Well I'm back with the first chapter of the Konoha's Apparition rewrite. Hope everyone likes it, if not well that's ok.
Disclaimer: I do not own Naruto.
Jutsu
Thought
Nathan Ordonez was sitting in a cave that was formed out of large pieces of rubble, he had silver hair that extended down to his chin. His eyes were grey and showed almost no emotion, he was of average height and average body build. He was wearing a black sleeve-less shirt and a thin black belt that held up a pair of grey baggy pants. His arms were wrapped up in bandages from his shoulders to his wrists. His shoes that he was wearing were basic black and grey tennis shoes.
There were small openings in the rubble that let light shine through. He was looking at a picture of him and his girlfriend. A beautiful, curly, blond, haired woman with a big loving smile and blue eyes. She was wearing a plain white shirt that was obviously too large for her and that was the extent of what the picture showed.
Sounds of a battle could be heard coming from outside the rubble, roars of some very large creature and the sound of explosions, but Nathan paid no mind to it. He just kept staring at the picture. A single tear crept from the edge of his emotion-less eye and traveled down his cheek. Nathan raised his hand and wiped away the tear and stared at his hand as if crying was something new to him. Suddenly a large chunk of the rubble moved away creating an entrance into the cave and letting in a large amount of light.
"Are you done sulking down there?" A voice said from outside the entrance.
"Why do you care?" Nathan replied while quickly stuffing the picture into his pocket.
"Because you're my cousin, that's why." The voice said as a man came into view.
The man was just above average height and was wearing a grey shirt with a small black vest. He was also wearing blue, baggy jeans that were being held up by a brown belt. He also had chin length hair but instead of silver it was black. His eyes were a dark brown but with a hint of green at the edges. His shoes were the exact same as Nathans but just slightly bigger.
"Whatever Seth." Nathan said in a very monotone voice. "Shouldn't you be out there fighting?"
"Shouldn't you?" Seth replied as he walked over and sat down next to Nathan. "Anyway, Drake and David have it handled, and I saw you put the picture away. I know you still have feelings for her and we will get her back."
"She's gone Seth. We have no idea where they might have taken her."
"Don't worry, we will find her. Even if we have to kill everything that gets in our way."
"Maybe you're right, but what if…."
"What if, what?"
"Never mind that, have you noticed that it's gotten quiet?"
During their conversation the sounds of the creatures and the explosions had ceased.
"Hold on I'll see why." Seth said as he closed his eyes. When he reopened them Seth had a very serious and angry look on his face. "He's here." Seth stood up and closed both hands into a fist cracking his knuckles in the process.
"This time we end it." Nathan said as he also stood up. Both him and Seth walked outside of the cave onto a street.
They were walking through a city that was now a wasteland. Most of the buildings in the city were destroyed and any that were still standing looked like they could come crashing down at any minute. The city was hardly recognizable but there were tell tale signs of what city they were in. Whether it be the street signs that were among the wreckage or the maps of New York City that were blowing in the wind.
They were nearing a large field that was once filled with plant life but was now a large patch of scorched earth. In the center of the field was something that looked like a Mayan pyramid. The weird thing about was not only that it was in the center of what used to be central park but that it was also slowly rising from the ground. Standing at the foot of the pyramid was a man dressed in a long black trench coat and black pants. He had long, dark blue hair that was combed over to one side of his head; his eyes were the exact same color of his hair. He had his hands crossed behind his back and was facing the rising pyramid and had a look on his face, almost like a man that was admiring his own handy work.
Squatting down next to him, with his back turned towards the pyramid was a hideous creature. It looked like a skeleton with skin stretched over its bones. It had long arms and legs and, its head is covered in small spikes with four large ones on its chin. It had no lips so you could see its long, yellow pointed teeth. Its eyes were a bright, glowing yellow, almost the same color of its teeth. It was growling and kept switching its gaze between two men that were standing in front of it.
One of them had shoulder length, curly, black hair; he had a goatee that is the same color. He had dark tanned skin and brown eyes and was an inch taller than Seth. He was wearing a white skin tight shirt with blue jeans held up by a black belt with a pair of brown sneakers. The other had short, dirty blond hair that was spiked up, and bright blue eyes and was just as tall as Seth. He was wearing an orange t-shirt with dark blue jeans. He was wearing white sneakers with hand drawn flames on them. Seth and Nathan quickly walked up to join them, Nathans facial expression quickly changed from emotionless to absolutely pissed off the moment he laid eyes on the blue haired man.
"Aw, so the two of you finally decided to grace us with your presence." The blue haired one said without even turning around.
"Where's Elizabeth Teirn!" Nathan screamed.
"Oh, don't worry, you will see her again." Teirn answered. "But I can't guaranty that both of you will be alive."
"GIVE HER BACK!" Nathan shouted before leaping at Teirn.
