As I said, this is the first chapter of my revised story. I tried to delete every trace of weabooness I could. Which means I won't use any suffixes like –chan, -kun and so on. I will use the Japanese names for things though, if it's really specific. Like: futon, anman, miso and so on.
As for the Hitomi character, she is changed into an adult character that is the source of the plot (trying to get PPG and RRB together as a couple). She will not appear often.
I intended Prof, Mojo or Ken to fill the role instead, but I don't think they would be so intrusive of PPG's or RRB's relationships that much.
I made Himeko on a friendlier term with PPG in my story, due to me actually liking the character. She will still be competitive against everyone though, even her supposed friends. I made only Momoko and Miyako actually understand her (or should I say feel sympathetic towards her), due to the PPG meeting the source of Himeko's competitive (and asshole-ish) personality.
Himeko will be with Brick only at the beginning.
I also aged up the PPG and RRB. They are 16-17. I know that their age difference was larger, but this way is less… weird, I guess?
I have tendencies to overdescribe stuff, so I'll keep it down a notch. If it's underdescribed, then sorry, I tried too hard. (._.)
As Kaoru wrote the seventh answer on her test, she heard Momoko's silent laugh. She recognized the signal. She just finished her test and was fairly positive she would get a score of 95 and above. Kaoru regretted her choice of not-studying for the test. She has to get a score of at least 60 if she wishes to continue pro-wrestling practices with her dad. She glanced at Miyako. She seemed to be almost done with hers. Kaoru shifted her attention to Himeko. She seemed to be a bit nervous, judging by her foot tapping, but she had a proud expression on her face. Kaoru groaned quietly before returning her attention to the annoying sheet of paper.
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"Did you answer everything?" Momoko asked as she bit into her sweet melon bun.
"Not correctly, that's for sure." Kaoru muttered the response. Miyako looked apologetically at Kaoru.
"I'm sure you'll get a 60." Miyako smiled at Kaoru.
Meanwhile, Himeko hugged Brick's arm as they walked in the hall and complained about the test. Or rather, how Momoko might've scored higher than her, which made her extremely annoyed.
"Brick, you understand me, don't you?" She asked after she was done with her monologue.
"Not really. Even if that Moriko girl scored higher than you, you'd still be the second." Brick said.
"UGH! Brick, you didn't listen to me at all! It was Momoko!" Himeko stopped just to stomp her elegantly clad foot.
"I still don't get your goal here." Brick turned to Himeko.
"I have to be the center of attention! I've said it so many times, yet you don't understand anything!" Himeko let go of Brick's arm. "I'm going to ignore you and don't even try to talk to me! Go, reflect your actions and then apologize!" Himeko stomped off. She went to the people she knew that would calm her. Momoko, Miyako and Kaoru.
"You won't believe what Brick did!" She went up to Momoko.
"Brick? I feel like I know this name…" Miyako muttered to herself.
"Wha'd he do?" Kaoru said with a mouthful of her anman. Himeko – in anger – quickly told exactly what happened.
"I thought everyone already knew what not to do around you." Momoko sighed.
"He knows, but he doesn't care at all!" Himeko crossed her arms.
"Anman?" Kaoru offered Himeko her remaining bun.
"I don't like sweet bean paste!" Himeko spoke a little bit louder and tears began to build up in her eyes.
"Hime, calm down. If he doesn't say sorry within a week, we'll send Kaoru to beat him up!" Momoko grinned at Himeko. Himeko gently wiped the moisture from her eyes and returned the smile.
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Inside the Utonium laboratory, Miyako finally said her worries out loud.
"Do you remember the RowdyRuff boys?" She began.
"Yep. What about 'em?" Kaoru said whilst trying to find the sports channel.
"Do you remember their names?" Miyako pressed them a little, to see if they connect it themselves.
"No, and I don't care." Kaoru said as she pushed the remote control's buttons.
"Something starting with a B, to match our theme, but I don't remember the names themselves." Momoko tapped her chin. She then furrowed her eyebrows and exclaimed:
"Brick, Boomer and Butch!" Miyako nodded at her friend's realization. Kaoru momentarily stopped pressing the remote's buttons and looked at her friends.
