Attemt 1...
I mean:
Chapter 1
After the inncodent with MariMaya Khushrenada, several new colonies were created. They were the furthest away from the sun. Side 13, Side 14, and Side 15. The colonists in Side 14 weren't very happy about their condition. Though they had artifical sunlight in the colony, they wanted real sunlight and wanted to be moved closer to Earth. The Earth's Unified Nation refused to let Side 14 be moved. They were very unpleased...
They decided that they would start a war with the EUN for two reasons. One was they had been secretly been working on proto-type Mobile Suits made from Neo-Gundamian Alloy, and the second reason was they thought that the EUN had destroyed all of their Gundams after the war in 0196 A.C. The leader of that colony, Yoru Peacecraft, (Grandson of Zechs), decided that he was going to declare war on the EUN.
An announcement from Side 14 to all of the colonies and Earth was sent be Yoru. "We the people of Side 14 declare war on the Earth's Unified Nation. We feel that they are to power hungry for their own needs that they have completly forgotten about the needs of those in space. We shall dawn a new era for those in colonies, this era will make sure that all of the colonies shall get as much as the people of Earth."
"This is shere madness!" exclamed Hiiragi, "Why must he do this? Peace has been kept for almost 20 years and now Your wants a war?"
"This makes absolutly no sence," replied Akuma, "now the lives of millions are at steak with this war."
"I never thought that this day would come, but..." said Gaki, "We now must go retrive our Gundams..."
The four pilots were on their way to go get their Gundams, but on the way there they saw a MS-06 Zaku II. This frightened them, but not enough to keep them from fighting. Thought they were inexperienced, they had the abilities of their fathers. These were their Gundams: Wing Zero II, Eypeon custom, Deathsythe Hell II, and Sandrock II. These Gundams were very similar to the ones that were created in 0195 A.C., but they had better armor and armaments.
Side 14 decided that they would rename their group "The Colonist Alliance". Many of the other colonies didn't want to support the war. Thought The Colonist Alliance has many allies in this war, they still couldn't match the number of Gundams that the Earth had. So they went to the decendents of Garma Zabi asking for help. They suppiled Yoru with their newest Mobile Armor. MA-08S Big-Zam custom. It was an upgrade of the MA-08 Big-Zam.
Yoru was very pleased with their assistance.
Though the EUN had no idea about what the CA was planning, they were on their toes 24/7. Then, in the middle of the night, they struk. The EUN wasn't ready for the attack because it was sooner than they thought that it was going to be.
"Quick! We must get everyone to safety!" shouted the commander.
"Gundam pilots, you must help us," begged the leutenant, "if you don't than the whole planet will become the colonists terrotory."
"Ok, we will help you." said Heiwa.
"Thank you," said the leutenant with a sigh of releif, "we shall pay you greatly"
"No Thanks," replied Akuma, "we aren't doing this for money. We are doing this for the hope of man-kind on Earth."
"Let's go!" said Gaki impatiently.
So the Gundam pilots set off...
TO BE CONTINUED... Tomarrow... Maybe today.
I mean:
Chapter 1
After the inncodent with MariMaya Khushrenada, several new colonies were created. They were the furthest away from the sun. Side 13, Side 14, and Side 15. The colonists in Side 14 weren't very happy about their condition. Though they had artifical sunlight in the colony, they wanted real sunlight and wanted to be moved closer to Earth. The Earth's Unified Nation refused to let Side 14 be moved. They were very unpleased...
They decided that they would start a war with the EUN for two reasons. One was they had been secretly been working on proto-type Mobile Suits made from Neo-Gundamian Alloy, and the second reason was they thought that the EUN had destroyed all of their Gundams after the war in 0196 A.C. The leader of that colony, Yoru Peacecraft, (Grandson of Zechs), decided that he was going to declare war on the EUN.
An announcement from Side 14 to all of the colonies and Earth was sent be Yoru. "We the people of Side 14 declare war on the Earth's Unified Nation. We feel that they are to power hungry for their own needs that they have completly forgotten about the needs of those in space. We shall dawn a new era for those in colonies, this era will make sure that all of the colonies shall get as much as the people of Earth."
"This is shere madness!" exclamed Hiiragi, "Why must he do this? Peace has been kept for almost 20 years and now Your wants a war?"
"This makes absolutly no sence," replied Akuma, "now the lives of millions are at steak with this war."
"I never thought that this day would come, but..." said Gaki, "We now must go retrive our Gundams..."
The four pilots were on their way to go get their Gundams, but on the way there they saw a MS-06 Zaku II. This frightened them, but not enough to keep them from fighting. Thought they were inexperienced, they had the abilities of their fathers. These were their Gundams: Wing Zero II, Eypeon custom, Deathsythe Hell II, and Sandrock II. These Gundams were very similar to the ones that were created in 0195 A.C., but they had better armor and armaments.
Side 14 decided that they would rename their group "The Colonist Alliance". Many of the other colonies didn't want to support the war. Thought The Colonist Alliance has many allies in this war, they still couldn't match the number of Gundams that the Earth had. So they went to the decendents of Garma Zabi asking for help. They suppiled Yoru with their newest Mobile Armor. MA-08S Big-Zam custom. It was an upgrade of the MA-08 Big-Zam.
Yoru was very pleased with their assistance.
Though the EUN had no idea about what the CA was planning, they were on their toes 24/7. Then, in the middle of the night, they struk. The EUN wasn't ready for the attack because it was sooner than they thought that it was going to be.
"Quick! We must get everyone to safety!" shouted the commander.
"Gundam pilots, you must help us," begged the leutenant, "if you don't than the whole planet will become the colonists terrotory."
"Ok, we will help you." said Heiwa.
"Thank you," said the leutenant with a sigh of releif, "we shall pay you greatly"
"No Thanks," replied Akuma, "we aren't doing this for money. We are doing this for the hope of man-kind on Earth."
"Let's go!" said Gaki impatiently.
So the Gundam pilots set off...
TO BE CONTINUED... Tomarrow... Maybe today.