The yellow eyed demon quickly stepped in between the two and swung its claws at Nathan hitting him in the chest leaving four deep cuts.
Teirn never turned around as he snapped his fingers and Nathan was sent flying back to be caught by the blond haired man.
"Thanks Drake." Nathan said as he stood up, he quickly placed his hand over the cuts and they started to heal until not even a scar was left.
"Still as foolish as ever I see." Teirn said.
"Why don't you fight us yourself instead of having your lapdog fight for you, you coward." Drake yelled.
"You know maybe you're right." Teirn said as he quickly turned around. "But first, Ocrais, why don't you run along and find me a human that has an exceptionally powerful soul?"
Ocrais simply nodded his head and grunted before his entire body turned to smoke and it flew off towards the city at an incredible speed.
"Oh no you don't!" Drake yelled before he quickly spun around in a circle and shot forward in a ball of flame towards Ocrais. Suddenly red lightning shot down from the sky and struck the ground in Drakes path leaving a wall of pure black flames, stopping Drake in his path.
"Oh no you don't you pest. Your fight is with me." Teirn said as the fire spread creating a circle around the pyramid trapping them all within.
Seth clenched his fist and a large chunk of the ground behind him rose up and shot toward Teirn as Nathan jumped following the boulder. Teirn just simply raised his hand and stopped the boulder the moment it hit his hand without even being pushed back. Nathan quickly punched the boulder breaking it into several large chunks and continued on until his fist collided with Teirn's hand. The punch forced Teirn to slide across the ground until his feet pressed against the bottom of the pyramid.
"You're gonna have to try much harder than that to defeat me." Teirn said as he took a step onto the pyramid and started to walk up it backwards.
Drake quickly spun around and flew toward Teirn in a ball of fire but once again Teirn raised his hand and stopped Drake as he got near. When Drake landed on the steps he quickly threw a punch at Teirn's face but Teirn calmly swatted his hand away. Drake continued to throw punches and kicks to his face and stomach just hoping that one would land a hit but Teirn was simply blocking him with one hand. Seth created a pillar of earth that shot him into the air, a large, almost five foot long sword appeared in his hands as he came crashing down on top of Teirn causing a large dust cloud to kick up. Once the dust settled Teirn was gone and Seth's blade was imbedded down to the hilt in the pyramid with Drake lying down on his back with his head right next to the blade.
"Holy shit man!" Drake yelled.
"Sorry." Seth answered as he reached his hand down to help Drake up.
"It's ok, but where did he go?" Drake asked as he looked around.
"He's up there." Nathan said as both him and the black haired man appeared next to them.
"Hey David, why aren't you fighting with us man?" Drake asked the black haired man.
"I was looking for a good opening to attack." David answered.
"Well can you look faster?" Drake responded.
"Will you two shut up so we can go kill that guy?" Seth yelled.
"Fine, Nathan if you would." Drake said as he, David and Seth put their hands on Nathans shoulders. Suddenly all of them vanished and reappeared at the top of the pyramid. What they saw they never expected. Teirn was standing next to a tall wooden pole that looked had a blond haired woman tied up to it, she was wearing a pink I love New York t-shirt with baggy jeans. Once Nathan's eyes came to rest on her they widened.
"Elizabeth." Nathan said.
"Yes Elizabeth, your beautiful fiancée." Teirn said as he grabbed her face and lifted her head while moving her hair out of her face. Her face was covered in bruises and small scratches. "You know that she had complete faith in you, that you would save her and kill me, but we both know that that's not going to happen."
"Nathan, I knew you would come for me." Elizabeth said.
"Silence mongrel!" Teirn said as he slapped her adding three fresh scratches.
"DON'T TOUCH HER!" Nathan yelled before appearing beside Teirn and delivering a kick to Teirn's chest. Teirn didn't even move an inch. He slowly turned his head and looked straight into Nathans eyes. Then faster than anyone could see Teirn kicked Nathan. The kick was so powerful that it not only sent Nathan off the edge of the pyramid, but across the park into one of the few buildings that was standing at the edge causing it to collapse. Teirn then slowly turned around and looked toward the others, his eyes now a dark red, but before he could move Nathan reappeared next to Drake.
"So you survived." Teirn said, his voice now several octaves deeper, almost like a growl. "I'll have to fix that."
But before he could take a step Ocrais jumped out from behind Nathan and landed next to Teirn. He was carrying a woman in one of his hands that had short black hair with brown highlights. She was wearing a green baggy shirt and black jeans.
"Master I brought someone that has exactly what you wanted and it's someone that is very important to a certain earth user." Ocrais said in a very deep, guttural voice.
"YOU PUT HER DOWN NOW!" Seth yelled while taking several steps forward.
"Oh yes your precious Ashley." Teirn said mockingly, his voice now back to normal. "She will do perfectly for what I plan to do."
"I SAID PUT HER DOWN!" Seth yelled.
