Ok so i'm really new at
this and I have no idea what your standards are….
I have about 3
more chapters on paper (lets just say crummy hot day and nothing else
to do) so if I get any positive comments I shall continue….
Feel
free to comment good or
bad…..
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It
was a new year at Hogwarts, Harry, Ron and Hermione were sitting in
their usual compartment on the Hogwarts Express catching up on their
summers.
They hadn't been able to meet up all summer and had not
written to each other as much as planned.
Ron was updating Harry
on the Quidditch games that he had missed while he was at the
Dursleys. Neither of the two noticed Hermione who was pretending to
read a book, Hogwarts a History.
She wondered what kind of trouble they were going to get themselves into this year. Her thoughts drifted to Draco…
Draco and she had become more
than just friends the previous year. He had changed a lot after his
father was taken away….. They had shared a kiss somewhere in the
last term. Of course she had not confided her feeling for him to
anybody because she knew that Harry and Ron would not accept
it.
Throughout summer she had thought about him. She wondered what
he was doing, what he was thinking. Was he thinking about her, did
she have any meaning in her life or had he just forgotten about the
kiss they had shared during the summer.
Meanwhile
Crabe, Goyle and Draco were sitting in one of the compartments at the back of the train. As usual Crabe and Goyle were eating as many sweets they could like it was going to be their last meal ever while Draco sat in the corner staring out of the compartment window reminiscing about his summer holiday.
His mother had decided that the best way for him to forget about his father being locked up in Azkaban was to go to Rome for a holiday. The Aurors had finally been able to prove that his Mr. Malfoy was a death eater.
In Rome he had
met a girl (well a lot actually). She was a native there so she
showed Malfoy around Rome to see the sites. She was friendly, lively
and outgoing but yet Draco could not help feeling like there was
something missing. That she was not the right person for him.
His
thoughts drifted back to Hermione…
Now that's the perfect
girl He thought to himself.
She was bright, friendly,
compassionate, driven and beautiful
He had despised Harry, Ron and
her for the first 5 years at Hogwarts but everything changed between
them last year when Hermione and him had been paired up For a potions
assignment that resulted to half their grades.
She had a certain
aura to her that just drew him in. He had told nobody about the kiss
he shared with Hermione during the last term of school but for some
reason, every time he saw her he could feel her lips against his.
He
had tried to get over her during summer and he had thought he
achieved it until he saw Ms. Granger step into the train earlier that
morning.
She was more beautiful than ever. Her hair was swept
back into a messy ponytail and it seemed that a tendril of hair had
escaped the rest. At that moment he had had a sudden urge to run over
to her and kiss her but he knew that he could not.
He wondered if
she thought anything of the kiss they had shared and if she had any
feelings for him as he had for her.
That summer he had
received a letter from Professor Dumbledore congratulating him on the
position of Head Boy for the incoming year.
He was half hoping
that Hermione had gotten the position of Head Girl so that he could
spend more time with her and really find out if she had feelings for
him.
Sure enough Hermione had been chosen as Head Girl. This was no surprise to anybody so not many people took the time to congratulate her except Harry and the Weasleys. Her parents had not said a word about it mainly because both were so engulfed in their work that they didn't have much time for Hermione.
Needless to say that she was looking forward to the year ahead of them.
The
train had come to a stop and the three stepped into the horseless
carriage.
"Home sweet castle," Ron sighed in a content
happiness, "sigh I can't wait to get in. I'm
starving!"
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Is
it too short for a chapter? It's just the intro so hopefully the
next chapter (if there is one) will be longer.
It's my first so
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