Okay, here is a story I started in middle school and am hoping to clean it up a bit. This is really short because I am kind of lazy sometimes, but think of this as a prologue! I hope to get some reviews to let me know how I am doing!
Narrator
As they glided and turned to the faint melody, Rini looked up at him, Helios, the man of her dreams; quiet literally.
"When can I see you again?" she asked.
"When the sun sets in your bright eyes and rain falls from them, then is when you can see me again." He answered. He sighed and turned to look to the growing sunrise. "The sun will come up soon little maiden. However long I see you is never enough, I long to hold you in my arms forever."
Rini looked into his eyes and her heart broke, he was so sincere and she knew she felt the same
She jolted awake, looked around her and saw her pillow stained with tears. Dam it! She thought. She carefully flipped her pillow and made her bed. She didn't want the embarrassment and shame of having others knew she cried almost every night.
Okay, i already know I am not satisfied, but it will do!
I say okay a lot...sorry!
-DBS