Hello this is my first fan fiction so please tell me how it is.^.^

Summary-when magic kit ready to be apprenticed. But when she is thrown in to a forest where shadows are larking and moons old secrets. Can she help her claw threw the darkness. I suck at summaries.

Allegiances

Leafclan

Leader- Dewstar-a gray and white she-cat

Deputy-Hawkclaw-a brown and white tabby tom

Apprentice: Magicpaw

Medicine Cat-Sagefur-a pale gray tom

Warriors-

Oakleaf-a dark brown tom

Apprentice: Applepaw

Riversong-a gray tabby she-cat

Mudleg-a brown tabby tom

Rockclaw-a dark gray tom

Apprentice: Lillypaw

Rosepetal-a dark ginger she-cat

Aprrntice: Frogpaw

Windfall-a white and black tom

Apprentice: Nightpaw

Ambertoe-a golden ginger tom

Apprentices-

Nightpaw-a black tom with white paws

Frogpaw-a black tom

Lillypaw-white she-cat

Applepaw-ginger she-cat

Magicpaw-a calico she-cat

Queens-

Ghostflame-a ginger and white of Ambertoe's kits : sunkit(ginger she-cat),Blazekit(ginger and white tom), and Berry kit (white she-cat with pale ginger dapples)

Willowfur-a pale gray of Mudleg's kits : Dawnkit(pale gray she-cat) and dustkit (dark brawn tom).

Dovestone-a dark gray she-cat

Elders-

Oddeyes-a white tom with one amber eye and one blue eye

Owlscar-a black tom with a long scar across his eye

Losttail-a gray she-cat with no tail

Nightclan

Leader-Poppystar-a black she-cat

Deputy-Longclaw-a dark gray tom

Medicine Cat-petalnose-pale brown she-cat

Warriors-

Windfang-gray tom

Apprentice: Snakepaw

Reeftail-pale ginger she-cat

Milkfur-a creamy white tom

Apprentice: Ripplepaw

Darkrose-a black she-cat

Apprentices-

Ripplepaw-silver tabby she-cat

Snakepaw-dark brown (almost black) tom

Queens-

Dottedpelt-a dappled of Windfang kits: Eagle kit (brown tom) and Shadowkit (black she-cat)

Elders-

Halfear-a old tabby tom with part of one ear missing

Rippleclan

Leader- Bramblestar-a white tom with brown patches

Deputy-Frogheart-a black tom

Medicine Cat-Bearfang-a brown she-cat

Apprentice; Lynxpaw (snowy gray tabby she-cat)

Warriors-

Waterfur-a pale gray tom

Apprentice: Snowpaw

Longjump-a brown tabby she-cat

Moonlilly-a white she-cat

Oakwood-a dark brown tom

Apprenice: Stormpaw

Redclaw-a dark ginger tom

Apprentice: Skypaw

Apprentices-

Snowpaw-a white she-cat

Skypaw-a gray tabby she-cat

stormpaw-black tom

Queens-

Birdsong-a brown and white she-cat. mother of oakwood's kits: Hawkkit(dark brown tom), Ivy kit (pale brown she-cat) and barkkit(brown tabby tom)

Lightpebble-a pale gray she-cat

Elders-

Dawnfur-a creamy brown tom

Poppyeye-a black she-cat

Cloudclan

Leader-Darkstar-a black and white tom

Deputy-Iceclaw-a white she-cat

Apprentice: Bluepaw

Medicine Cat-Appleleaf-ginger and white she-cat

Apprentice: Flowerpaw (white she-cat)

Warriors-

Swiftbreeze-dark gray tom

Deerfur-brown she-cat

Apprentice: Leafpaw

Ryeseed-a reddsh brown tom

Sunfur-golden tabby tom

Bonedust-off white tom with ginger patches

Apprentice: Bubblepaw

Leafsong-brown tabby

Apprentices-

Bubblepaw-gray she-cat

Bluepaw-a gray tom

Leafpaw-brown tom

Queens-

Honeyfur-a light brown she-cat. mother of Ryeseed's kits: Tinykit (small calico she-cat) and Redkit(reddsh brown tom)

Ravenheart-black she-cat

Elders-

Blackfur-black tom

Robinfeather-small brown tabby she-cat