Subject: CM Fiction Grade level: 6-8
Back from Hell, Evil at Home
I don't own any "Criminal Minds" character, just inspired by the show.
English is not my native language, maybe a lot of mistakes of spelling and grammar.
Rating: T (angst/crime), no pairing
Foyet VS Hotch
Men are strong so long as they represent a strong idea they become powerless when they oppose it.－Sigmund Freud
Without too many difficulties, he opened the door of the apartment. He looked around with the flash, the apartment was not big, and it looked like obviously a typical workaholic bachelor's home. But it was clean, with less stuff, everything was in order. He studied careful the apartment, then he chose his location, and sit down, waited. Like a good hunter, his arm was ready, with a lot of patience; he was waiting, waiting for his prey to come back home, his prey' s own home. That would be a big surprise.
He was sitting in the dark, and really enjoyed the company of the darkness, let the tender darkness surrounded, he always felt safe and peaceful. And he was waiting for his prey, he could hear his own heart beating, he felt the hunger for blood, the anxiousness, he had for that moment, the moment he waited and planned since so long time, the moment he rehearsed so many times in his mind.
He remembered very clearly the first time he met with his prey 10 years ago. A tall, dark hair, dark eyes, handsome but very serious looking man with perfect dressed dark color suit, came to the hospital with the local police. When he started to talk, it was interesting, he could easily recognize the familiar tone of a lawyer, but, his prey had something more than that, he talked with a low, soft voice, but in that low, soft voice, there was a sort of determined tone of authority, a power of domination which attempted to overwhelm his counterpart.
Obviously his psychological age was much more older than his physical age. Even with concern and sympathy, that dark shinning eyes, with the sharp and deep glances, tried to look into your heart, read your mind.
From that serious smart face, he found the obvious trace of arrogance and ambition. His prey had something special, the very well built body, the noble and elegant body languages, but these were only his attractive external appearance, he wanted to see more and to know more about this dark hair and dark eyes man, he had an impulse desire to break down that serious brave looking shell to see his inside.
That's the fate, the fate of both of them. The fate brought him that dark hair and dark eyes man which he supposed never met again. 10 years, both of them became older, but he recognized immediately that serious, arrogant face, that face became even more serious with sort of concern or sadness.
At that moment, he felt again the desire to destroy that perfect, solid appearance, to defeat him and to see the vulnerability showed by the strongest prey. His prey was chosen by the fate especially for him as his challenge and reward.
He held his breath, and waiting, waiting for the footstep of his prey, waiting his prey approach, came back to his niche.
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