"Oh we will, after she has done what I need her to do." Teirn said as he grabbed the back of her head and tilted it back showing her face. Her eyes and mouth were closed showing that she was unconscious. "Now Ocrais if you would please take her soul."
"NO!" Seth screamed before taking off towards Teirn and Ocrais. Before he could reach them Teirn pointed his fingers at the ground in front of Seth and red lightning struck that point stopping Seth in his tracks.
"Now, now, I'll have none of that." Teirn said as he turned his head towards Ocrais. "Go ahead."
Ocrais raised his hand and shoved into her chest and pulled it back out. In his hand was a bright, white light, her soul. He breathed into it and its color went from white to red. Ocrais threw her body off of the pyramid where it landed on the ground and a pool of blood started to form. Seth was speech less as he watched the love of his life just die in front of him, Seth bowed his head and hunched his shoulder as he started to breath faster and through his teeth.
"Seth, you need to just calm down." Drake said. "Seth, can you hear me?"
Seth slowly turned his head towards him and it became obvious that he was not himself. His canine teeth started to elongate into fangs and the pupils of his eyes started to expand until they took up his entire eye. Seth looked away before raising his head and roared. A large shockwave shot out from Seth and knocked everyone back but Teirn and Ocrais. Seth jumped forward and before they knew it Seth was standing in front of Ocrais and Teirn with a fist raised, but he couldn't do anything before Teirn grabbed his throat and threw him to the ground. On impact Seth hit his head and was knocked out.
"Finish it." Teirn said. Ocrais then threw the soul where it stopped in between the two groups and started to expand. Suddenly a very powerful wind picked up and sucked Seth towards the soul where he seemed to disintegrate and get absorbed into the soul. Then the wooden pole broke and started to get sucked in.
"Nathan help!" Elizabeth yelled.
"Elizabeth!" Nathan screamed before jumping and grabbing her by the waist as they were both sucked into the soul. Then as suddenly as it started it stopped and the soul vanished.
"That didn't go as expected." Teirn said with a very disgusted look on his face. "Well we will find a way to make up for your mistake!" Teirn then swiftly slapped Ocrais sending him off the pyramid.
"Now, what to do with you two?" Teirn said before his eyes turned red and he took a step toward Drake and David.
Scene Change
Nathan had his eyes closed he felt a strong wind rushing past him and he felt Elizabeth in his arms.
"Nathan, wake up!" Elizabeth yelled. "Please wake up!"
Nathan quickly opened his eyes to see them falling. They were high in the sky and plummeting fast. He quickly looked around and all he could see were clouds when he looked down he saw Seth still unconscious about twenty feet below him. Nathan quickly reached up and tore the ropes from around Elizabeth's wrists and kicked away what was left of the wooden pole before going into a dive to try and catch up to Seth. After several failed attempts he finally got close enough to grab his arm. After he grabbed him he looked down and finally realized just how far they had fallen. He could now see a large forest surround what looked like a small town that had a large mountain at its edge.
"Hey, Seth!" Nathan yelled while shaking him.
"Huh, what?" Seth said before looking down. "HOLY SHIT! WHAT THE HELLS GOING ON!"
"I don't know but at least we're not dead." Nathan answered. "Keep a hold of me I have a plan for us to survive this."
"It better work." Seth said.
"It's Nathan, of course it will work." Elizabeth said.
"Let's hope you're right."
After a few more seconds of falling Nathan could make out each individual building that was in the town and then they all felt something strange, like they passed through a small layer of water.
Scene Change
Underneath the mountain was a room that had a large white orb floating in the center with three men in white robes sitting around it. Suddenly at the very top of the orb a large ripple appeared. The man in the center opened his eyes and looked over to the group of men dressed in green flak jackets with dark blue sleeves and pants. Each one had a band with a small metal plate that had the inscription of a leaf on it located at different spots on each person's figure.
"We have an intruder!" The man in the robe said. "Their coming down directly in the center of the village!"
"Got it." One of the men said before they all vanished into a puff of smoke.
Scene change
Once they were just a few hundred feet from the ground Nathan closed his eyes and they vanished to reappear on the streets below. Several people that were walking along stopped to stare at the people wearing strange clothes that just seemed to materialize out of nothing.
"Where are we?" Seth asked as he looked around.
"I don't know." Nathan said as he set Elizabeth down on her feet but kept his arm around her waist.
Suddenly several men wearing what looked like silver flak jackets and arm guards with dark grey sleeves and pants landed on the ground surrounding them. Each one was wearing a mask so they couldn't see their faces. Seth and Nathan quickly moved behind each other keeping Elizabeth in between them.
"What do you think they want?" Seth asked.
"I don't know but I don't think it's to welcome us." Nathan answered as the people surrounding them all pulled out small swords from sheaths on their backs.
Well there's the first chapter of the rewrite plz leave a review on what you think and I will have new chapters coming out soon
But for now, ShoJumpfan out.