"Peach, was there any black light activity?" The three girls exclaimed in unison.
"No, there wasn't any light activity at all, Da-Wan!"
"So, they are normal humans now?"
"Not exactly. They are same as you now. They don't need the light to transform, from what I know. I'm not sure they know that, and it is probably better this way." Ken said, as he focused on assembling the pieces of a new robot, his recently started big project.
"Should we tell Hime?" Miyako said, ending the awkward silence.
"We should be honest, but we can't tell they are artificially created humans made to defeat us!" Momoko sighed. An awkward silence yet again filled the room. Kaoru rubbed her neck awkwardly, Momoko tapped her fingers on her thighs and Miyako looked around.
"Maaaybe we should observe first, or something? Ya know, instead of dropping the bomb without a test run." Kaoru said, a little bit hesitantly. The Pink and the Blue PowerPuffs smiled and nodded their heads in agreement.
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The next day, right after school, the three girls followed three boys that seemed to match the theme off RowdyRuff boys. It was harder to judge them on appearance alone. Brick lost his hat, but still sported the messy, red hair. His face became more masculine, and he was attractive. He was the second tallest, and the most muscular, of what Momoko could judge.
Boomer's blonde hair was cut slightly different, but he still had those signature curls at the sides. His face was rounder than his brothers', and he had larger eyes, but he still looked masculine. He was taller than average men his age, but he was still shorter than Brick and Butch. He was the leanest.
Butch still had his ponytail, but his bangs became more messy. They still covered the half of his face. He was the tallest brother.
Their chat was about Himeko. Brick's apology to Himeko backfired, because he didn't answer her when she asked the reason of his apology. Butch made fun of him, making remarks that even Boomer would be smarter than that. Boomer tried to help Brick, but he thought that the explanation for Himeko as written by Boomer is "incredibly stupid," and he should "shut the fuck up" since he never was in a relationship. After seeing Boomer's expression, Miyako wanted to go up to him and make him cheer up, but decided against it, since it would ruin everything.
The guys ended up at Mojo Jojo's ruin of a house. This is where the PowerPuffs had to go away, since they were almost certain that at least one of the home's members will recognize them. They headed themselves towards the Lab.
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She stopped in front of Professor Utonium's lab. She walked through the door after taking a big breath. She eventually found the place PowerPuff girls usually hung out. She was happy to see they were already here, as well as Prof. Utonium himself, and Ken, his son.
"Who the hell are you?" The person woman identified as Kaoru Matsubara asked rudely.
"My name is Hitomi Nakahara, I'm a superhero… hm, how should I say it… Breeder, maybe?" Hitomi said. "No, that sounded very wrong." She mumbled audibly.
"What do you want from us?" Momoko asked, with a little bit of hesitation.
"Short answer? I want you to marry and give birth to the RowdyRuff boys' children. Take it as a new PowerPuff girls' mission."
"WE NEED TO WHAT?" Kaoru spat out her soda.
"Just as I said. Go and have superhero babies with the RowdyRuffs." Hitomi shrugged. "The chance of you having superhero children with a normal human is less than 50 percent. That's why we need you to have children with them. To keep Tokyo city's superhero line. We wanted to go with this to the boys too, but they would keep from you like fire, probably. It's better than we chose these guys, believe me, otherwise you'd have to do it with someone from gangreen gang. Or even worse, Mojo Jojo. The Deadline for this mission will be before you stop being fertile, so no sweat. But you'll have to "seduce" them. I will come here monthly to get your reports." The woman continued. When she finished, she quickly began to leave. "Ciao~" She said as she left the room.
"Wait a fucking sec-" Kaoru tried to stop her, but the woman was already gone.
"L-Let's be positive! At least they're good-looking?" Miyako tried to cheer her friends up. Momoko made an agreeing gesture, while Kaoru buried her face in her hands.
