(The bold italic is Cricketstep's comments)

The normal is the actual story.

Chapter 1

Hi, my name is Prettysilverflowercat! (ROFL Hi, Prettysilverflowercat!) I am a new person on here, and I lov writing! (I'm sure you do, Prettysilverflowercat. And it's spelled "love"!) This is my 1st story, it is called THE STORY OF PRETTYSILVERFLOWER and I am named after the main cat coz I love her SOOOOOOO much! (Yep, that makes sense. You named yourself after yourself. 'Grats, kid.) Ok bye! Plz don't flame coz I get REALLY REALLY MAD!* (I'm sure you do! And what's with the asterisk?)

It was a very bad day! The rain was raining! (OMG NUUU! THE RAIN WAS RAINING! NUUUU! Wait wait what else could it do?) All the kitties (kitties?) were in the dens because they did not want to get wet by the rain! (Cowards!) Only one cat was out… the brave, handsome, caring, loyal, wonderful warrior…

BRACKENFUR! (Oh, maybe she has taste after all! Brackenfur's coolio!)

He was catching mice. (In the rain?! *Immediately loses all respect for Brackenfur!* That idiot!)

And back in the ThunderClan camp, Sorreltail fell RIGHT OVER! (I'm sure she did.) She was having kits! (Aww, cute! I love Bracken x Sorrel! Sad that Sorreltail died though) 'omg' the cats omg-ed (How do you omg?) and they all went out to help her. But it was too LATE! Sorreltail was DEAD! (Wasn't I just saying that it was sad that Sorreltail died!? Tsk)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! (NOOO!) Went Brackenfur and he ran straight from the forest to his mate's side in zero seconds. (Brackenfur da cheetah!) But it was too LATE! Sorreltail was DEAD! (Like you just said, like, three seconds ago.)

The rain kept raining (Well, duh!) as Brackenfur crouched besides his new kits. One was a big leopard! (Whoa! But they're African! *Gasps with horror!*) It had big paws and eeeeevil eyes and when Brackenfur looked into their amber depths he got scared cos it had eeeeevil eyes. (I have eeeeeevil eyes, too! Yay!)

'Is that ur kit?' asked Milly. (I don't know, is it? I mean, you just witnessed the birth! This is something to add to my list of 'Why Millie is Stupid')

'IT WAS SORRELTAIL'S TOOOOOOOOO!' Brackenfur yellowed (But he's golden brown) then went quiet 'but i shoudln't be ): (:() because the kits need some GOOD NAMES! And that one is EvilLeopardKit!' (What a *air quotes* "GOOD NAME!")

And then cherrykit fell in love with Evilleopardkit. (Oh, Cherryfall, why would you do that?) But she couldn't say, because everybody thought evilleopardkit was an evil leopard kit! (Hmm, wonder why. Is it because he was a tiger?) But she knew some day she would be a warrior! and so she went into the den and had a sleep. (Had a sleep?)

The next kit was called Diamondkit! And he was sparkly! Like a diamond! (Diamonds is forevah)

'What should we call him?' some1 asked. (Hey, some1, Brackenfur just named him)

'Diamondkit!' Brackenfur sed. 'And so the next 1 is WolfKit! (Hey, Wolfkit! You have a normal name!)

WolfKit was gray and floooooofy. (FLOOOOOOOFY!) And big. (And fat.) She had big blue eyes and she was gray.

The next kit was a pale sand color and had no eyes! (WHAT DA HECK!) And everyone went gasp! (And so did Cricketstep!) but it was ok cos she opened them up and they were all like phew. (Phew)

'she is called The Flowerkit!' (Da Flowa Ket!) Brackenfur announced. 'YAAAAY!' (NUUUU)

All eyes fell on the next kit; and all murmuring voices went quiet. Because the next kit was BEAUTIFUL! (Uh oh) She was a slender silver tabby with white star-shaped white stars! (le gasp) She had eyes (le gasp #2), huge and shaped to hypnotically drawn your gaze in, to feast in the leafy, shady green, many-layered and soulful. (Don't look at her! Please!) She moved a paw and the simple movement reminded ALL the kittys of a cat. (lawl she's not a cat then) A cat sliding along the mossy forest floor, feet silent like the whisper of silk against soft skin, graceful and life! Like GaryStripe! (Graystripe's a snail?)

And Sorreltail's body MOVED! (WHAT!?)

'My love! Said Brackenfur and went to his love! And she whispered 'Prettysilverkit' (great name!) and went back to being dead. (Oh okay then)

'Her name is Prettysilverkit!' said Brackenfur. (Hmm I didn't know that)

And then Sorreltail stopped being dead! (wut.)

'ARE YOU DEAD OR NOT MAKE UP UR MIND said clowdtail. (Yeah, Sorrel! Make up your dead mind!)

Sorreltail stood up and said softly,

There will be a pretty silver flower, and every cat will want it! Including the scary tiger! And so the pretty silver flower will become bad, but it will only be pretend! And then she will be bad for REAL for a bit, then turn good again and save the day!' (Well, that was painful to read. I just wasted about 12 seconds of my day reading it.) Then she died for the final time. (Thank you.)

OH NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO shouted mousefur IT'S A THINGY OF COMING DOOM! (NUUUUUUUU)

It's a prophecy said Prettysilverkit! (Wow, she can talk already! Nice) 'But I don't know wot it means!

Its mysterious! said flowerkit. (wow, she can too?) And Prettysilverkit said 'Yes.'

Okay! I walked reaaaaalllly hard on that! (oh, you crushed it! :( How could you, Prettysilverflowercat!) So review and u get approval from prettysilverkit! (Uh oh! I don't want that...) Ha see how smart i am now everybodys gonna review (they are, aren't they? hmm) cos prettysilverkit is so ASSOME! (Um…assome? AWKS!) AND U NO IT! (I do?)