sigh...okay so i'm going to rewrite a few chapters of "captured" since they make me vomit whenever I even think about them. So, here I go.
And check it out! I'm gonna start the first chapter with a quote to add dramatic effect! neat huh?
Anyways, yeah. Here goes to new first chapters of "CAPTURED"!!!
"Love is being stupid together"
Paul Valery
"What am I doing? I can't beilive this. What if I get caught? Don't be stupid. You won't get caught. This plan is perfect. You just go in, take the money, and leave. No need to panic. Relax, just...relax."
Gaz tried to calm herself by taking deep breaths. It wasn't working, but she was able to convince herself that nothing would go wrong. Her cell phone vibrated and she picked it up.
"Are you in position?" a voice asked her. Gaz nodded, but then realized that nobody could see her.
"Yeah. Are you?"
"Yeah. Lets do this on the count of three."
"Okay..." Gaz said nervously.
"one...two...three go!" said the voice on the opposite end of the line. Gaz put away her cell phone and raced in. She looked around the dark room. Nobody was there. Hopefully, it would stay like that.
Gaz looked around the room for a certain small box.
Five minutes passed but to her it felt like hours...And then suddenly...
So there it was!!! The first new and improved chapter of Captured!!!! Of course, it's really short, but that's okay beause it's just a prologue thingy.