Hey guys, this is my first fan fiction. Please read and review. I only want 1 review for now. Whoever reviews will get a name of their choice in my story. PLEASE!
Disclaimer: I'm a girl, whose still in school. Do I seem like James Patterson?
1. Prologue
No time for formal introductions. I'm Max.
Oh no, there he is! He was gaining on me. I still didn't know exactly what I was running from. All I knew was that a suspicious man with a huge bodyguard next to him, was stalking me. I was looking back at my pursuer, not straight ahead. I ran headfirst into a pole. I'm not kidding, this looked exactly like one of those old cartoon movies from the 1950's.
Before I knew it, my legs had given way, leaving me with a concussion and a hurt ego. In hindsight, I should have watched where I was going. After all that training, I thought, all those years of hard work, I don't die defending myself or my friends. I die from running into a pole…
An evil looking man comes into my view. "Well, well. If it isn't the infamous Maximum Ride. I never thought this day would come. Outsmarted by a pole, Max. Shame, shame, shame," my pursuer smirked.
Suddenly I realized where I had seen this man. He was the wildest street fighter in the country. He was known as Dragon, after the giant tattoo of one on his left arm. This could not be good.
Wait! Freeze Frame! Now I know this doesn't like a good situation right now, but…yeah, you're right it's not a good situation.
However, let me go back. All the way back to the beginning…
What do you think? Depending on what the reviews say, I might stop now. However, if I get past Chapter 5, I promise I won't quit like all those other quitters out there.
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