Peter Hayes: Abnegation Initiate

Author's note: I planned on writing this story as a future story, but since I been getting requests to write this story, I will start on it. I have this story in mind because I hate Peter and I want to torment him.

Summary: Peter Hayes always dreamed about going to Dauntless and very confident that he would be able to allow his blood to drop on the Dauntless coals with his eyes closed. What he did not realize that he accidently dropped his blood on the Abnegation stones. Story will be Peter's POV


Chapter 1

Today is the day that I will choose my new faction. My parents knew that I don't fit with Candor because they knew how much I like beating people up and thought that Dauntless was a good fit me for me. Everything about me says Dauntless, even my aptitude test says Dauntless. I'm Dauntless to the core.

Each year, a different faction leader hosts the Choosing Ceremony, where we pick our new factions. Last year, it was the hippy Johanna Reyes and this year, it's the Stiff's leader's turn. I don't bother learning anything about Stiffs, well because they don't deserve to live. I bet that they are hiding the food that was supposed to be for the factionless to deprive the other factions from it so that they lived the same way as Stiffs.

"Hello, I am Andrew Prior, and since Marcus Eaton could not make it because his son and my daughter are having their first child, he asked me to oversee the Choosing Ceremony on his behalf," one of the Stiff council members said.

The Stiff continued, "Ever since the founding of the faction systems, our founders gave us the option to choose our own factions. No longer you must live under your parents' factions, but the factions of your own choosing. Some of you might choose your birth factions, like both my children did, but some of you would choose your own factions. Your factions are where you belong. Faction before blood."

We repeat the motto, "Faction before blood."

Mom grasped my hand and told me that she and Dad will visit me during Visiting Day and any other special occasions.

The names been called up. Each name called, each made a choice. Some choose their birth factions, others choose new factions. Of course, every Stiff decided to stay in Stiffville. There is no way in hell I would go to Stiffville.

I watched as my minion Drew picked Dauntless. Drew knew of my plan of joining Dauntless and becoming Dauntless leader, so he became my minion. Molly, she's been practically been in love with me since lower levels and I use that to my advantage. I don't love her at all, just using her. Thankfully, she is too blind to see that.

Slowly, it's getting to the point where my name is being called.

"Peter Hayes"

This is the moment. This is where I will become a Dauntless initiate. I picked up the knife with my right hand and made a cut on my left hand. I closed my eyes and placed my hand over the Dauntless bowl.

I didn't hear the Dauntless coals sizzle at all, but I heard another faction name being called.

"Abnegation"

What the hell? I'm supposed to become Dauntless, not a Stiff. According to the law, which faction bowl has our drop of blood is the faction that we join. There are no do overs at all.

My blood dropped on the Stiff stones, so a Stiff I must become. I went over to the Stiff section and sat down and continued watching the ceremony. A few names later, Molly joined me to Stiffville. At least Drew don't have to become a Stiff.

My life as a Stiff initiate is about to begin.