Sasusasu story: First time (Kagebunshin fun)

I tried poetry again, and feel like I really failed :P but poems are supposed to be original so...

Sasuke (c) Masashi Kishimoto


Standing behind the Cherry tree, I saw them kissing

How does it feel, when their lips touch?

Behind the tree I silently wondered

Soft lips on mine, what would it taste like?

Curiosity took over all of my body

Nervous I trembled as I formed the signs

One moment, this moment

No one could ever know about it

No one

A poof was heard as it appeared

Luckily no one noticed

My heart started beating

Red was seen on my cheeks

This feeling,

Was it embarrassment?

I moved towards my copied self

If they had seen it,

They would think it was weird

But even weirder it was

Believe me

That he attracted me more and more

I brought forth a finger

And touched his lips

Before I clashed them onto mine

This tingling sensation, the beating of my heart

Was it love making me blind?

I nervously put my tongue

Inside his lovely mouth

Explored it and tasted a lot.

The saliva of mine, the saliva of his

Was blending for the very first time

It was love, I was sure

He had to be the one

The most beautiful I've ever seen

Now I knew why no one else

No one at all

Could ever be compared to me

How does it feel?

It feels like heaven

What does it taste?

Like blueberry's, so soft

I didn't need to know

If I did it right

My emotions had taken control

But it's always a time,

When a kiss must end

So we slowly pulled apart

He had left me breathless

This gorgeous creature

I must say, he was a work of art

I looked into his eyes

That for real were my own

And understood that this was goodbye

I had enjoyed it a lot

To do it with myself

The very first time…

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