Amegakure High
Note: This is the new Amegakure High. It has the same idea with maybe a little bit different stuff thrown in and new characters besides the Akatsuki. If an Akatsuki member doesn't have a last name I made some up.
Chapter 1 End of Summer
"Ugh! I can't believe summer is over!" Tobi whined to Deidara walking up the front steps where the Akatsuki met every day before school. He sat down at his usual spot on the edge. Everyone was there and they had about While they waited they talked about how their summer went. "I had to listen to my sister blab on and on about you Itachi!" Pein complained chewing on a pen. Itachi was admired by most of the girls in the school. "He can't help it he's irresistible," Deidara teased. Itachi glared at the blonde and Pein threw the pen he was chewing at him. "Woah guys turn around!" Kisame said. They turned around and saw a girl get out of a silver Camero. She stepped out and Kisame's jaw hit the ground. "That must be the new girl everyone was talking about," Pein said.
She had on a tight Invader Zim tee-shirt with a pair of black jeans with holes in the knees. She had a pair of fishnet gloves on and her long black hair was straightened with a green stripe.
She walked up the steps past them and went inside. Then the bell rang signaling that it was time for the first day of school.
"Hidan you were right that girl is hot!" Kisame told Hidan at lunch. Hidan smirked looking proud and said "I fucking told you so!" Deidara looked over at the girl and saw her eating lunch alone. "Must be a tough first day," he said. Tobi jumped up and ran over to the girl. He came back dragging her by the wrist. "Tobi thought the pretty girl you guys are talking about should come sit with us," he said. The girl sat down by Konan and began to eat her lunch. "What the hell are you all staring at me for?" she asked. Tobi, being the idiot he clearly is stated, "Oh, all of us think you're hot!" She rolled her eyes and finished her lunch.
"Ugh, look at her soaking up all the attention." Izumi said. Her friends Kana and Reika both looked and laughed. "Why did they invite her over there?" Reika scoffed.
"She's probably trying to get the Akatsuki into her pants," Kana stated a little loudly. Then the girl got up and walked up to them. She glared at the trio and screamed "You little You don't even know me! I've been here half a day and you little skanks are already talking trash about me! You three look like sluts, and I bet you've at least tried to get every guy in school into your pants! Jiguko e ike kono ama!"
"Keira Sachi stop it this instant!" The principle yelled.
Note: DUN DUN DUN! I hope this revised story was better. Review!
Jiguko e ike kono ama means go to hell you bitch in Japanese. I may be wrong though if I am please tell me the right way to say it.