This is my first Beyblade story. The story is AU. It takes place in a sort of fantasy world. I hope everyone likes it. I am afraid I am not to great with my grammar but I try.
Prologue
The cat like eyes scanned the thick lush forest. He could here the sound of the horse's hoofs growing stronger. The earth quaked under the mighty pressure of the beats. His companion almost lost his balance but managed to regain his former stance. He slowly twisted his sword in his hand in anticipation.
Soon the forest was filled with a loud cry and three men on horses emerged from the bush. One of the men wheeled a double head battle axe. His horse was black and its body was of like no other horse that he had ever seen before. To the right of the man stood a brown warrior horse with a rider that held a large sword with glowing gems imbedded in the handle. To the left of the black horse stood a beautiful white horse with a rider no more than 5'5" with an arrow notched onto his bow.
The orbs took in the men and new they would be tough to beat but he was sure his friend and he could take them on. The black horse charged toward him at a great thundering gallop. He steadied himself and watched as the double headed axe lunged towards him. The young man drew his sword up and blocked the axe in one swift movement. With a quick thrust he dislodged the rider sending him spilling to the ground. The horse bucked in the air and the strong hooves came down on the young man causing him to reel in pain sending him to the ground to join the rider he had just taken care of. Soon the world started to fade as the young man slipped into a unconscious estate.
Well that is the beginning I promise it will get better and I will get more into the characters this was just the prologue after all. lol. Please review and tell me what u thought.
Prologue
The cat like eyes scanned the thick lush forest. He could here the sound of the horse's hoofs growing stronger. The earth quaked under the mighty pressure of the beats. His companion almost lost his balance but managed to regain his former stance. He slowly twisted his sword in his hand in anticipation.
Soon the forest was filled with a loud cry and three men on horses emerged from the bush. One of the men wheeled a double head battle axe. His horse was black and its body was of like no other horse that he had ever seen before. To the right of the man stood a brown warrior horse with a rider that held a large sword with glowing gems imbedded in the handle. To the left of the black horse stood a beautiful white horse with a rider no more than 5'5" with an arrow notched onto his bow.
The orbs took in the men and new they would be tough to beat but he was sure his friend and he could take them on. The black horse charged toward him at a great thundering gallop. He steadied himself and watched as the double headed axe lunged towards him. The young man drew his sword up and blocked the axe in one swift movement. With a quick thrust he dislodged the rider sending him spilling to the ground. The horse bucked in the air and the strong hooves came down on the young man causing him to reel in pain sending him to the ground to join the rider he had just taken care of. Soon the world started to fade as the young man slipped into a unconscious estate.
Well that is the beginning I promise it will get better and I will get more into the characters this was just the prologue after all. lol. Please review and tell me what u thought.