna pleaded. A momentary, agonizing moment of no response, then…
"Look after things for me ok? Please for me Midna?" Zelda's voice came through, and once in her entire time Midna known her, it was hesitant, almost afraid.
"Zelda, what are you talking about?" Midna pleaded. Please, please, goddesses spare her. Spare them who fought for the sake of other. Spare her friend.
"Promise me Midna." Zelda's tone too took a pleading voice.
"I promise Zelda…until you get back." Midna promised to her friend softly.
"Thank you…open the gates to Tauru ok? That's where I sent everyone…bye Midna…and thanks…for being my friend…" The link with Zelda got cut short. Dropping to her knees, Midna concentrated her magic on her eyes.
Dying and wounded Hylian soldiers were everywhere and all she could was see a sea of black.
"Hylian Phoenix." Zelda's voice cut through the screaming. Midna felt a sense of dread. No, she didn't. Zelda's eyes trailed to the sky, making Midna's as well. She watched in horror as she saw magic along with a silvery substance that Midna knew to be Zelda's life force come together to make a fiery phoenix.
With a mighty shriek, the firebird dove at the darkness and a bright light erupted. When Midna could see again through Zelda's eyes, it started to rain. It wasn't normal rain, however, the sheets were coming down in torrents. What the hell was going on? The world started to become black and Midna felt herself being brought back to her own mind, her own body, her own world.
A tear drop hit the floor. Zelda was dead. She cast the Hylian Phoenix, the Hylian spirit animal. Each race had a powerful spirit creature, that a mass of pure energy that could obliterate anything in its way...at the cost of user's life.
"Zelda…" Midna choked before she broke down in sobs, mourning the loss of her closest friend.