Okay. First one I've written and I need feedback… please? *Big puppy eyes*
Disclaimer: I don't own anything off soul reaver, or blood omen. I never worked for the guys who made any of the games and I have made no money off it. I only write the stories coz I like the games okay?
Prologue
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Serena couldn't wait. It was approximately nine days and 3 hours until the end of year prom began and she was tingling with excitement. Her hair was booked, her dress was bought, and the accessories were being kept in her wardrobe.
All she needed now was a date. She leant onto her locker and watched as everyone went by, not looking at anything in particular.
"Hey, Serena!"
She focused and looked down the corridor as July walked along, her usual harem of men following her. She gave her bag to the nearest one and hugged Serena. "What's wrong? You look so… so distant…"
Serena shrugged, "I guess its prom blues… I don't have a date."
July looked at her seriously, her own fiery brown eyes staring into Serena's. "No one asked you?".
Serena shook her head "No… I've been asked plenty of times, just… not the guys I'd like to go with." July giggled,
"Have you thought of asking guys? It works you know…" Serena sighed, and brushed her hair off her face.
"I told you… there's no-one I want to go with…" She picked up her own bag and wandered off, climbing the stairs to the dorms. She unlocked her room and flopped onto her bed, switching on her music. The song that came on was 'Isobel' by dido. She sat up and walked over to her desk, opening her diary.
'May 8th.
I don't think that I should go to the prom. It's just too depressing. July tried to make me feel better, but it didn't work, and here I am, writing to you again.
I think its just the concept of leaving school getting to me.'
She stood up and hid the book under her mattress, falling asleep on her bed.
***
Hey… is she alive?
'nyghh…'
Certainly sounds it… give her a poke…
"OW!"
Serena sat up and rubbed her face. She noticed Hagen and Oxfife sat next to her. It was nighttime and she curled up into a sitting position. Hagen passed her a flask.
"How are you commander?" She took it and drank a lot, wiping her face,
"Fine… I am a little sleepy though… What happened?" She passed the flask back, and Oxfife sat next to her.
"You were ambushed by about twelve vampires." She gasped,
"Twelve??? I didn't think there were that many…" Hagen sighed,
"Commander, did they hurt you or something?" She shook her head.
"No, of course not."
"Why were you… bleeding?" She examined her tunic, covered in blood.
"I don't have a wound… maybe it was vampire blood." Hagen shook his head,
"Why were you sleeping when we found you?" She shook her head, and sighed.
"I don't know… And why suddenly are you asking such things?"
Serena… Serena wake up!
The commander fell to the floor once more, her helmet preventing her from getting hurt.
"Serena… Are you awake?" She sat up and unlocked her door, letting July in.
"Serena I'm sorry I…" Serena stared 'through' July, which seemed to be freaking her out. "Serena… Serena you're freaking me out."
"I just had a really weird dream…"
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What do you think? Please R & R, pleasey-weasey ^.^
Disclaimer: I don't own anything off soul reaver, or blood omen. I never worked for the guys who made any of the games and I have made no money off it. I only write the stories coz I like the games okay?
Prologue
~~~~~~
Serena couldn't wait. It was approximately nine days and 3 hours until the end of year prom began and she was tingling with excitement. Her hair was booked, her dress was bought, and the accessories were being kept in her wardrobe.
All she needed now was a date. She leant onto her locker and watched as everyone went by, not looking at anything in particular.
"Hey, Serena!"
She focused and looked down the corridor as July walked along, her usual harem of men following her. She gave her bag to the nearest one and hugged Serena. "What's wrong? You look so… so distant…"
Serena shrugged, "I guess its prom blues… I don't have a date."
July looked at her seriously, her own fiery brown eyes staring into Serena's. "No one asked you?".
Serena shook her head "No… I've been asked plenty of times, just… not the guys I'd like to go with." July giggled,
"Have you thought of asking guys? It works you know…" Serena sighed, and brushed her hair off her face.
"I told you… there's no-one I want to go with…" She picked up her own bag and wandered off, climbing the stairs to the dorms. She unlocked her room and flopped onto her bed, switching on her music. The song that came on was 'Isobel' by dido. She sat up and walked over to her desk, opening her diary.
'May 8th.
I don't think that I should go to the prom. It's just too depressing. July tried to make me feel better, but it didn't work, and here I am, writing to you again.
I think its just the concept of leaving school getting to me.'
She stood up and hid the book under her mattress, falling asleep on her bed.
***
Hey… is she alive?
'nyghh…'
Certainly sounds it… give her a poke…
"OW!"
Serena sat up and rubbed her face. She noticed Hagen and Oxfife sat next to her. It was nighttime and she curled up into a sitting position. Hagen passed her a flask.
"How are you commander?" She took it and drank a lot, wiping her face,
"Fine… I am a little sleepy though… What happened?" She passed the flask back, and Oxfife sat next to her.
"You were ambushed by about twelve vampires." She gasped,
"Twelve??? I didn't think there were that many…" Hagen sighed,
"Commander, did they hurt you or something?" She shook her head.
"No, of course not."
"Why were you… bleeding?" She examined her tunic, covered in blood.
"I don't have a wound… maybe it was vampire blood." Hagen shook his head,
"Why were you sleeping when we found you?" She shook her head, and sighed.
"I don't know… And why suddenly are you asking such things?"
Serena… Serena wake up!
The commander fell to the floor once more, her helmet preventing her from getting hurt.
"Serena… Are you awake?" She sat up and unlocked her door, letting July in.
"Serena I'm sorry I…" Serena stared 'through' July, which seemed to be freaking her out. "Serena… Serena you're freaking me out."
"I just had a really weird dream…"
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What do you think? Please R & R, pleasey-weasey ^.^