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Boomer marched through the halls with earbuds in his ears. He had his music at full, and he currently was focused on his phone, so bumping into someone and making them fall was expected. He instantly turned his music off, and took out his earbuds. Boomer looked at the person that he bumped into. It was a girl clad in blue. It seemed to be her favorite. He had a feeling that he saw her somewhere before, but he dismissed it.
"Are you alright?" Boomer asked as he offered the girl a hand. She accepted it.
"Yes, I'm fine… I was just startled." She smiled at him.
"Boomer."
"Ah! Um, Miyako." She introduced herself back. Boomer shook the hand he already held, and then he let go.
"So, as an apology, maybe you want something from the vending machine?"
"No, I-Yes!"
"So, was that a yes, or…"
"Yes, yes, it was a yes." Miyako said nervously. Boomer laughed into his hand. She quickly got embarrassed and flushed a little. "I-I'd like strawberry milk…" She said quietly.
"Whatever my princess wishes." Boomer jokingly said and bowed like a butler. Miyako got even more embarrassed.
"Please don't call me that…" Miyako fiddled around with her skirt. Boomer grinned, and led the way to the vending machine.
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Butch dribbled the basketball and lazily threw it through the hoop. Kaoru glared at everything she could before approaching him. Butch looked at her and smirked.
"If it weren't for your tits, I could've thought that you're a really ugly man." He said and focused again on the basketball. Kaoru clenched her fist, making her knuckles white. She then counted to ten with deep breaths whilst slowly unclenching her fist. She opened her lips to make a comeback, but Butch saw through it.
"Don't even try to make a comeback. It's too late and it would surely be poor." Butch stopped and looked at Kaoru before throwing the ball through the hoop. Kaoru flushed in anger. She intended to perform a particularly painful move on him, but he stopped her with his hand before she moved.
"I was joking. Calm down, Matsubara. Before you ask, yes, I know your surname, you are pretty famous in school, you know. Hard to miss your name." Butch picked up the basketball. "I was expecting you looked sorta less… Cute? I know you want to look evil, dark and menacing, but you look like a tiny ill-mannered animal." He threw the ball and watched it go through the hoop. Kaoru was red-faced from anger and embarrassment.
"I-I'M NOT CUTE! SHUT THE FUCK UP!"
"Aaand you did exactly the thing I expected." Butch smirked at Kaoru. He then rolled his sleeve up and looked at his clock. "I gotta go. I'll be here tomorrow at the same time, if you want to talk." He picked up his bag and slowly walked to the entrance. When he passed Kaoru, he kissed her on the cheek and ruffled her hair. Before getting angry, Kaoru thought just: 'What the fuck just happened'.
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Momoko paced around a small area while waiting for Himeko. She was getting really nervous when Himeko approached her, sipping on her bubble tea.
"Himeko! Uhm… There's a thing about Brick…" Momoko began.
"What is it? Did he cheat on me or something?"
"No! It's not it. I-Uh. I don't think you should date him?"
"Why? Why are you so against us?"
"It's that he's a criminal! And he had a lot of lovers!"
"Momoko, please tell me what's going on."
"Okay." Momoko inhaled. "He is a total asshole that will hurt you, so end it before you completely fall for him, Himeko."
"I know that he's the most attractive of the Jojo brothers, but you have to let it go." Himeko placed a hand on Momoko's shoulder.
"Wha-That's not what I meant!" Momoko protested. Himeko nodded sympathetically.
"Sure, Momo. Is that all? I have to meet up with Brick, he said he's going to seriously apologize this time." Himeko said, glancing at her watch.
"You don't understand how important it is to dump him, Himeko."
"Momo, please stop your jealousy, you're not the type who does that."
"ARGH! Forget it, Himeko!" Momoko exclaimed, and stomped off, mumbling something to herself.
"I wonder if I wasn't delicate enough…" Himeko commented out loud, shrugged, and left for her date.
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If you expected a bigger chapter, I'm sorry. I've rewritten this so many times that I'm not even comfortable with this version, and I have to really hold in to stop my urge to rewrite this too. Writer's block was a giant bitch.
Levithe.