this is my first fan fiction I have made. I have been playing this in my head like a TV show working out some flaws in the story, I hope you enjoy, any and all reviews will be used to better your reading experience.

Update. This has been edited thanks to comments by viewers like you. i will proceed to edit most chapters. expect a new chapter soon.

THE BEGINNING

4:00 am Friday morning

I woke up early in the morning to the sound of rock blasting from my alarm clock. with two hours to get ready for the day, I got up and made my bed before anything else so I didn't have to do it again later. After that, I ran over to a whiteboard on my wall with a list titled 'Early Morning To Do' , I checked off 'make bed', and prepared for an early morning shower.

I gathered all necessary articles of clothing, including a black and white t-shirt that swirled in the middle, with a handmade diamond "s" with a horizontal "s" that was overlapped by the first on the top left of the shirt. the patch wasn't too old, just a little memory of my past. I never thought much of it, but it always made me smile.

Twenty minutes later, I ran back into my room fully dressed with still soaking wet dark blond hair and put a check next to 'shower' on my to do list. After that was done,i checked a few more things off and glanced over at the clock

4:46 am

seeing i had more time than i thought i had, i layed on my bed and checked the weather on my laptop.

100 percent chance of thunderstorms all day.

I got online using my laptop and began reading a my little ponies fan fiction that i copied off the internet. yes i'm a brony, and you can thank my friends for that.

I quickly dashed downstairs after finishing a chapter of the fan fiction and grabbed a bowl of cereal. After that was done I grabbed my MP3 with My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic songs, a book bag containing my laptop, cell phone, notebooks, pencils, and everything else I needed, and my sunglasses, with full knowledge of a storm outside.

Slipping on my shoes, I headed out the door and walked through the back alleys. Thankfully, I live in a place where the backyard of every house was separated by 6 foot walls. This was good for me today. The sky was filled with dark storm clouds today, which as normal, put a big grin on my face.

I eventually arrived at the high school. it was a day i loved the most. I quickly found my friends at a table and sat with them. Without a second thought, I took out a notepad and a pencil and started to make a list.

One of my friends started to chuckle as they said "Well nice of you to join us today Twilight." my brony friends started to laugh. My real name was Nick but they call me Twilight because I like to keep a to do list with me. Thankfully it wasn't one of the nicknames that stuck.

Me and my two friends, Jake and Max were the leaders of a My Little Pony fan club in school, We all had a nickname, mine was Nitro, mostly because when they saw me running past them in the halls on the first day they said it looked like I might have strapped a container nitrous to my back.

Jake was Sharp Shot because out of the three of us, he was the best shot in the archery club. i came in at a close second, and Max was third.

Max was Power House because he was the stronger of the three of us, which is saying something because we are all take the same karate class.

"So Nitro." Jake said. "Do you think there are wolves in Equestria?"

I raised my eyebrow and replied. "Of course there are. the wolf is closely related to dogs, and if applejack has a dog then i'm sure there are a few wolves there. why do you ask?" Max cut in and said. "Jake said it would be cool if they were there, but I said its a kids show, so they wouldn't put something as dangerous as a wolf in there." Before I could reply, I was cut off by the bell.

School was long and boring, and today sucked. It started with an "F" on a math test. A mile run in P.E and ended with archery being canceled for the day due to the surprise rain. I couldn't remember a worse day. But the strangest thing was hearing a voice in the back of my head. I knew it from somewhere, but I couldn't remember where.

After a day of unfortunate events, a pleasant walk home through the rain was what I needed to lighten up my day. As I walked through the back alleys though, I started to hear laughter, it was coming from all around me and could be described as evil, almost… chaotic. I started to run away from it, but it was no use. i was almost home when when six bolts of lightning struck around me. I fell to the ground in pain as the discharge surged through my body. As i looked up another bolt struck me. As i looked up into the sky, unable to move, I remember feeling as if I was sinking into the ground.

I opened my eyes. I was floating through a black void. With my mind still intact, though i still couldn't move I thought to myself. "Am I dead? Is... is this what death is like? If i'm not dead, where am I?". My mind was wrapped around what happened to me as I floated through the void . Eventually I floated through a white light and stopped thinking altogether as I passed through the light.

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