This big problem
Yazmin p.o.v
It was just a normal day when my mom came in my room and told me that we are moving I really didn't want to hear it because today was the day my dad had past away it was 13 years since he past I didn't know that he dad until I was 10 he died when I was 3 so that mean I was lied to almost all my life do you know how that feels to be lied to almost all your life then u just got told when you are 10,when I use to ask my mom she said he was away at a very imported job so you understand my pain don't you,will you see i kinda know what happen to my father see he was walking home from the bus because my mom had to take his car to get fix,when he was walking home he was rob the person who rob him killed him he was right outside the house when he got shot i know i was home waiting for him to come and tuck me in goodnite when i heard the gun shot i ran outside and saw my daddy in a puddle of blood i was crying i rember him saying something then all of a sudden i was in my room alseep i still dont even rembering going to my room but that what my mother told me i still think thst not the truth but i dont care right now i want to hang out with my friends i called them and told them to come over so i could talk to them about me staying at one of there house.
five min later
ring ring ring i heard the door bell and went to go anwer it all my friends were standing there even jake i welcome them inside we went to the living room thats when i told them the news "hey you guys i have something to tell you"i told them"babe what is going on"jake ask"will i'm moving"i said quitley "WHAT" they yelled"yes,i'm moving i'm sorry but i'm am so i was just wondering if i can live with one of you guys if i can try to ask my mom if i can lie with one of you she will let me" i said "yazmin i told you i love you and i will always let you stay with me if your mother had said yes"jack had said"really thank you jack that really means a lots"
hey you guys ys im back and yes i am rewirtieng this story it new and better i found the paper i wrote to this and when i say it suck so i just thought i will be good to do a all new one oh and also i dont like mean reviews so you have something to say please just kept it to yourself because that get me really sad i am still new to this so if you want me to send this to you so you can help me then thank you i will like that and also i will like for some ideas for this because i kinda ran out of some please R&R and no mean reviews please