Yep. Another one. I'm crazy. XP Story is by Cascade of Raining Ice.
ThunderClan
Leader- Thrushstar- gray tom
Deputy- Snowlight- white she-cat with green eyes
Medicine Cat- Nettlefrost- pale silver tom with green eyes (apprentice, Mistdawn)
Warriors:
Leafwhisker- black she-cat with green eyes (apprentice, Breezepaw)
Aspenfeather- dark gray speckled she-cat (apprentice, Adderpaw)
Wolfstep- pale gray tom with blue eyes (apprentice, Fernpaw)
Brackenstorm- golden-brown tom with dark green eyes
Skyleap- silver she-cat
Lightdusk- light brown tabby she-cat
Blackfly- black she-cat with blue eyes
Hailwhisper- dark gray she-cat with a black paw and pale blue eyes
Spiderpelt- fluffy black tom
Stonewhisker- gray tom with black spots
Squirrelfire- dark ginger she-cat
Apprentices:
Mistdawn- pale gray tabby she-cat (medicine cat)
Breezepaw- light brown tabby she-cat with a white paw
Adderpaw- gray tom
Fernpaw- dark brown she-cat with amber eyes
Queens:
Specklefern- tortoiseshell she-cat with golden eyes, expecting Thrushstar's kits
Elders:
Mossheart- white tom
Cherryshine- pale ginger she-cat
Sweetbreeze- golden and white she-cat
WindClan
Leader- Quickstar- brown tom
Deputy- Icehawk- frost-white tom with sharp amber eyes
Medicine Cat- Brightleaf- pale silver and white she-cat with amber eyes
Warriors:
Beechtail- dark gray tom
Willowheart- light brown tabby she-cat
Flowerleap- black she-cat with green eyes
Fernfrost- dark brown spotted she-cat
Harestreak- white tom with pale gray streaks (apprentice, Dustpaw)
Pouncetail- golden and white she-cat with amber eyes (apprentice, Mousepaw)
Squirrelsong- golden-brown she-cat
Mistycloud- gray she-cat with black and white flecks
Nightclaw- black and white tom (aapprentice, Adderpaw)
Sharpsight- small pale gray tabby she-cat with icy green eyes
Heatherfrost- silver she-cat with blue eyes
Apprentices:
Dustpaw- light brown tom
Mousepaw- pale gray she-cat
Adderpaw- gray tom
Queens:
Sunflight- ginger and white she-cat, mother of Nightclaw's kits; Mintkit, a black and white she-kit, and Flightkit, a ginger tom, fostering Cloudkit, a pale silver and white she-cat with pale blue eyes
Elders
Leafmist- black she-cat with gray flecks and green eyes
Redstreak- ginger tom with white streaks
Brackentail- dark gray tom
ShadowClan
Leader- Duskstar- silver-gray tom
Deputy- Birdwing- ginger she-cat
Medicine Cat- Deershine- pale gray she-cat (apprentice, Owlpaw)
Warriors:
Stoneclaw- dark gray tom with pale blue eyes
Darkmist- black she-cat
Stormstream- dark gray she-cat with white paws (apprentice, Rowanpaw)
Shadepelt- black tom (apprentice, Splashpaw)
Tigershadow- golden and black striped tom (apprentice, Honeypaw)
Grasspool- dark brown tabby she-cat
Dapplefeather- speckled she-cat
Bluesong- white she-cat with blue eyes
Fallenoak- light brown she-cat
Apprentices
Rowanpaw- ginger tom
Honeypaw- white she-cat with golden patches
Splashpaw- silver she-cat
Owlpaw- dark brown tom
Queens
Fallowheart- dark brown she-cat, mother of Tanglefur's kits; Marshkit, a dark brown tom, and Nightkit, a black she-kit
Elders
Spiderheart- black tom
Aspenblaze- ginger she-cat with a white blaze on her chest
RiverClan
Leader- Dawnstar- long-furred cream she-cat
Deputy- Blackwhisker- black tom
Medicine Cat- Softstream- white she-cat
Warriors:
Dovefeather- pale gray she-cat
Leopardwing- golden and black spotted she-cat
Streamheart- gray-and-white tom (apprentice, Tawnypaw)
Minnowblaze- black she-cat (apprentice, Beetlepaw)
Pebblefrost- light brown tabby she-cat with darker brown flecks and blue eyes
Swiftbrook- dark brown she-cat
Sootwhisker- black tom (apprentice, Rosepaw)
Reednose- dark gray tom
Troutsplash- black and white tom (apprentice, Strikepaw)
Moonfrost- silver she-cat
Brightpelt- ginger she-cat
Apprentices:
Tawnypaw- ginger she-cat
Strikepaw- golden tom
Beetlepaw- small brown tom
Rosepaw- dark ginger she-cat with blue eyes
Queens:
Frostlight- white she-cat, mother of Troutsplash's kits; Pondkit, a gray tom, Patchkit, a black-and-white she-kit, and Icekit, a white tom
Prologue:
It was a cold storming leaf-bare night. Lightdusk screeched in pain as the second kit slithered onto the moss. Nettlefrost placed a paw on her flank to check if there were more kits. Wouldn't you know how many kits by then? At least a estimate.
"That's it," he mewed. "Two she-kits. Congratulations." Nettlefrost announced. Lightdusk purred, and her mate Brackenstorm burst into the den, his green eyes alight with pride and his golden fur ruffled from pacing. Hm... Lightdusk a her mate, Brackenstorm, bursted into the den...' Just a thought.
"They're beautiful, Lightdusk!" he exclaimed. "What should we name them?" Nettlefrost watched them name the first kit, a dark brown she-kit, Fernkit. What about the other kit? he thought, confused. Did they forget about her? Apparently.
"There's another she-kit." Nettlefrost pointed out. Lightdusk looked surprised, Why are you surprised? Haven't you felt the pain of two kits and the med. cat even mewed 'two she-kits'... and little guilty A little? You just forgot about your kit. as she gazed at the light brown tabby she-kit with adoration.
"We'll name her Breezekit, for my mother, Sweetbreeze," she mewed descisively. Nettlefrost realized she hadn't purposely overlooked the light brown tabby she-kit, but had really not noticed her. Now we know the 'invisible' part of the title. Threats will rise in the shadows, and only the clouds may save us. Not a bad prophecy. It makes it seem like it could be about any kit. If there is a Cloudkit... well... you get it. Nettlefrost stiffened as he recalled the prophecy he had received at the Moonpool the night before. I have a feeling this kit will help save us, if only we notice her enough. How do you know?
There! I hope you guys enjoy my little commentary! I will be as honest as possible (no hard feelings). Updates will be at random.